Moon Magician Shalltear

"Yes……"

Finish this summary (must see)

This is the end of the main storyline, but I feel that it ended a little too hastily.I even thought that I could write a lot later, but after thinking about it carefully... I found that there was nothing to write about.

Because at the beginning, there were only three worlds reserved, the first was Xingyue who traveled through the past, the second was Shalltear's home (the king of the undead), and the third was the real home.

I know that there may be a possible extra story to write in the middle, which is a plot about the Tidecaller.

The story takes place in the Aegean Sea, and tells the story of a family named Tidecallers, who have been waiting for a mysterious temple in Crete.

In this world II and Gray are not talking about an angel, but a statue, the statue of the blonde Shalltear.Legendary statues of gods handed down from the gods of Greece...

II after seeing this statue.The story of leaving behind all the work to find the so-called 'Athena' and finally awakening the sleeping Medea.

With twists and turns in the middle, II almost died in the sea; almost died in the tidecaller; almost died in Medea.

In the end, he overcame various difficulties and found a new job for himself.

The story is vivid and the ending is thought-provoking.

It played a role in linking the previous and the next. While explaining Junzai Athena, it also reunited Medea and Xia Jiu. (Actually, I wrote about Medea in the carnival volume, but it was only a brief introduction. There is also a side story that can be written in the cutscene, but it is too difficult.)

I feel that if I write a side story, it has seriously deviated from the main line. Even if I write it, no one will read it.

Although I always feel like something is missing, my outline has come to an end.During this period of time, I found that I have summarized four problems, all of which are very serious problems, and there are many small problems that I will not write out one by one.

First, the lack of pen power

This book has been carefully designed.From the beginning, I planned to write a fanfic, and it must be a website with a lot of comments and a lot of responses. (Choose to choose is the best here)

After I made my choice, I started to choose what kind of doujin to write about.Among the bookers, there is no doubt that the most popular month is the model month.

At the time of writing, the King of the Undead was the most popular.In addition, at that time, someone told me that bookers would just implement one word, 'dirty'.

Saying that word, and combining it with the King of the Undead, I thought of Shalltear.It can be said that this novel is a standard business plan.

Then I went on with the plan and started to keep refining the outline.

I don't want to talk about superfluous, it's too long... It took me three months before writing the outline.

Even if it is so carefully designed, a well-coded outline can be written from head to toe!My pen power is also bad! ! !

Although I'm a novice, I don't think I've tried hard enough...

[-]. Incentive events

In fact, there are very few during this time, and the quality is also very low.But in fact, the time I spend coding on the computer is no less than the time I used to double-shift every day, or even more, so that now I am exhausted.

But... every time I click on the word, I have no motivation to write, and every word is suffering.The only reason I keep writing is the promises I once made.I never supervise.

Although I am a parallel importer, I at least have a tenacious heart.As long as my heart is still beating, I will never give up.

Originally, I should have finished writing it at the beginning of last month as planned, but it has been dragged on until now, and I feel that I have no love for it.

As I said earlier, this book is well designed.

From "Shalltear the Magician of the Moon", the title of the book begins.

In the very short name, there are three cool points.As the motivating event of the title, it will deeply hook readers' hearts.

The style of the introduction is also very humorous, and at the same time foreshadows the pleasant things that will happen in the future.

Each paragraph in the text is designed with a small motivating event to provoke your desire to read on.

But... I found that I designed so many cool points, so many motivational events.But there is only one Incentive Event that wasn't designed - and that was my own Incentive Event.

Like a creator god, I carefully designed everything in this world, but in the end I didn't take myself into account.I found out... that people are really not machines.

Writing a book is a very boring thing. Before writing it down, I can watch your happy comments as a source of motivation.When the second volume collapsed, I had lost my only motivation.

I'm not a fan of fate, and I watched King of the Undead just because it was fantasy.

In other words, at this time, I have lost any desire to write.Every time I open Word, there are three words that appear in my mind 'I don't want to write'.

Gritting my teeth and insisting on writing, I felt my brain groggy, as if I was depressed.

So when writing something in the future, be sure to write something that interests you, or at least find a source of motivation for yourself.

Third, over-emphasis on comments

I read every comment, even every post.It's just a few times, but I remember them all in my heart.

It will even change the outline of the outline because of the words posted here. Originally, the King of the Undead Scroll was placed at the very back.But because a lot of readers at that time wanted to see King of the Undead, I changed the outline.

I have to say, it was a stupid decision!

This led to the collapse of my second volume. It was originally a well-designed plot, and it felt very embarrassing and inconsistent.

Even if the king of the undead is not easy to write, at least it will not collapse until the third volume.

But... it's okay, because one day I'll write the Undead King volume in the introduction.It must come when it collapses, sooner or later.

I didn't hide it, and faced all mistakes sincerely.Seeing this, do you think I'm stupid?

So feel free to give me suggestions in the future... I will definitely accept it with humility. (But I just don't change it~)

Fourth, the ability to take up the line is poor

Even I myself felt that the line was too rushed, but I didn't know what to do.Because I myself am writing for the first time and have no experience at all.

I read it myself and felt a little unfinished, but I really don't know how to continue.The plot starts from the first word written by the pen, and the ending is already written in the outline.

In the book, I used the mouth of Tsukiyoin Shinkan to say a sentence.

In the original setting, if you deny the truth of Tsukiyoin, it will become a reality, and then borrow Xia Jiu's words to deny the concept of 'not a character who came out of the story' as a foreshadowing.

In the end, at the end, Altaïr, who peeped into Xia Jiu's heart, found the truth of this world.And let Xia Jiu turn into another color—Black Jiu. (Primary colors, red, blue, purple, gold, silver, black. I don't seem to have ⑨ yet.)

Xia Jiu is a passive protagonist. Although it will make people feel that the character is very plain, it can avoid many, many poisonous points.

It stands to reason that there should be no problem at all, but my ability to take up the line is really poor, and I am blind to such a carefully designed situation.

Okay... After doing this self-examination, I feel... I feel more guilty about the people who supported me.

I once said that I would stop writing fangirls because I really wanted to write originals.The outline has been prepared for a long time (in years. For example, I do have the outline of "Moon of the Heart", but Amy is actually just a supporting role).

Writing doujin is just a test of one's own level, but before you know it, you really write your feelings.

It's just... After I finished writing, I found that there are really too many problems. Every time I look at your post, I always feel very guilty, indescribable, as if I have lost my soul.

At this level, I have always fantasized about writing originals?Simply ridiculous!It's probably an arrogant player who thinks he has the level of a king. In fact, maybe... my real level is only bronze--isn't it?

So... at least write an article that can be read, and then consider original things.

Originally, I still carefully designed a cool article, the title of the book is "Red World Demon King Jin Shining"

Here is the introduction:

[A long, long time ago, Yu Yue traveled to the world of Xingyue.And it became Gilgamesh, the wedge of the sky that the gods tied to mankind.

After fighting against the gods for countless years, he succeeded in letting mankind break through the shackles of fate and get rid of the shackles of the gods.He rests in peace...

Yes, he did not choose to take the immortality medicine, but chose to leave when the people were living and working in peace and contentment.

He was tired of living in the world, and working overtime without sleep for hundreds of years made him really tired and tired.

Although he lifted the weak human race to the top of the world during the Age of Gods, he could start enjoying a peaceful life.But he still chose to leave the world with a smile.

Until he opened his eyes again... He thought he would go to the underworld, but found himself in the red world and became a demon king of the red world.

"Ahahaha! The bastards of the red world... dare to devour humans?!"

He raised his head proudly, his scarlet eyes were like a burning flame, "The bastard should lie on the ground, look at the filthy dirt, and wait for annihilation!"]

Would you be interested in reading this kind of introduction and title?

But I think the attraction is enough, but such a well-designed opening is easy to write.

The original plan was to use Jin Shining's love for human beings and the behavior of the Red World Demon King's devouring human beings as conflict points.

Then collect the Noble Phantasms of the Red World as a branch line, because the Noble Phantasms of the Red World are related to humans.It just so happens that, as the king of mankind, Gilgamesh will never sit idly by.

But the idea is beautiful, I'm not sure if I can write it well, although I think the idea is very good (Bronze contestant thinks).

However, there are as few fans of 'Bright Eyed Shana' as the King of the Undead.You must know that Shana is the king of cuteness, the third consecutive company of nails, and the model of arrogance.There aren't many comrades like this, so I really don't dare to write.

The only thing I can be sure of right now is that I can write fate well, and I'm not even sure if other types of works like Tsukihime can write well.

You must know that I don't like any of the characters in fate, I just like the heavy style of the work.I know that the King of the Undead is actually a lot more than Type Moon.I haven't even played any games in the fate series!

Just two days ago, I downloaded the first game fgo that belongs to me on my mobile phone, and wanted to see the plot inside.

By the way, I want to relax in the case of this stuck text.But practice has proved that it is useless at all!I didn't want to play games at all, and it made me stuck even more.

(It's just to relax a bit when drawing cards. For example, a single dangling hair. As a result, before it could be used, Attila and Kong Ming came with Karna, and the dog food could not be fed in time, and it was very tiring to brush.

Countless big heroes are dead and can't be brushed!And Stella's voice has been deeply imprinted in my mind during this period of time.You really don't deceive me in the post, the big hero is so fucking easy to use!

But then again... is Jack any good? )

I also found the reason why there are so many fate fans.

- Complete setting and highly malleable background.

So I plan to write another article to continue the fandom of fate.

The title of the book is "This Is My Holy Grail War"

(The novel was published before this book was written, and it is not a violation of the oath. So you are not allowed to brush the real fragrance, I am not, I am not!)

Originally, I wanted to continue like this one, preferring the gimmicky title of the book-Holy Grail War Player.

But I think, I am not a novice author anymore (at least a few people will read my works, right? Not sure.), so there is no need to use the title to attract people, and write the latter kind of book The name is a minus item instead.

In the introduction, I originally wanted to use the Noble Phantasm 'not for my own glory' as 'women's clothes not for my own' to promote it.

There must be a lot of people clicking in this way, but I gave up such an introduction after thinking about it.It is a hard-core combat novel written by itself, and these gimmicks are still better.

I decided to abandon everything that has nothing to do with fate, and focus on stability.It focuses on portraying characters and fighting.I think this is my weakness and needs to focus on.

I will try to reduce unnecessary exposure as much as possible.If it's well written, people will read it.

Yes, I've written about autism.