I Like to Bully My Childhood Sweetheart

When Miura Ai was drinking this cup of coffee, she exuded strong resentment, which confused Kuroba who was sitting opposite.

"Miura-senpai, do you... hate drinking coffee?"

Hearing this, Miura Lan shook her head quickly, "No, I like it quite a bit."

"Is it……"

Seeing your expression of wanting to eat the coffee cup just now, I thought you had some grudge against the coffee... Kuroba thought to himself.

"So, Kuroba-kun, what are you going to tell me alone? Or, what can I help you?" In order to avoid thinking about Chiyo Akane's various things, she showed a bad expression .Miura Ai decided to get straight to the point.

Moreover, if I stay with Heiyu-kun for a long time, Lian will also be jealous, right?

Although she didn't feel that Akari Kuroba had any interest in her. …

"Miura-senpai, you should also be someone who has read a lot of books, so I think seeking your evaluation may be of great help to me...so..." Kuroba Akari took out the book from his bag for two days. Prepare a typed manuscript for submission to the editor.

"Evaluation...?" Miura Lan was taken aback. When she saw these manuscripts and the two fantasy novel magazines, she suddenly understood something.

巘戅 Miaobi library. "Heiyu-kun, are you serializing novels on it?"

"Yes." Hei Yu readily admitted.

"So the reason why you didn't want Qian and I to revise the manuscript for the review contest before is because you didn't have time to write it, right?" Miura Ai took over the magazine and asked with a few pages left.

"Well... part of the reason is this, but a bigger part of the reason is because I prefer to think about it by myself."

"But in the past two weeks, the serialization of my novels has not been very effective, so I feel that I need to listen to more people's evaluations before I can make better changes."

"Well, indeed, especially this kind of light novel, if it goes wrong, it will be quickly abandoned by readers, and then forcibly cut in half." Miura Ai nodded and said.

"Then Kuroba-kun, do you want me to give you an evaluation now? Or in two days?" Ai Miura asked after flipping through the light novel magazine, which is impossible to read normally.

"If possible, let's do it now. Will it waste your time?" Hei Yu rarely felt a little embarrassed at the beginning. Although this was a favor to be repaid, Miura Ai's attitude was quite serious.

It is estimated that he will really get a very detailed evaluation later, so Kuroba knows to be more polite at this moment.

Three and ten minutes passed.

After asking about the name of Kuroba's novel, Ai Miura has been looking down seriously.

Every three or four minutes to turn a page.

It took her so long to see the content of about [-] words, which Hei Yu had never expected.

It seems that Miura Lan also belongs to the kind of person who really loves books, and should also appreciate the words in the book word by word?

But this is a light novel... Isn't it a bit wasteful to use this way of reading?

Kuroba refilled his fourth cup of coffee, and when he was about to drink it, Ai Miura finally finished watching.

Her eyes are bright, and she seems to be more energetic after reading the book than before.

"Mr. Black Feather."

"Yes." Hei Yu was ready to be severely criticized.

"I want to see the follow-up." Miura Ai blinked and said seriously.

"what……?"

"I think the world view you describe is very interesting. In games like virtual reality, cyberpunk settings are also added."

"It's technology inside technology. This kind of idea is really novel, and there are settings about the worldview in it. You also wrote it in detail. You use the protagonist as the introduction to tell the story of the entire imaginary world."

"I think it's nice, at least attractive to me."

"And Kuroba-kun, your writing is very sharp, which is what we usually say hits the nail on the head, crisp and neat, and you don't waste too much ink in certain scenes, which I also appreciate."…

"As for the shortcomings... because it's also my first time reading light novels, so I don't know the style of light novels very well, but I can read yours."

"It's just... now you will come to me for an evaluation, which means that the grade of your novel, Mr. Heiyu, is not very satisfactory?"

"It's almost like this." Hei Yu nodded, "Next week is the last chance. If you don't make it to the top [-] that time, this novel will be cut in half." Zhuo Zhuo

"That's right..." Miura Ai nodded suddenly.

"However, I think Kuroba-kun, you don't have to think too much, just write what you want to write. As for the grades, I believe there will be no problem." Miura Ai gave a high evaluation, and Very heartwarming encouragement.

This also made Heiyu smile in front of people other than Wanli Lian after a long absence.Literature under the pen of the bxwx.co 厺厽

"Then thank you for your good words, Miura-senpai."

"You're welcome." Miura Ai also smiled.

……

After returning home, Ai Miura sent the name of Kuroba's novel to Akane Chiyo.

Qian Daiqian:? =????

Miura Ai: Using your Twitter account, recommend this novel serialized in Fantasy Paradise Novel Magazine.

Qian Daiqian:?What the hell is this?Good middle school!It can't be a novel written by your brother! ?

Miura Ai: I don't have a younger brother.

Chiyoshi: I know.