How to Develop a Sick Brother Control

He also opened his mouth and sighed to himself.

Of course, in fact, his evaluation of Tong Nai's novels is actually similar. The bitch-type heroine in Tong Nai's novels makes people feel a little desperate. He can still be sought after by so many boys, even as a novel The popularity of mobile novels has been high enough, which in itself surprised him. Of course, as a supporter of Kirino on this side, he does not dare to make such an evaluation.

"nonsense--"

Tongno's face became even paler. Although her novel has received criticism before, but this time the evaluation came from the editor-in-chief of an editorial department, and it is the editorial department that may decide whether her novel can be published or not. The editor-in-chief of , this made her feel uncomfortable.

"But, but, there are many people who like to read it, and the popularity of my novel is high enough!"

"Yes, we persuaded the editor-in-chief Machida in the same way,"

Kimura said a little embarrassedly,

"But the editor-in-chief Machida emphasized that the heroine of such a novel is too easy to arouse criticism from the society. The heroine is a little too-well, free and casual, looks a little too rebellious, and the mobile novel's self-entertainment Of course it is possible, but if you want to take the road of commercialization, you may need to make some corrections to the heroine's character.

Another point is that the relationship between the heroine and the adult uncle is also easy to question the Ethics Association. These are all flaws in publishing.

Moreover, although the final transformation of the heroine is very good, if it is published as a light novel, it is difficult to attract new readers with this character at the beginning, or the new readers who have attracted will be dissatisfied with the final transformation. Volume-published light novels differ from mobile-type serialized novels in one way. "

"So, you only need to modify these, right?"

And also asked,

"Tong Nai's novel is indeed a bit too casual in these aspects. This is what your editorial department needs to point out when publishing the physical book, and then what Tong Nao needs to revise, why should Tong Nai's novel become Shi Yu? Senpai——Well, what about the accessories of Kasumi Shizi-sensei's novel?"

"However, do you think that if Miss Kosaka's seemingly messy aspects are modified and become a decent teenage romance novel, do you think Miss Kosaka's novel will still be so popular?"

Shi Yu's cold voice interjected, causing everyone to be stunned.

"Should--no problem?"

Kazuya replied subconsciously, but he was a little surprised to find that Kirino and Eiri, who were beside him, had lowered their heads with ugly expressions.

"It seems that you are the only one who has such an opinion!"

Shi Yu smiled and said,

"Mr. Takasaka, you should have read your sister's novels, but, as a man, you still don't understand the attractive points of these novels for women!

Just as your men would like a very domineering male protagonist, girls will also hope for this kind of female protagonist who is free and not bound by men, although the logic of the sad male dominance in this world has led to Miss Kosaka. 's novels habitually end with a pure love ending - the so-called women must also adhere to the male's sad logic in the end, but at least this kind of heroine we see in Miss Kosaka's novels The freedom of her is what makes her novels so popular when they are serialized on mobile phones. "

"So, what Teacher Xia Shizi meant, if you simply revise these things, then the popularity of this novel will also disappear, right?"

Tong Nao lowered his head and said bitterly.

"Well, that's what Machida editor said,"

Editor Kimura, who was always in charge of summarizing the speech, continued,

"As for mystery library, the current goal is to enter the market of youth romance novels, although it is a bit rude to say that - Miss Kosaka, of course, it is also an affirmation of Miss Kosaka, we choose Miss Kosaka's "Mei Kong" as the adaptation of the mobile phone novel The publication of the physical book is officially because it noticed the popularity of "Mei Kong", but its popularity seems to be based on the category that is not allowed by physical books, which makes the materialized plan of "Mei Kong" very embarrassing. !

After all, Mystery Library does not have much experience in this area. If the first novel is not successful, it will have a great impact on the evaluation of the industry and its continued creation. "

"Well, we can understand that."

Kazuya also nodded and said that he also had to admit that if it was a library with sufficient publishing experience and reputation like Fantastic Library, then the failure of a novel's materialization could still be tolerated, but for those who are in this respect. This is not the case with the mystery library in its infancy. At this time, it is not incomprehensible that Machida, who is the general manager, rejects the plan to materialize Kirino's novel in pursuit of stability.

"However, in this setting of Miss Kosaka's novel, in one case, the problems mentioned earlier can be ignored, that is, if the heroine's character has already formed an inherent in the public before. If she has an impression, then even if her previous image does not match the impression we are used to, it will only make readers curious about how this girl changed from the previous image to this and continue to chase, because she has already With the expectation that the heroine's final image is a positive image, the group of people in the Ethics Association will not be suspicious of the detours she took before, but will think that it is necessary for the heroine's image. process of transformation."

After taking Kazuya's words, Shi Yu said.

"That's why you wanted to make "Mei Kong" a rumored novel of "Metronome in Love", right?"

Kazuya had already understood what Shi Yu meant.

"Although I seem a little too proud to say that,"

Shi Yu showed a slight smile and said,

"But I think everyone here has seen my "Love Metronome", right?

Well, I think you should also understand that apart from the two heroines, a very popular female character, her setting is, in a sense, similar to that of the heroine of Miss Kosaka's novel. right? "

"Well, a fanatical supporter of Sayuka who is one level lower than Sayuka, of course the girl who was Sayuka's rival in the club before, Sayuri Suzuki, right?

Although there was a bitch vibe everywhere at the beginning, as the plot progresses, readers can actually clearly find that she still has her own pure persistence in her heart, and she feels that she was indeed in the middle school period. Have a very complicated experience! "

It was a little surprising that the first person to answer this question was Eiri, who felt that she didn't care about Shi Yu's situation at all.

And looking at Kazuya, Tongno, and even Shi Yu's somewhat surprised eyes, Eiri couldn't help but blushed and said:

"What are you doing!

Hey, I just have a good memory, I'm not saying that I've watched "Metronome in Love" five or six times, and I can remember every plot!

Well, I just happened to remember it! "

"Well, thank you very much for remembering it by chance, this um, Miss Girlfriend."

Shi Yu nodded lightly. It was also because the two parties were now communicating with unknown identities, so instead of continuing to tease Ying Riri, she simply agreed and said,

"Yes, it's Suzuki Sayuri. Although I didn't want to give her too many stories when I created this character, the popularity of this character is really beyond my expectations. Back in the fantastic Bunko, the editorial department always had a suggestion to create a spinoff novel by Sayuri, but because I didn’t have the idea, and “Metronome in Love” wasn’t over, I never agreed.”

"Indeed, if I were to create a rumored novel by Sayuri, I would feel that based on the popularity accumulated by "Metronome in Love", coupled with the popularity of the character itself, it would not be an overly eye-catching work. But it should be no problem to be a successful work. It will also be a successful start for the mystery library."

Kazuo also thought to himself from the perspective of the mystery library.

"However, after watching Miss Kosaka's "Mei Kong", I thought that it would actually be quite emotional if I just slightly modified some of the plot and settings, and then became the setting of Sayuri!

I even think that the plot of Miss Kosaka's novel can be said to be tailor-made for Sayuri. Even if I were to think about Sayuri's plot myself, I might not be able to think of a more suitable plot for Sayuri than Miss Kosaka's. Yuri's story. "

"Uh, although it's a bit strange to say that, but Teacher Xia Shizi, you are still too famous."

Tong Nao scratched his head in embarrassment and said.

"Then, Miss Takasaka, I invite you as the author of the novel "Metronome in Love", and ask you to become the author of Sayuri Suzuki's story of the novel "Metronome in Love", is that okay?"

"Well, "Mei Kong", can't be published by other means?"

"Although I can't say absolutely no,"

Editor Kimura smiled a little embarrassedly and said,

"But it may be difficult to change it to meet the requirements of the editor-in-chief Machida. Even if the adaptation is successful, we have no way to estimate the approval of the editor-in-chief Machida, so the biography proposed by the editor-in-chief Machida and Kasumi Shiko The proposal for the novel should be the one with the least risk and the greatest possibility of turning Ms. Takasaka's novel into a physical book."

"Well, if that's the case—"

Tong Nao bit his lip unwillingly, closed his eyes, and said.

"—Then let's think about it a bit more!"

Kazuya interrupted Kirino mercilessly and said.

"Uh, Kazuya—ah, brother?"

Kirino stared at Kazuya with wide eyes.

"If possible, of course it is best to publish original works, right?

right?

Tono"

Kazuya blinked at Tono and asked.

"Uh, um, it should be."

Tong Nai also lowered his head and pursed his lips.

"So, I still hope that we can think about it more!"

Kazuya stood up and nodded to Editor Kimura and Shi Yu.

"Well, I understand what you're thinking too,"

Editor Kimura nodded and said,

"Then there is still a week before the next planning meeting of the editorial department. I hope that during this week, we can get your final answer!"

"Unfortunately, I originally thought that this should be a good plan!"

Shi Yu also stood up and shook his head regretfully.

"But if there is a better solution, why not try it?"

He also looked at Shi Yu and asked solemnly.

"You bastard, you're really—stupid!"

Seeing Kazuya whose expression was unmoved, Shi Yu closed her eyes and complained softly in a low voice in a voice that no one could hear.

"You know, I've worked hard too!"

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"I know you still want to keep fighting for Tong Nai,"

After walking out of the editorial office, Yingri, who had not spoken much in the previous negotiation, first frowned and asked,

"However, what Shiyu of Kasumigaoka said is not unreasonable. The plan she proposed is already very superior, at least it can guarantee the publication of Tongno's novel."

"But what if it's published?"

And also asked back,

"The goal of publishing is nothing more than two things, one is the income from copyright, and the other is fame, and if you follow the plan of Sister Shiyu, fame and popularity will eventually become an accessory of the sister, People will only praise Shiyu-senpai for her clever setting of a character's biography, and even the part of the fans that Kirino cultivated on the mobile phone novels will think that Kirino's article is learning according to the publication. It was written at the behest of my sister, so Tong Nao's original thought was in vain?

Only the monetary benefits brought by copyright, do you think Tong Nao will care about these? "

"You are not someone from Tong Nai, at most you are just a senior who looks very reliable but is not at all reliable."

Ying Lili raised her head with some jealousy, and said with a tsk tut,

"Why do you look like you've completely decided for Tong Nao?"

"Ah, this,"

Kazuya obviously didn't expect Ying Lili's jealousy to come so suddenly. He was worried about the other party just now, but now he regards the other party as someone who needs to worry about it, so he turned his head in embarrassment and said vaguely,

"Uh, this is just because Kirino has been with Ayase for too long, so he habitually took care of the two of them as sisters, haha, haha!"

Kazuya's explanation will be sneered by anyone who knows a little about his relationship with Tono. Moreover, even if he is not familiar with this way of getting along, as long as Tonoichi refutes at this time, such a low-level lie will also be dismantled.

Not only Kazuya, but also Eiri was ready to accept Kirino's complaints at this time, but, surprisingly, Kirino just bowed his head without saying a word, feeling Kazuya and Eiri's relationship. When she cast her gaze over, she raised her head somewhat at a loss, and then spit out a sentence vaguely: