How to Develop a Sick Brother Control

Although it is not the first time that Machida editors used a method similar to kidnapping to do a closed-door draft, but every time this state still makes Shiyu of Kasumigaoka a little unbearable, although it is said that people will behave differently when they are desperate. Ordinary combat power, but if this

"Desperate"

If it continues for too long, it will only lead to an overdraft of its own combat power.

And Shi Yu's current situation is almost on the verge of overdrafting. Although she reluctantly completed the first draft of the novel and the initial revision, Shi Yu can feel that, at least in terms of quality, the second half of her novel is The content is really unsatisfactory.

However, Shi Yu couldn't take care of it so much anymore. She used this somewhat unsatisfactory manuscript to hand in the job first, and she still escaped from Machida's control.

In fact, Shi Yu didn't know why she was in such a bad state recently. It was obvious that after Yu and Ye completed the task of writing the game script together, her burden was much easier.

Of course, at the beginning of the writing of the new work, her thoughts were indeed very clear, but this situation did not last for long, and soon, she entered a low ebb for some inexplicable.

Of course, editor Machida comforted himself on this point:

"Xiao Shi, you don't have to worry too much. After all, what you are going to write this time is a campus style with a slightly different style. You must be a little confused about this change, but as long as you keep writing, you will find the feeling You won't find it difficult anymore."

Out of the constant trust in her editor who cooperated very happily, Shiyu obeyed Machida's advice and continued to persevere. Although she did feel that the writing process became more comfortable, that kind of smoothness was just a The specific style of writing at the operational level is smooth, not the kind of inspiration.

And this made her miss the scene when she wrote the script with Kazuya not long ago. At that time, although the writing deviates from her favorite aspect to a certain extent, the inspiration is constantly flowing. It was in this situation that the speed that made Kazuo feel astounding came out.

Since the delivery of the last volume of "Metronome in Love", Shi Yu's novel writing has always been in a hazy state, and she has never been able to grasp the feeling of writing. It was also the reason why I decided to join in the production of that childish game with Lunya.

In her opinion, perhaps through the writing of different types of things like game scripts, she can help her find inspiration, but in fact, she seems to have regained that state of creation, but she didn't expect it to return to the time of novels , she still felt that the feeling that she had grasped at a certain moment flew away.

Shi Yu has a vague awareness that the existence of the possibility and also is a great incentive for her, but this is also something she will never admit. In her opinion, if she admits this, then Didn't she become a girl with no independent ability at all?

This is something Shi Yu cannot admit.

But the more you deny this situation, the easier it is for Shi Yu to think of Kazuya when writing is difficult. Although Shiyu knows that guy is bad and his character is not that good, it will often make her feel frustrated, but, Kazuya When he was together, it was a feeling when people of equal status were together, which would make the irritability in her heart lessened.

Therefore, after learning from Machida that Kazuya only expressed the most basic concern about her disappearance, and did not take any further action, Shiyu's irritability also rose to its peak. If she can maintain her own level, she feels that she is too short on words in the second half of the content.

Although she knew that such a thing would definitely not be approved by the editor, and even if it were approved by the editor, her own kind of pursuit of perfection would not allow such a poor work to be published, but Shi Yu still published this manuscript. Handed it over to Machida, her purpose is very simple, to get rid of this state first, and then go to the guy to question.

Obviously, when I was writing with him, I wrote quite satisfactory works, but now it turns out to be such a cold look!

As for what to ask, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu didn't have a clear answer in her heart, she just felt a little dissatisfied with the other party's indifference to herself.

It's a must, isn't it?

The senior who worked hard together not long ago, kicked me, an old woman, after being useless?

It's not that easy to kick me off!

Shi Yu thought so, so even if she didn't know the exact time when she came out of the hotel room, which was always bright, her first target was the audio-visual classroom at Toyonozaki Academy.

Of course, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu felt that she was relatively lucky, because except herself, everyone in the club was there, which also meant that when she came, it happened to be the time for club activities.

----------------------------Dividing line-------------------- ---------And the sudden appearance of Shiyu in the Hill of Xia has really caused a little commotion among other people in the club who are busy with their own affairs. After all, everyone seems to have adapted to the absence of Shiyu. She was also used to leaving her the exclusive seat in the back row where no one would sit even though it was necessary.

The appearance of Shi Yu himself, who broke this calm, also made everyone suddenly feel that the society had become complete again.

"Senior Shi Yu?

I remember you didn't come to school today? "

Lun also helped his eyes on the bridge of his nose and said in shock.

"That's right, I'm still catching up with the editor's deadline in the morning, but now that it's finished, I just want to come here to check it out. How's the work going?"

Shi Yu suddenly felt that after not appearing in this classroom for a long time, he was like a stranger in the classroom. Although the people in front of him were all familiar to him, but what everyone was doing, including where the work was going. To a certain extent, she has no concept at all, which also makes her feel a sense of alienation.

"Well, it's going well,"

Lun Ye lowered his head. Obviously, Shi Yu's sudden appearance made him not know how to deal with it. Should he tell Shi Yu that everyone had revised the script immediately, or should he hide it for a while and let Shi Yu find out for himself. things are better,

"Well, how is the senior's novel?"

While trying to change the subject, Ren also winked at Kazuya on the other side, wanting Kazuya to tell him what to do next.

"The novel, it's just so-so. Although it is estimated that it needs to be revised, it should be no problem to catch up with the release date."

Shi Yu obviously didn't want everyone to know that his novel was actually just a little bit of content.

As a result, the two people who were pregnant with each other did not dare to look at each other's eyes, which also made Shi Yu's return, which should have been more important and happy in the club, turned into a very strange and awkward atmosphere. .

"Well, seniors have to cheer up!"

Looking at Lun Ye for help, although Kazuya didn't know what to do for a while, he still took the initiative to resolve the embarrassment.

And then, looking at Shi Yu's dodgy expression, he also made up his mind:

"Sister Shiyu must not be allowed to discover all of this on her own. You must take the initiative to admit to her. Whether she accepts it or not, I will tell her this directly, and the necessity of revising her script."

Kazuya raised his head, nodded to Renya on the other side, and said resolutely:

"By the way, Shiyu-senpai, Lun Ye has basically finished writing the script, do you want to try it out?

Of course, there are still a lot of music and pictures that have not been added. It may be just a selection option for purely reading text. "

"kindness?

Are you done?

The efficiency of the ethical gentleman is also really high! "

Shi Yu nodded as if waking up from a dream, looked at Kazuya who took the initiative to speak to him, and said in a panic,

"Ah, if you let me play, I don't need it. After all, I wrote it myself, and I still know the ending very well!"

"But when the game is made, you still have to try it out to know if it's good or not, right?

Senior sister can try Lun Ye's game, the more people play, the more inconsistencies can be found in the game, and then the bugs can be found and solved! "

"That's true, anyway, I really have nothing to do right now,"

Shi Yu looked at Kazuya who was patiently persuading her in a different way, nodded and said,

"Then I'll just play."

"Well, Lun Ye, take it out and let senpai try it!"

Kazuya nodded, took a deep breath, and said.

-------------------------------Dividing line----------------- ------------- As for Lun Ye's re-written game script itself, other people in the community have already tried it out. From the perspective of gameplay, it shouldn't be a big problem, but Maybe it's because the illustration work of Ying Lili has not been completed, or because the music of Michitome is not matched, so even if the script is revised, the whole game still feels quite satisfactory.

Therefore, although Kazuya's main purpose is to make Shiyu play the game by herself to realize the modification of the script, in fact, Kazuya also has an idea, that is, to let Shiyu of Kasumigaoka discover through her perspective as a writer Some other issues with this game.

Of course, what Kazuya definitely doesn't want to admit is that it was their changes to the script that created the lack of gameplay and storytelling, which he tried his best to avoid.

Shi Yu's game progress is very smooth. After all, the entire script is the result of her own creation. Judging from her strategy for the Liuli Line, she should be familiar with it.

However, the relaxed look at the beginning gradually changed, and Shi Yu's eyes continued to become solemn.

Of course, Kazuya knows why, because the common route at the beginning and the first few options for entering the Liuli line, Kazuya didn't make too many changes, and the changes he made were a lot when other options were wrong. The addition of other plots and the enrichment of bad-end plots, so when Shiyu chooses the right options at the beginning, these problems will not be exposed.

However, the situation in the middle of the game is different. In Shi Yu's script, when entering a heroine's personal route, you only need to select the most critical option. Although the later options seem confusing, they are basically The above are all kind of meaningless confusing options, and anyone can easily make the one that looks like a choice, but is actually the only decision, and in this regard, is the biggest adjustment that He also made.

And Shi Yu was obviously aware of the situation where someone gave her options a replacement.

However, with the keenness of Shiyu of Kasumigaoka, she can clearly feel that Kazuya's approach has improved the gameplay, so even though she realized that the game may develop in a direction she is not familiar with, But she still continued to play patiently.

And Kazuya also knows that the next final development will be the most surprising point for Shiyu, that is, because, in a sense, Shiyu's only ending that belongs to the colored glass line is Kazuya. Changed, in order to enhance the gameplay, and also set the two endings of TE and GE of the Liuli line, and according to the previous options, and the change in the favorability of Weiyang, Xunli and others, there will be two kinds of endings depending on the situation Regarding the ending of Liuli, one is GE left by Liuli, the other is TE where Liuli finally disappeared, and the latter is Shiyu's ending, and the former is Kazuya's original ending.

For the ending of the hidden harem line, you must clear all endings before you can do it.

If Shi Yu can choose TE all the way, maybe she won't find too many problems, but in the process of watching Shi Yu playing the game, and also can notice that Shi Yu doesn't seem to care too much about the options. This also makes it clear that in the middle of the journey, Shi Yu will eventually enter the GE ending. Although many other players will like it, it will not make Shi Yu so satisfied.

Sure enough, when the screen later appeared in the conversation

"Liu Li Resurrected"

When the scene was over, Shi Yu was stunned.

For the first time, she turned around to look at Kazuya, and with a slightly sour and bitter tone, she said:

"Wait a minute, Kazuya-kun, can you show me the script you wrote when you wrote it?

As if something unexpected happened! "

Kazuya nodded silently, and handed the script that Lun Ye had already prepared to Shiyu.

And Shi Yu, after scanning the script quickly, said hoarsely:

"When I was away, you guys seemed to have really done a big project!"

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It's hard to explain Shi Yu's current mood. In the process of playing the game, she has become somewhat aware of this so-called basis

"Her Script"

Writing the game script doesn't seem to work as she imagined, but she simply sees the situation as a bug fix, not to mention, from her point of view, a series of options. The correction of the problem seems to be of great benefit to the game itself.

Therefore, although she was a little dissatisfied with the revision of the game script that seemed to be handled by Kazuya, she also expressed her understanding of this situation considering that it was a choice when they were unable to contact her.

After all, she is only the person in charge of writing the script in this society. It is An Yi Lun who decides the game itself, and even Kazuya is more qualified to decide the game than herself.

However, when the ending of the Liuli line that Shiyu was looking forward to turned into the Kazuya-style good-end, Shiyu's mood could no longer be calmed down. In Shiyu's view, the role of Liuli, she It can only be a completely tragic character. Even under Kazuya's stubbornness, she reluctantly accepted the ending of the harem line, but she just regarded the ending as a situation similar to the creation of the same person, and denied it through the subconscious in her heart.

"true"

Liuli's ending and let himself accept it.

And the real Liuli ending is something written by oneself. It is the Liuli ending that sublimates all emotions that cannot be tampered with by anyone, that is, the Liuli TE that Kazuya is preparing, but it seems very bold and Kazuya can't help it. These options for her have also been revised, and her ending has been supplemented. For Shi Yu, this is undoubtedly a smear of her work, and this smear, even for He Ye, she also Unforgivable.

And this kind of dissatisfaction with Kazuya reached its climax after she read all the scripts, not to mention that the plots of the side heroines that she did not pay much attention to have deviates from her original estimates. The two lines she created by herself, which are in a sense the core of the main storyline, the Liuli line and the Xunli line, also have traces of obvious changes by Kazuya. Forcibly adding an ending is only the most obvious of them. one thing to notice.

In order to make the game a game, not simply a unique electronic novel, and also greatly expand the performance of the corresponding characters in the case of wrong selection of options, and the modification process is limited by time on the one hand, and on the other hand There is no Shi Yu to give specific answers to the doubts, so Kazuo can clearly feel that the character of the characters and the setting of the plot will not be so in line with Shi Yu's ideas.

And Shi Yu also felt this, this feeling was like her daughter was sullied by others.

Although the creation of the new novel seems to be very difficult, the thing that gives Shi Yu the opportunity to talk about sex is that she also created a game script that satisfies herself. The story in this script makes her feel that she has already is the most perfect.

However, the purity of the story was beyond recognition when she came back.

"When I was away, you guys seemed to have really done a big project!"

Therefore, to forcibly suppress his urge to explode, Shi Yu said in a much hoarse tone than usual.

"Yes, Sister Shiyu, don't get too excited, you can play another game first."

And He also saw that Shi Yu's state was on the verge of breaking out, and handed over the trial version of the game written according to Shi Yu's original script that Lun Ye had reserved, and said.

Shi Yu looked at Kazuya with red eyes for a long time, and finally took a deep breath, put the CD in the computer, and played the original game again.