My Name is Kosaka Kyosuke but I Don't Want to Be Pushed Down by My Sister

After saying this, Wu Geng Liuli was a little dazed, so he continued.

"Actually, I feel that there is not much difference between writing novels and drawing comics. They are both a means of creation, but compared to comics that can intuitively show everything through pictures, novels can only show a general outline through words. , but the general core is actually the same, they all tell a story to readers.

But I always feel that your focus of storytelling is completely deviated, and your novels give me the feeling that they are not telling stories at all, but printing.

No, that's not quite accurate——

how to say?It was like, let me think about it, yeah, like... no soul.

That's right!Your story lacks soul. "

Wu Geng Liuli froze in place, "No soul?"

"Well, yes, there is no soul. Read your own novel carefully and see what you are focusing on throughout the novel? Leaving aside the other characters that appear in the story, the heroine alone has only It's just a quick sentence, forget it, the story unfolding is too weird, right?

The heroine suddenly came to a different world, without thinking about anything, just accepted this setting instantly like a machine, and became a witch for no reason?

That's okay too...

After all, some people are not very good at characterization, but what about your storyline?After the heroine became a witch, why did she fight with others?Where did the enemy come from?Why attack the heroine?Not at all, it just introduces the enemy's props and the protagonist's props inexplicably, but this part of the battle is not badly written.

What about worldview?After the protagonist defeats the enemy, he comes to a town. After entering the big map, it’s time to start showing the world view, right?

still none……

Another enemy jumped out with inexplicable words, shouting lines such as I am the witch of Andelina, and then was killed by the protagonist again.

And this second enemy is obviously Kosaka Kirino!What kind of grudge do you have with my old sister?Every novel has to write her so miserable... Wait!No, why do you have characterizations in this paragraph? ? ?Was it to make me realize that this character was written after my sister? ? "

Kyosuke Takasaka quickly flipped through the following content again, and found that this paragraph in the full text portrayed the characters.

Then I dug out the novels written by Wugeng Liuli and took a closer look. There was no lack of descriptions of characters and stories in them. Although the agreement was very thin, it was not almost completely omitted like this novel. This time Not only did Wugeng Liuli fail to make progress, but instead made him regress.

However, he can roughly guess that Wugeng Liulizhi made such a mistake.

In fact, it is Wugeng Liuli's misunderstanding of commercial novels. Wugeng Liuli believes that commercial novels have no story at all and only characters fight with various cool abilities.

"You don't think commercial novels are enough as long as the fighting is well written?"

"Isn't it? When I read those novels, I only focus on skills, and those characters use various abilities to fight back and forth."

Kosaka Kyosuke was not too surprised by this at the time. At the beginning, he had such an idea that it would be a good manga to explode a Super Saiyan and fight with the enemy. However, it turned out that this idea was too superficial. Without the foreshadowing of the story, it will only make people feel inexplicable, so they can understand Wugeng Liuli's current thoughts by then.

"Is it because you only pay attention to the various abilities in it?! Go back and seriously read those novels, are these the only ones?"

Saying that, Kyosuke Kosaka stood up. Although he doesn’t read light novels, some assistants in the studio like to read some light novels on weekdays, so there are also some light novels in the studio. Kyosuke Kosaka took them over, and everyone It is the best-selling light novel at present, and it is presented one by one in front of Wugeng Liuli.

"Have you seen any of these?"

Wugeng Liuli is not stupid, she has already realized what Kosaka Kyousuke is going to say.

"I've seen them all."

After speaking, without waiting for Kyosuke Kosaka to speak, he took out a copy and started to read it. With the words of Kyosuke Kosaka just now in front of him, Wugeng Liuli no longer reads roughly like before. I will only read in detail on the content I am interested in, but carefully read the content of the whole novel.

Gradually, I discovered some places that I have been neglecting all the time, and compared them one by one with what I wrote, the difference is really big.

What I have written is really too much.

"..."

After reading the whole novel, several hours later, the sky outside the window was completely dark.

Then she realized that she was drawing manga, and at this moment she felt a little dazed, as if Kosaka Kyosuke’s drawing manga never stopped, except for going out, almost every time she saw Kosaka Kyosuke, Kosaka Kyosuke would sit like this At the desk, he concentrates on drawing cartoons.

24 never came out

Sometimes Wugeng Ruri feels that Kyosuke Kosaka’s life is too monotonous. The whole day is nothing but comics, just like a machine. Standing in front of the computer and writing manuscripts endlessly, she was at a loss and at a loss...

Facts have proved that I thought too much at that time.

I'm just a jerk, and it's not my turn to think about those things.

But this idea still didn't disappear in her mind, until she noticed that Kyosuke Kosaka often smiled unconsciously at the corners of his mouth when he was drawing manga. Sometimes the smile was full of malice, sometimes he smiled happily, and sometimes It's very weird... No matter what kind of smile it is, she can feel one thing...

Kyosuke Takasaka is really happy.

Although this kind of happiness is not very much, most of the time it is boring like a machine, or even distressed, but thinking about the temporary workers she has been working on a daily basis, she really came to her senses.

No matter how boring and troublesome...

At least Kyosuke Kosaka is doing something he loves.

This is already happier than most people.

"I am leaving."

"Ah."

Kosaka Kyosuke didn't even raise his head, he didn't care at all, his mind was still immersed in his manga.

Afterwards, although he realized that it was not safe for Wugeng Liuli to go home all night, and he also understood that this was an opportunity to gain favor, but between brushing favor and comics, he resolutely chose the latter. How could she not have a woman around her worth? !

But he is not a piece of wood.

"Wait a minute, it's so late, I'm a little worried about you going back alone..."

Wugeng Liuli thought that Kosaka Kyosuke was going to send her back, but she didn't want to waste Kosaka Kyosuke's time, and when she was about to say no, Kosaka Kyosuke continued.