Kazuya, who failed again at the last moment, was a little too excited. Although he was 35 years old when he counted the age before the time-travel, the huge sense of failure and the restless hormones of adolescence made him say some hurtful words.
"Mr. Aragaki, calm down."
Editor Machida said straight into his eyes,
"Your plot is good, but haven't you found a fatal flaw in your novel?"
"what is the problem?"
"Dongma Hesa, who is one of the two female protagonists, can't show up for one-third of the syllabus after graduating from high school and studying abroad?
How are you doing to the Winter Horse Party who watched the first volume of Winter Horses? "
"But each volume has a corresponding heroine, right?"
"But that doesn't mean that the existence of other heroines has completely disappeared.
One more question, what happened to the final work part? Do you know that the audience for light novels is mainly students now? The young people who are young have no sense of substitution, Mr. Aragaki, did you consider these when you were creating? "
"Ah, this, light novels are not just for students to buy, but the work plot can also attract office workers."
Kazuya defended hesitantly, but in the bottom of his heart, he roared: Marudo thief, what's wrong with your script, why is it different from what you said?
"Mr. Aragaki, how many non-home office workers have you seen buying a light novel that started out as a campus-oriented light novel?"
"However, at the beginning of the campus orientation, the readership has been fixed, and will they buy it in the future?"
"If the syllabus of Mr. Aragaki has not been set, then we can revise it slowly, but look at Mr. Aragaki, the ending of your story has been written like this from the beginning, it is also very difficult for you to change the syllabus. Bar!"
"Ah, that, I could write four endings based on market expectations."
Nonsense, Marudo has given four endings, how to change the outline to end, have you thought about other directions?
"So, Mr. Aragaki, your work is indeed a good one, but in terms of market positioning, there are too many obvious loopholes.
Compared with Mr. Aragaki, Mr. Kasumigaoka's "Metronome in Love" has some problems with the market, but these are all contents that can be modified. The love story of high school students is also closer to students, so we have made a better one. s Choice. "
Kazuya fell heavily on the chair, and after Machida's editor's detailed explanation, he also realized his own problem, he was still too careless, a galgame game script is not so easy to adapt into a novel, he still takes it for granted , If there is no Shiyu of Xiazhiqiu this time, with his follow-up plot, even if the novel is published, it is estimated that it will inevitably end in a half-cut or forcibly changed the outline, then it will not be the WA2 of the previous stomach medicine masterpiece.
"I understand, thank you for editing Machida, and thank you Kasumigaoka-senpai, you have taught me a lot, I take it for granted, I am too confident, I think that as long as the writing is in place, there will be no problem in adapting it with God, but I ignore the gal script and Differences in light novels."
After all, as people of two lives, after the initial outbreak, Kazuya still accepted his failure and apologized to the two in front of him, but he didn't realize that he seemed to have said something incredible.
Of course, frustrated he didn't hear Machida.
"Galgame script?"
murmured to himself.
"Yo, can't you do it, junior brother, accepting the reality so quickly?
The blow was too great, do you need my sister to comfort me? "
Kazuo-no-gao Shiyu's playful laughter came from Kazuya's ears.
It can be seen that Kasumigaoka Shiyu, who won this contest, is in a good mood. Seeing Kazuya who is frustrated, he will no longer continue to show his poisonous tongue attributes.
"no need,"
He also understands that it is not the first time that he has failed to hang up, so his performance is still free and easy, and he smiles bitterly,
"However, Senior Sister's novel must be a big hit. The novel that beats me can't be a scumbag on the street. I will be the first fan at Senior Sister's autograph session."
"Oh, so it doesn't look like you're a total scumbag, Aragaki-san, your evaluation in my heart has increased by one point."
Xiazhiqiu Shiyu raised his eyebrows and said something a little surprised.
"So, only one point?"
"Add another point, before it was minus 100 points!"
"Even a positive score is far away!"
"but,"
Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu raised his head and said confidently,
"With Kazuya-kun, a well-known figure in the school as a fan, I have to work harder. You can see how strong the magic of the novel that beats your work is!"
"Don't call me by my name, it seems that you know me well, isn't it the first day you met?"
However, at the moment when Shiyu of the Hill of Xia raised his head, Kazuya felt that the confident despising eyes, the dazzling light, really fascinated him.
At that moment, Kazuya felt that from the perspective of Kuro Changzhi's perfection, Kasumigaoka Shiyu and Ayase reached a level.
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"Of course, only for that moment!"
Kazuya hid in his room and meditated, although he finally accepted his failure this time, but the feeling that the novel was only one step away from publication but ended up in ruins made him really uncomfortable, so , like a year ago, he is in retreat again.
"Arno, brother, someone is looking for you again."
Ayase's voice came from the door.
When Kazuya walked into the living room from his room, he saw a middle-aged man who handed him a business card:
"I'm not talented. My name is Maru Shigan. I'm a galgame script writer. Last time I heard from editor Machida that Mr. Aragaki has a novel that is more suitable to be adapted into galgame?"
Maruto Fumiaki, and Kazuya stared at the person in front of him with an expression of eating shit. Could this be the Two-dimensional version of Marudo Fumiaki?
"So, it's more promising for me to professionally copy other people's things and then resell them back!"
This is Kazuya Aragaki's helpless wailing after meeting the original author again.
Chapter 7: It's dangerous to give Giri chocolate back
March 3th, the last Monday of the first semester of high school.
Kazuya Aragaki is preparing for school as always,
"Book, check!"
"Pencil case, check!"
"Manga, check!"
"Then in the end,"
Kazuya stared at the thing in his hand for a long time,
"Chocolate, check!
Chocolate rebates or something, especially Giri's chocolate rebates, are so annoying! "
After taking the chocolate out of the schoolbag, checking it, and then stuffing it into the hidden pocket inside the schoolbag, Kazuya carefully looked around, and rushed to the entrance after finding no trace of Ayase.
Although Kazuya didn't know why he avoided Ayase, but today he felt inexplicable pressure from Ayase when he had breakfast, so Kazuya chose to avoid his sister just in case.
However, when he noticed the lifeless appearance of Ayase with her head down at the entrance of the entrance, Kazuya felt that today was doomed.
"Brother, good morning!"
"Ale, good morning, Ayase!"
"Brother-brother, good morning!"
"Well, good morning!"
"Brother-brother-big-man, good morning!"
"Well, Ayase, if you have something to say, what's the problem?"
"Okay, last night, my brother didn't ask me to help me organize my schoolbag!
Did the careless and lazy brother organize his schoolbag yesterday? "
"Arnuo, this, I've always felt ashamed to ask my sister to sort out her schoolbags, so I have to sort it out myself once in a while!"
"This morning, my brother got up very early, and I didn't have a chance to ask Ayase to check your schoolbag again!"
"Yes, I feel very embarrassed to escape the morning training of the football club every day. Today, I found out that I went to the training!"
"Then, can I take a few minutes for you to let Ayase check your schoolbag for you?
After all, it's been a long time since my brother organized his schoolbag, so there may be some omissions in books! "
"Well, I'm still clear about the daily lessons, so it's alright!"
"Why is my brother unwilling to show me your schoolbag, did you bring something elusive today?
Let me think, ah, today is March 3th, who is my brother going to deliver chocolates to today? "
"Ahaha, you're thinking too much. What year did I give chocolates to others? You brother, I'm not the kind of playboy who shows mercy, right? I'm going to be late for training, this time I'll go first!"
Seeing Ayase's distraction, Kazuya scrambled for the door and fled, not recovering until she rushed through the door of the classroom.
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"Speaking of which, Ayase's tendency to be sick has become more and more serious since she turned black on her birthday. This is not good. I have to correct my lovely sister."
In order to avoid Ayase, Kazuya woke up early, plus she rushed all the way, only to find that there was no one in the classroom when she arrived.
"That's right, other than the guys in the club, who else would come so early?"
"Hey, you're wrong!"
A surprising voice came from the corner of the classroom.
"Lun Ye, why did you come so early today?"
Surprised to see An Yilun, a otaku who has been in the same class from elementary school to high school, hated that her real childhood sweetheart turned out to be a boy, and Kazuya was surprised that An Yilun, who was a senior otaku, arrived early. .
"There's something wrong with this. I just got the Blu-ray disc of the theatrical version of "Madoka" yesterday, and I thought it was not enough to play it on the DVD at home, so I went to the audition classroom after school to watch it on the big screen."
Quite a graceful answer.
"And then, although you've seen it in the theater many times, after watching the theatrical version for an hour and a half, you were deeply moved by Homura and Madoka's lily relationship, and finally lost your voice in the audio-visual classroom. I cried bitterly, couldn't calm down for a long time, and finally missed the closing time of the school, is that what it means?"
"Sure enough, he's my good friend. That's it. By the way, why did you come so early today?"
"This, I can't explain it in a few words. In short, in order to give Giri Chocolate back to people."
"Oh."
"..."
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