I Like to Bully My Childhood Sweetheart

The biggest difference is that.

The third person can write the feeling of God's perspective.

But No.1 said no.

Because it is necessary to deepen the reader's sense of substitution, everything must be done from the real perspective of the reader.

I can't say it. After I say a word, I can naturally see a person speaking on the other side.

Instead, you need to add some of your own actions, such as turning your head, turning around, turning sideways, sitting down, and so on.

Therefore, compared to writing in the third person, No.1 said that it needs to be more delicate and natural.

A sensitivity to the lens is required.

Because this is actually observing the whole world through your own lens.

Needless to say, Wan Lilian's talent in this area is not much to say. In the copywriting about introducing the campus that he wrote at the beginning of school, every description of Wan Lilian is very in place and natural.The complicated parts will be simplified, and a little more ink will be added to the simple places, so that the whole article can reach a balanced state.

It can be said that as long as readers follow Wan Lilian's words, they can get a complete and immersive experience. …

"What you need to change this time is to enter the chapter of the next unit story. This chapter is independent from the previous chapter."

"So after being revised by you, readers should be able to adapt even if the style of the article changes." Hei Yu began to analyze the manuscript he wrote.

He sat beside Wan Lilian, facing the screen very seriously, explaining line by line.

Although Wan Lilian was a little shy at first, he quickly entered the state in the follow-up.

It is true that they will be ambiguous when they should be ambiguous, but when they should do things seriously, they must also be serious. Being able to distinguish between these two different occasions and atmospheres is also the specialty of Wanli Lian and Heiyu.

It is precisely because they have always been able to live in an efficient way that their respective grades are so excellent.

Of course, the two of them influenced each other, made up for each other, and corrected each other, and finally reached today's level.

The two of them revised it earnestly together for about four or five hours.

Starting at nine o'clock in the morning, plus a two-hour break in the middle, eating and chatting.

By the time they finished the draft, it was already 03:30 in the afternoon.

Wan Lilian tapped the keyboard, and when she finished the last paragraph, she felt a lot lighter all over, she groaned habitually, and stretched herself...

But she seemed to have ignored the presence of Kuroba beside her.

Hei Yu just stared straight at her cute stretching appearance, like a soft kitten, she stretched herself, of course, her belly was also slightly exposed.

But because Wan Lilian is still too thin, there is basically no meat on his stomach, let alone fat or something.

"You, don't, don't look at me like that!" Wan Lilian said shyly, turning the computer chair over.

The tone was a little hasty, a little bit of the shameful smell before.

"Why?" Heiyu turned the chair around and looked at Wanli Lian, who was blushing with her legs tucked together.

"that is…"

"That's how you see it, I'm so shy..." Wan Lilian's voice was very soft, like a mosquito, but Hei Yu could still hear it.

"You're cute when you're shy, so it doesn't matter if I look at it?" Hei Yu looked at her two slender white legs, and felt a little charming in his heart. He got up slowly, approached Wan Lilian, and asked.

"Well…"

big bad wolf!

An alarm sounded in Wanli Lian's heart, but his body could not move.

It is possible to push Hei Yu away, but she is not willing.

"Again, are you going to bully me again?" When Wan Lilian asked this sentence, she looked endearing, and at the same time, there seemed to be a hint of expectation in her eyes?

"Yes, let me kiss."

Hei Yu lowered his head slightly, and kissed her again. Last night was the first time Wanli kissed her. Hei Yu was actually very happy, but he didn't show much expression at that time.

So naturally, if you kiss me, I will kiss you back too.

This is more fair.

Then, the kiss again broke the record.

About ten seconds. …

Because you usually hold your breath when kissing, coupled with various factors such as nervousness and rapid inner heartbeat, it is easy for people to be out of breath.

Wan Lilian did it this time, she couldn't hold on any longer, so she slightly grabbed Hei Yu's arm.

Hei Yu slowly let go of her, looked at her fair and flawless face, and her beautiful eyes that blinked with a little crystal liquid.

Kuroba kissed her eyes again.

Wan Lilian seemed to be frightened, and quickly closed his eyes.

"You are really cute."

"Lian." Hei Yu looked at Wanli Lian and said with a smile.

"Bad, bad guy Black Feather..." Wan Lilian exhaled with heat, and there was a girly fragrance that belonged to her alone.