No one likes to take detours with their heads depressed, and ignore all advice and suggestions, right?
It is commendable to have the spirit of bearing hardships and standing hard work, but this is no longer hard work, but a poor brain...
"I haven't watched it yet, but it might be better to watch it now and talk about it."
After Xue Nai finished speaking, she got up and said, "I'm going to print it. When I came here just now, I saw that there is a copier in the lobby of the hotel. It is more intuitive to have paper as a carrier. This will be better."
So, while the others were still soundly asleep, Chen Feng and Xue Nai discussed his article in the room.
Chen Feng said that it was his first time to write something, that is to say, he had read a few popular light novels before writing, summed up the main points and started writing directly, but Xue Nao always felt a little unscientific...
In the previous content, she could still see some of Chen Feng's youthful writing, but the more she went on, the more surprised she was, because Chen Feng's plot and missions were too proficient in shaping certain events, and many words and sentences were no longer original. The level that people entering the industry can have, and the private goods in it are not too obvious, but it can give readers a philosophical reflection.
Reading through the whole article, I find it very entertaining, but as long as readers think about some things in it and the deeds of certain characters, it will give readers a feeling of chills in the back.
Between the lines that seem to be relaxed and cheerful, actually hide a lot of thought-provoking thoughts, and these thoughts have become the central point of his first volume, sublimating the whole theme.
Gimmick, entertainment, seriousness, philosophy...
Is this trying to catch all types of readers?
Taking a long breath, Xue Nai's eyes stayed on the manuscript in her hand for a long time.
In the first half, she was able to give a little advice on writing, but it gradually became more difficult later on. Until now, after reading it, Yukino didn't know how to point out the problems, because with her attainments, Being able to point out the first half of the problem has already become the limit.
Is this the person who still crushes himself in grades after skipping a grade, stepping on his own head to get to the top of the grade?
She had already made corresponding psychological preparations in her heart, but when Xue Nai really finished reading it, she felt powerless.
She has suffered another huge blow since her sister Yang Nao.
"Sorry, I don't think there is anything that needs to be changed. The comparison between the first part and the second part has formed a feeling of step-by-step progression. I also take back the need to rewrite the first half. It is good as it is now. "
The progress visible to the naked eye can be so vividly and vividly reflected in a volume of more than one hundred thousand novels, the more you read, the more comfortable you feel, which reader does not like it?
"Is that so..."
Chen Feng thought for a while.
Yukino put the manuscript on the bed, squinted her eyes and asked, "Will Chiyo die?"
"what?"
"I'm talking about will Miss Fujino Chiyo die? This character is great. At the beginning, she stayed with the protagonist as a spy. Although she disappeared due to an explosion at the end of this volume, this character gave me a feeling of flesh and blood. , even if it’s a villain, I like it very much.”
She was fascinated when she was reading Chen Feng's article just now, but when the climax was halfway through, Chen Feng ended the volume like a disgusting person, and Xue Nai, who was so angry, almost couldn't hold back the manuscript in her hand. Tear it in half.
"I don't know, it depends on my mood."
It was such an answer that one couldn't help but want to beat him up.
"Hey... In short, this is very good. Do you want to submit a manuscript? If it is published, let me know, and I will buy it."
The room next door seemed to be very noisy, and the sound poured in from the open window. Xue Nai paused for a moment, got up and said, "I'll go back and clean up first, it looks like I should be leaving."
"Well, thanks, do you want to smoke?"
"..."
Xue Nao didn't speak, just looked at him coldly.
After a few seconds, Yukino sighed.
"I don't smoke. If you really want to, just buy me a can of coffee."
Not long after Yukino left, Yotsuba bounced over to inform Chen Feng that he was going to the ski resort by car, and Chen Feng found Sayuri at Shizuka Hiratsuka.
Sayuri seemed to have been there once before, knowing that everyone would go again later, so she stored all her equipment in the ski resort. Only Chen Feng mentioned the equipment bought for him by the five girls and planned to leave.
He didn't really like whoring other people's things for free, so he returned the money to them last night without saying anything.
"Ah Feng—let's go."
Rachel was very excited. She had never gone skiing before, and that's how children are exposed to new things.
Facing the little girl's urging, Chen Feng picked up his things and walked out, and checked the condition of the room by the way.
However, Chen Feng did not notice that outside his room, near the window, an arm-sized bug shook off the snow on its body, revealing its original appearance.
It looks a lot like a very big cockroach, except that there are dangling tentacles at the position of the mouthparts, and its limbs are even more weirdly oily green.
Probably noticing that all the people in the room had left, it got into the air conditioner outside, and finally entered the room through some gaps.
Just as it was about to hide in a corner, a black hole with a diameter of one meter suddenly appeared about two meters above its head.
Swah——
"squeak!!"
The bug flapped its wings and wanted to fly away, because it felt a very terrible force.
But before it had time to react, a huge octopus-like tentacle protruded from the black hole, slapped the weird bug directly, and smashed the TV beside it into scrap iron.
Accompanied by a burst of dust and a large hole suddenly appeared in the room, the bug and the thick tentacle disappeared, as if everything just now was just an illusion.
But the embarrassment at the scene is telling everyone with the facts that absolutely what happened here.
Chen Feng and others who had just arrived at the lobby were still waiting for the rented bus to arrive, when they suddenly heard a loud noise coming from the direction of the hotel room, and everyone turned their heads to look.
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