I Like to Bully My Childhood Sweetheart

Sister Akane...

Is it really so respectable...?

I didn't have much sense of reality before.

But now here, almost everyone respects Akane Chiyo...

Wan Lilian recalled the senior sister Qian she saw in school before, and somehow felt a strong sense of disobedience.

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Chapter 210 Three Like a Comedy Movie~

Although Qiandaiqian's matter, Wan Lilian is also very concerned.

But she was more concerned about Isshiki Yu's evaluation of their novels.

Not worthy of being called a light novel...

Wan Lilian can also see similar comments when he searches for their novels on search engines in his free time.

light novel.

what is it? …

"Isshiki, may I ask you, what is the bad part of this novel, and what do you think is not worthy of being called a light novel? Can you...?" Wan Lilian looked at Yishiyu with incomparably clear eyes , asked very sincerely.

And Yishiyu, who was still aloof at first, was stunned for a moment when he saw Wan Lilian's attitude.

"Although you are that demon's girlfriend, you two are really completely different people..."

"You became his girlfriend, don't you feel aggrieved?" Isshiki had asked Sakura Asakami to read it just now, and Kuroba was chatting with the author at another table and would not be back for the time being.

Otherwise, she wouldn't dare to speak ill of Hei Yu so loudly.

"No, I'm not wronged..." Wan Lilian blinked and said seriously.

He will only treat me well, only I know this.

How could you be wronged?

"...All right, but I have to charge a fee, my evaluation is priceless."

"Well, you give me 2000 million yen, and I'll tell you what's wrong with the novel." Isshikiha cleared his throat, and once again put on the proud posture just now.

"Isshiki..." Sakura Asakami, who had been silent all this time, slowly raised her head, looking at her with somewhat timid but slightly unpleasant eyes.

"You, you are, isn't it too much..." He only stammered halfway, which is much better than before.

"...I was just joking..."

"And, pity, do you understand what you mean by asking me this question?"

"It means that I am your opponent, but I still want to help you. Have you ever thought about my position? You love brain!" Yishiyu snorted softly and pouted.

"You, aren't you number two now?"

"The second is not the first opponent at all, is it? It's better to say that he has already lost, right?" Asakami Sakura seemed to have found her true self, and began to piss off Ishiki Yu.

And such Qian Shangying made Wanli Lian startled again.

Eh……?

These two people won't quarrel later, will they?

Surprisingly, Isshiki didn't refute.

She just hammered Asakami Sakura's arm with her small fist, and finally turned her head to look at Wan Lilian.

"You put away those dishes on your table, and I'm going to put the book on it."

"Oh, oh..." Wan Lilian nodded hastily.

10 minute later.

"Have you written it all down? The style of your novels is still too literary. Although it is your advantage in switching perspectives, it is not the most important thing for readers."

"The blunt style of writing will only make people look down, and the beautiful words do not mean that the writing style is good. I hope you can understand this."

"There is also the design of the protagonist, and the direction of the next plot."

"Your foreshadowing is buried too deep. For light novel audiences, there is no need for such a deep foreshadowing. In addition, your description is not enough for readers to remember the foreshadowing. This will lead to when the foreshadowing of the subsequent plot is revealed. , will become more rigid."

"You are still able to hold on to the number one spot now, thanks to the solid plot and the novelty of the setting."

"Soon you're going to hit a wall, the main character has nothing to do, it's too smooth to be boring."

"At that time, if you want to forcibly add some in-depth plot, I advise you to give up your heart."

"Even if a large number of readers are attracted by Teacher Qian's fame, those readers are still Teacher Qian's after all. The main point is that the opinions you write in the book are opposite to Teacher Qian's, and they will not hesitate to abandon yours. .”

"Looking at your latest articles, I can probably guess what your calculations are. It's nothing more than trying to keep the current readership and establish your own audience."

"But this is a very naive idea. Readers will be updated, and the final reader group should still be dominated by the audience of the magazine Fantasy Paradise."

"No one will buy a novel magazine that doesn't really suit their taste for a long time just for the sake of an author."

"That's all I've said. I've said a lot. If you still don't understand, cut it in half." When Isshiki Yu said these comments, the language organization was very smooth, as if he didn't need to think.