Those grown-ups only care about commercial value, and pleading is useless.

The girl underestimated Garuda's ability.

The family this child came from is actually very powerful.

Wu Jialou is also a real eldest lady.

However, even if Xiazhiqiu Shiyu knew.

With the pride of this woman, she might not be willing to use this method to change something.

"Fujiwara-san, can you tell me your opinion on this work?"

Holding the drink slightly harder, Kasumigaoka Shiwa made such a request to Fujiwara Obakuya.

"Is it okay... I don't really like your book."

Oboroya stared straight into the depths of senior's pupils, trying to see her thoughts clearly.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu did not escape.

"Whether you like it or not, you are the reader of this book."

"And as a writer, I have an obligation to listen to readers."

The girl's tone was heavy and firm.

In a word, Fujiwara Hakuya looked at this woman with admiration.

"Well, just my personal opinion."

Fujiwara Oboro also collected himself, recalling the words he had read in his brain.

"First of all, this guy named Naoto is too indecisive."

"Typical Japanese young male lead, nothing special."

It's not that he's being demeaning on purpose.

The book Love Festival is indeed just a novel selling the heroine.

The male protagonist cannot have his own popularity like Hikigaya Hachiman, Oreki Houtaro... like.

Straight people are like An Yilun, they are worthless in his eyes.

"It's fine if Sayuka is a girl. I don't quite understand what's going on in the brain of a boy like Naoto."

"Ms. Xia Shizi is a girl, so maybe I can't write about the masculinity of the protagonist."

"If this continues, we will probably only be able to increase the number of heroines, relying on the indecision of the heroine and the triangular relationship to promote the plot..."

……

Perhaps these views are not objective.

Fujiwara Hakuya is simply acting as a reader, expounding his own thoughts.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu knew that this junior was right in some things.

"Being seen through..."

She has never been in love, and she doesn't understand boys.

The heroine Sayuka is her clone created by herself.

What about the male lead?

The answer is Naoto, the male protagonist, but she just pieced it together from the anime, novels, and games she had seen in the past.

And, as Fujiwara Hakuya said.

In order to keep the plot going, she originally planned to add a character named Zhenwei.

Then let this Shinyui be inserted between Sayuka and Naoto to form a triangle relationship.

This is how the plot develops.

but……

"Unfortunately, the work of Love Festival has no future."

Fujiwara hazy is also very cruel, revealing the bloody reality to the girl.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's body was slightly invisible, and trembled.

That's not an illusion.

The fact that the novel was cut in half was not an ordinary blow to her.

But even so, as a creator, Kasumigaoka Shiwa still wants to hear the end.

"please continue."

The girl's voice was firm yet fragile.

Staring at her pitiful appearance, Fujiwara Hakuo couldn't speak any more.

"It's not just about being pretty..."

Unknowingly, the degree of favorability towards this weak but strong senior in my heart increased a little.

Chapter 25. God's work

Fujiwara Oboro is not a person who doesn't understand style.

Although as a reader, I would like to say something more.

But seeing Xiazhiqiu Shiyu being deeply shocked, but still desperately persevering, he couldn't say those words.

Instead, intending to end the topic, concluded.

"In short, after reading it, I don't feel any charm in the male lead at all."

I don't want to be portrayed as a popular hero like Hikigu, Oreki, etc., but at least I can't lose points like Ai Lunya.

"From my point of view as a reader, you could try to make him a little bit better."

The young man preached to Xia Shizi and Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu in a very positive tone.

"Otherwise, Sayuka will never be able to obtain her own happiness from Naoto."

Perhaps because of his words, the future will be changed.

But if the story continues like this, the winner will be the character Shinyue who appeared in the second volume.And definitely not Kasumi Hill Shiyu's clone - Sayuka.

"I see. Fujiwara-san, I appreciate your suggestion..."

After listening to the readers' feelings about him, Kasumigaoka Shiyu was not angry, but said so.

Although the expression looks heavy.

Her reaction made the young man think a little bit more about her.

"Okiya, are you talking too much..."

Garuda on the side was very worried about Shiyu's current situation.

Oboro didn't answer either, he hadn't finished speaking yet.

Indeed, Fujiwara Haku also didn't like this book...

"But even so..."

The image of Eriri and Kosaki being deeply moved by this work came to mind.

Not flattery or consolation.Fujiwara Oboro also spoke slowly with a tone that explained the facts.

"Xia Shizi, your "Love Metronome" is better than 90.00% of the light novels in the world..."

He didn't know that he was talking nonsense.The number of submissions for the Newcomer Awards of Immortal River Bunko exceeds a thousand, and Love Metronome, as the winner of the Grand Prize, is actually one of the best works in a thousand.The light novels that exceed 90.00% nine actually belittle the senior sister inadvertently.

Even in the published novels, according to the saying that 50% of the love metronome in the previous life was based on propaganda.So in the future, 200% of the total sales volume of this book is [-]. In fact, it is already a masterpiece that can be ranked in the top [-] of the total circulation of Japanese light novel series.

The total number of light novels published in the industry every year is as high as more than 2000.Over the past few decades, a terrible number has accumulated.

Judging from the achievements of more than 200 people in the history of love, it is no exaggeration to say that the light novels surpassed 90.00%.

You know, this is not counting the light novels that occupy the vast majority and have no chance of being published at all!

"What the hell do you mean?"

He obviously just criticized Lian Jie, but he seemed to praise himself again.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu couldn't figure out what this person was thinking.

Facing her question, the boy showed a somewhat helpless expression.

"In my case, I don't really like this type of novel, so I was biased from the beginning."

"Senior Jialou Luo is purely based on three views, which is different from normal people."

"What the two of us said is actually not an objective evaluation."

Fujiwara Oboroya replied frankly.

"I don't like it" does not mean that the quality of the work is not good.

He understands this very well.

"What, he's obviously normal—"

Wu Jialou tilted his head.In the depths of those eyes, which are very different from ordinary people, there is a look that really can't understand the meaning of his words.

Oboro smiled at her, but didn't say anything.

"I see……"

Looking at Garuda Luo, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu also nodded thoughtfully.Then he said to Fujiwara Oboroya.

"And then? If it's pure comfort, then there's no need."

He said so on the lips, but in his heart he was hoping that the other party could say something in the sense of praise.

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