I Like to Bully My Childhood Sweetheart

"Not sent... I was going to check again later... But is your mental state really okay? Don't force yourself..." Kuroba looked at Lian worriedly.

Lian was stared at like this, her pretty face flushed slightly again.

"I, I can do it..." The tone softened again.

As long as you coax her well, there is no possibility that she will be disobedient.

I hope that Kuroba can really master this speed in the future.

If you still want to match it with poisonous tongue and candy as before, you are making a big mistake.

Now Lian can only eat candy, the difference between different candies depends on Kuroba's gentle attitude, the softer, the sweeter Lian will feel.

"Okay, let's go upstairs, baby~" Hei Yu hugged Lian's small body and said with some relief.

It was really not easy to coax Lian back.

"No, don't call me baby~" Lian said shyly, and at the same time glared at Heiyu lightly.

"Then, my pity~" Hei Yu lowered his head with a slight smile, and kissed her side face.

She still needs sweet talk and care now.

This process cannot be stopped.

……

After carefully reading Hei Yu's manuscript, Lian pointed out a few places that she thought could be better, discussed with Hei Yu, and after knowing what Hei Yu thought, and after revising it, she clicked nod.

This manuscript is very important to them, and it is the source of income. If they don't take it seriously, they will definitely not be able to maintain their current living conditions.

However, fortunately, because of Wan Lilian's help in revising and discussing the plot, all the original loopholes were discovered in time, and then filled in.Otherwise, if this novel is written in the middle period, it is estimated that there will be a collapse of the system, and there will be a situation where the logic cannot be self-consistent.

In that case, it is estimated that it will not be as uniformly praised as it is now.

Moreover, in order to be able to stabilize these reader groups, Kuroba did not change the rigorous storytelling method before, and did not think about changing the tone of the work in order to allow more people to accept this work.

He is still honest, building the foundation step by step.

Now that you have a fan base, stick to them instead of trying to attract more people.Hold on firmly to the iron rice bowl first, and wait until the follow-up, or the next novel, to talk about expanding the group.

"Thanks for your hard work, my pity~" Hei Yu squeezed her soft little hand and said with a smile.

At this time, apart from the fact that Lian's eyes were still a little hard to open and the eye sockets were red and swollen, his mood had basically stabilized, which was much better than before.

After rational thinking, she became sober.

It won't be as easy to get emotional as before.

"No, it's not hard." Lian looked at the young man beside her who was smiling gently and stroking her, she pouted, "Okay, okay, it's still hard work."

"I want a hug…"

"as a reward…"

Lian is like a child, longing for more love.

Of course this Black Feather would not refuse.

He hugged her directly into his lap, and then continued to comfort her.

While Lian was enjoying this warmth, she was also operating the computer.

"Kuroba, then...you can send this manuscript to the editor now?"

"Yes." Hei Yu nodded, "Open the mailbox, find the nearest contact, and just choose to send it."

"Okay~" Wan Lilian opened the website, then selected the file, uploaded it, and then added a more polite sentence to complete the sending.

However, the next moment.

Edit seconds to reply to the email.

Lian saw the content of the email, and Kuroba naturally saw it too.

After all, they were sitting together at this time.

Wan Lilian blinked, watching the series of compliments, as well as the extremely polite and respectful words.It feels really magical and subtle.

Kuroba is obviously only 16 years old, yet he is called a teacher...

And does this editor respect Kuroba so much? …

Well…

Sure enough, my boyfriend is amazing~

Lian's mood improved a little.

"Reject it."

"After two days, your health hasn't recovered yet, so there's no need to go." Hei Yu said without hesitation, he has always stayed away from such activities.

To be honest, now that the tone and style of his works have been set, the audience and readers have also been set.Moreover, my own writing method is not a light novel, and it has no reference value for 90.00% of the authors.

not to mention.

A large part of the reason why I was able to get the current results is because of Chiyo Akane's recommendation.