How to Develop a Sick Brother Control

I thought you were so sad about being criticized by Heya for something, it turned out to be that novel!

It turned out to be the doujinshi of that funny maschera! "

"You, have you seen it?"

The black cat's expression was obviously a little surprised. For the first time, she felt that she was at a disadvantage when speaking in front of Tongno.

"Of course I've seen it, and that guy Kazuya showed it to me personally!

Incidentally, he also showed his sister. "

Tong Nao's expression was still very strange, and that smug look made Kazuya who looked at her feel a little slapped.

"stare--"

The black cat's sad eyes looked at Kazuya.

"No, no, you never told others not to see it, and I'm really not that familiar with you, so don't look at me with that horrible look!"

And don't go too far, sticking to the principle that one more thing is worse than one less thing, decided not to interrupt, but silently complained in his heart.

"Oh, just your doujinshi!

And also said a lot of heavy words, right?

That's right, because your doujinshi is completely the product of excess self-awareness!

It's too laborious to look at, and you still want Yingri-senpai to evaluate it, please think too much!

You really are far from her creative level! "

Tong Nao ruthlessly commented on the black cat's colleagues, which made Kazuya cry secretly. You must know that the similar evaluation just now, and the more objective evaluation also made the black cat want to cry. Now Tong Nai's this A more ruthless, even mocking criticism, I don't know how the black cat will react.

However, He also underestimated the competitive psychology aroused by the sense of opposition between the girls, the black cat did not feel down, on the contrary, he was full of energy:

"You look like you've seen a lot?

But what qualifications do you have to judge me?

It's so funny!

The person who can criticize me, Kashiwagi-senpai, she is a first-class fan artist, her ability to create plots is also very good, and she is very clear about the situation in the industry; Aragaki-senpai, although he has no identity, he also said that his The work has also reached the final round of the New Talent Award.

They are all real people, so their evaluations are a bit ugly, but I can accept them, and you are a complete novice in the field of homesteading, right?

This is the first time to participate in comi, and the game level is not as good as mine. The fanbooks and fanfictions I read are probably not as good as mine. What qualifications do you have to criticize me!

Really laughed out loud! "

"Where am I not qualified?

Look at my evaluation just now, it is almost the same as Kazuo's criticism of you!

As long as a reader has the right to criticize a writer's work, why can't I?

Is my criticism inaccurate? "

"Tsk tsk, who knows if your criticism was told to you by Senior Aragaki and then you just remembered it and forced it over there!"

The black cat raised his eyebrows in disdain and said.

"Well, you dead cat, you dare to underestimate me, be careful I will write a novel and kill you in seconds!

Then you have to be careful! "

look on the face as if written

"If you're not the creator, get away from me," Kirino said heavily to the black cat who was extremely disdainful of himself.

"I'll wait and see!

Please rate me when your work is ready for publication! "

"Dead cat, damn black, you wait for me, be careful I write you into my novel and torture her to death!"

Tono said through gritted teeth.

"If you dare to do this, don't blame me for being ruthless, and write you into my novel to make her suffer."

"Then write it like that!"

"It doesn't matter!"

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"Ah, this, at least it seems that the black cat should be fine, arguing with Tong Nao is really a good way to boost morale!"

Quietly leaving the core area of ​​the battlefield, Kato, who was also facing the side, said happily.

"Yeah, yeah, now that Aragaki-san's atrocities of abusing girls can be covered up, it's really gratifying!"

"Well, Kato, don't always say things like that, okay?

It's not easy for me too! "

"Okay, let's put it another way. Aragaki-san made a girl sad, and then solved the problem with another girl. Is that okay?"

"Why does my image of a scumbag become more obvious when I say this?"

"Eh, is that so?"

"You're fake and didn't notice it, it's fake!"

"Well, don't care about these details!"

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"Well, Kazuya, listen carefully, I'm going to create novels too, so you guys will also evaluate my novels at that time!"

At this moment, Tongno jumped in front of Kazuya again aggressively, but the previous time she was to protect the black cat, this time she was to attack the black cat.

"Don't let him let the water go when he evaluates you!"

"Ha, how could I possibly do such a thing?

I'm going to defeat you on a frontal battlefield! "

"Well, then I'll wait!"

The black cat looked at Kirino, who had max anger and max fighting spirit, and said with some humor. Then, she rolled her eyes and stared at Kazuya:

"That, senior, senior Aragaki, can you guide my writing?

I don't have anyone else I know to ask for, Kashiwagi-senpai, I'm really embarrassed to harass her at my current level. Since you almost won the newcomer award, your level of writing novels must be quite good, right? "

Looking at the black cat who suddenly turned into a soft girl, a senior's coquettish black cat, Kazuya's hair stood up, and asked tremblingly:

"That, Miss Black Cat, it is said that I am not that familiar with you, right?

Hey, you're not that familiar, are you? "

"But,"

The black cat opened his eyes and looked at Kazuya, looking like he was about to cry,

"Senior really criticized me too much just now!

I need to make amends for my heart beaten by my seniors, right? "

"Hey hey hey, this is a foul!"

He also patted his head and reluctantly agreed,

"But I haven't written a novel for almost a year. It should be said that after the last failure, I was a little discouraged and didn't want to write anything."

"It doesn't matter, Senior Aragaki only needs to give me a little guidance on what I will create in the future, and I don't need to write it by hand!"

The black cat showed a sly smile.

"It's pitch black, you're too shameless, aren't you?

What about a one-on-one fair competition? "

Tong Nao widened his eyes and pointed hard at the black cat.

The black cat just grabbed Kazuya's arm and said proudly:

"One-on-one creation, but it's always okay to find someone to guide you, right?

Or that you can't find someone to teach you?

That's really sad too! "

"Who said that I have no one to teach, that, for example, for example, right, you can let Heya teach, so can I, can't be the same person who didn't have guidance before?"

Looking at the proud black cat, Kirino grabbed Kazuya's other arm,

"Hey, Kazuya, you can't just guide the dark, let's be fair, and I knew you earlier, and I have a better relationship with you!"

"Che, you can only rely on this!"

"Anyone who uses the situation that he was hit just now in exchange for sympathy is not qualified to speak of me!"

"I'm obviously not a writer or an editor. I'm just an ordinary person. Why are you two fighting me so hard?"

Looking at the two facing each other, Kazuya said helplessly,

"It's more reliable for you to find Sazhi and introduce a better fan writer than to find a half-assed person like me?"

"no!"

The two said in unison, and Kazuya closed his mouth.

"It won't work if you don't make up for the damage that senior has done to me!"

"Hey, if you dare to help a black person alone, I'll tell Ayase the news about you hooking up with middle school girls. If you let your sister know that you're hooking up with middle school girls, tsk tsk!"

"Aragaki-san is still popular with girls as always!"

"So Kato, don't mess around!"

Chapter 94: Can't think of a title, it's a transitional chapter anyway

Girls (except for the younger sister) are troublesome animals, and girls (except for the younger sister) are unexpectedly troublesome creatures. This is the deepest feeling that I have seen when the three girls in front of me are somehow in a mess.

If the current situation of Kirino and Kuroko, two animals that would burst like a powder keg when they get together, is understandable, the one next to them seems to listen to their quarrel with relish, occasionally interjecting the name What happened to Megumi Kato's creature?