There is No Problem with the Youth Under the Snow

So she answered Zaigiza's words with a very patient look.

"In general, there are some websites, discussion posts and forums dedicated to people's contributions on the Internet, and you can post on them."

And Zaimokuza hurriedly shook his head, a look of fear.

"No, no, the way they speak is too direct, and if I get criticized for nothing, I might be depressed to the point of death."

This made the person on the side show a speechless expression, this guy's spirit is really fragile.

However, what he said is also true. With a layer of network, due to the privacy of his identity, he does not need to be responsible for his own speech, so he will indeed be ruthless when speaking to others.However, in reality, you should generally take into account the feelings of the other party and take your own position into account, and speak more implicitly.

"How do you know that our criticisms aren't too direct?"

As she spoke, Shi Yu's eyes narrowed slightly, and the corners of her mouth gradually drew a curve, revealing her signature black belly smile.

This made Zaiguza swallow his saliva.

"I think my opinion will be more severe than the criticism of netizens on the submission site."

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The novel written by Zaimiza is the subject of superpower battles on campus.

This masterpiece is set in a city in Japan, depicting mysterious organizations and superpowers with memories of past lives haunting in the dark night, and then, an ordinary boy protagonist, he has two memories of past lives. One day, he discovered the huge power hidden in his body, and he defeated the enemies one after another. In addition, on the way to the challenge, he met his princess sister in his previous life and his girlfriend who was a witch of the underworld. , The school sword fight and magic story that resonated with the previous life, now, the boy wants to fight a bloody path in the chaotic world.

I don't know when Zaimuzuo started writing, but these manuscripts are as many as hundreds of thousands of words.

So you can't watch it at all during your lunch break.

So, after school, Kasumigaoka and Yukinoshita each took Zaimokuza's originals home. After all, Ying Lili and Yubihama were not good at these things.

After reading this novel, it is already the second day.

When it was time for the lunch break, Kasumigaoka opened the door of the office as usual, and it was rare to see Yukinoshita dozing off.

I don't know when she came here, she is the only one in the department.

Yukinoshita was still breathing faintly and slept quite peacefully.Her expression seemed to be smiling, completely different from her usual cold and undisguised appearance. The difference between the two made her heart beat faster.

The long black hair that swayed gently, the crystal clear and delicate snow-white skin, the slightly raised eyelashes, the small cherry lips, and the quiet sleeping face wanted to be watched forever.

Shi Yu approached slowly, getting closer and closer.

But at this time, Yukinoshita's lips moved slightly, as if she was about to wake up.

Shi Yu also woke up instantly, and took a few steps back in a panic.

Yukinoshita opened her mouth and yawned like a kitten, then stretched a lot.

It's a rare scene.

She didn't seem to have found the hill of Kasumi, but at this time, the door opened.

"Hello!"

With the usual energetic greeting, Yubihama was carrying a light schoolbag, looking in high spirits, with the usual reassuring smile on her face.

"Student Yuhihama, Gui'an."

Yukinoshita tucked her hair, which was a little messy from her drowsiness, behind her ears, and greeted calmly.

"good afternoon."

"Looks like you're tired of reading too."

Yukinoshita looked at Shi Yu and nodded.

"Yeah, I haven't stayed up all night for a long time, and I haven't read this kind of work... It seems that I can't like it."

Shi Yu also shook his head helplessly.

"I also don't feel like I like this type of light novel."

"Honestly, it's really bad, in every sense of the word."

Yukinoshita sighed and delivered the final conclusion.

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Zaimokuza greeted him in a friendly manner and walked into the social office.

"I heard that you have finished reading, then, let me hear your thoughts."

Zaimokuza sat down on the chair and crossed his arms in front of his chest majestically, his face full of confidence, with a sense of superiority that came from somewhere.

The Kasumi Hills sitting opposite him had a cold expression.

"With all due respect, Zaimiza-san, your writing is pretty bad."

"Very boring, even painful to read, this work is beyond imagination boring."

"As a light novel writer, or even a writer, if you can't bring positive emotions to readers, it's better to stop writing as soon as possible."

"First of all, your grammar is messed up. Why do you always use inverted sentences? Do you really understand the usage of auxiliary words and auxiliary verbs? Didn't you learn it in elementary school? Sentence flow is the most basic thing in a novel, if you can do this If not, how can you let readers understand what you want to express?"

"Hmm....I think that way, it seems more level."

Zaimokuza explained with difficulty.