I, the Heroine Raider

Also because of reading the third edition of the manuscript, Kirisu Mafuyu accelerated the speed of turning pages after finding that the previous ones were basically the same.

Turning to Chapter 4, Kirisu Mafuyu found that these manuscripts were basically the same as the third edition, which immediately disappointed Kirisu Mafuyu. She thought that the new manuscript, which was so confident, would be different.

However, she did not stop turning the pages in her hands.

Because of this, I turned to Chapter 4. Since the previous four chapters have not changed much, the place I want to modify is Chapter 5.

In the third edition of the manuscript, the first four chapters are daily routines and foreshadowing. Chapter 4 ends with the heroine making up her mind to become the king of light novels. What keeps readers looking forward is exactly what they want to see. How the main character achieves the goal.This also leads to a direct weakening of the description of the relationship, and weakening the description of this aspect means making the characters less prominent.

So what is the difference between the last chapter of this edition of the manuscript?

With curiosity, Kirisu Mafuyu opened the first page of Chapter 5.

Sure enough!

Tongsu Mafuyu keenly found that this version of the manuscript is completely different from the previous version.

Do not!

It cannot be said to be completely different, but on the basis of the original Chapter 5 heroine’s goal of becoming the king of light novels, a date to an amusement park was added, more precisely, it should be the heroine’s voluntary confession trip .

to here.

It started to arouse Kirisu Mafuyu's curiosity.

Different from the original one who guessed the great happy ending at a glance, this time, the confession that will only appear in the final volume will be taken directly to the first volume. What exactly do you want to do?Either way, it's a little too hasty.

If the female protagonist is now with the male protagonist, will readers still keep their expectations?

But when he saw the end, Kirisu Madong's eyes couldn't help but turn red.

"Too much! Too much!"

Tongsu Madong scolded there alone: ​​"The male lead, this idiot, under such circumstances, actually rejected Sayuka, and the date is like a piece of wood, it's too much! This male lead can never be forgiven! Sayuka! It's so pathetic."

and many more!

Why should I sympathize with Sayuka!

Tongsu Madong immediately reacted. The prototype of this Saya is Shiyu of Kasumigaoka, and the prototype of the male protagonist is Masamune Izumi. The hero rejected Shiyu of Kasumigaoka, her rival. Shouldn't she be happy? Why is she so sympathetic to Saya now? And you want to support Sayuka so much, so that she and the hero have a perfect ending?

Tongsu Mayu looked confused.

But there is no doubt that the heroine Sayuka has left a very, very deep impression on her.

Especially the scene where the last scene became a lost dog made her feel a pain in her heart.

Really didn't expect it at all.

The ending left at the end of the first volume was not a happy end, but a bad end.

Kirisu Mafuyu is not a professional editor, so there is no way to say any professional comments, but in her opinion, compared with the previous version, the heroine Sayaka has completely come to life and has become an impressive one. , a very sympathetic heroine, even for this heroine, she wants to continue reading the second novel.

And she desperately wanted to know.

Can the heroine achieve the consummation of love, or is the heroine really going to be a loser?

Same as Kirisu Mayu.

In the club room after school, everyone else had the same idea after reading the novel.

The daily preparation of the four chapters, they witnessed the emotional experience of the female protagonist Sa Yujia and the male protagonist, just when they were expecting a happy end in the future, Kasumi Hill Shiyu came to a 180-degree turning point, with the confession being rejected as a end.

It is precisely because of this defeated dog ending that the heroine Sayuka is completely alive.

Perfect things can make people happy, imperfect things can make people sad, sad, and sympathetic. The heroine with her own charm has become a defeated dog, and she challenges the king of light novels for love. It's hard for people to remember.

Naturally.

This finishing touch takes the novel to a new level.

Izumi Masamune also detected through the system that this novel has reached the level of being a king. As long as the continuity of the following plots is maintained, the ten volumes of novels have at least [-] million copies sold.

"Genuine Lord."

Yukino Yukino looked at Masamune Izumi: "Can I show this manuscript to Senior Yuanzi? I think the quality of this novel is not inferior to yours. It has reached a level of perfection. The capital of the king."

One stone stirs up a thousand waves.

Yukino Yukino's words made everyone's eyes flash with different emotions.

A trace of loneliness flashed in Kato Megumi's eyes. As companions of the club, on the one hand, they hoped that Shiyu of Kasumigaoka would succeed, and on the other hand, they were somewhat envious of Shiyu of Kasumigaoka.

Becoming a king-level light novelist, isn't it the same as Masamune Izumi?

In this case, no matter from which point of view, the two of them are more like a match made in heaven.At that time, the two light novelists were chatting, and it might be difficult for them to even talk about it afterward.

But in general, I am most happy for Shiyu of Kasumigaoka.

After all, this is the first activity of the club, and it is also the wish of Masamune Izumi.

If it can be successful, Izumi Masamune must be very happy, right?

As everyone imagined, Masamune Izumi at this time can be said to have mixed feelings after reading this novel.

On the one hand, she feels guilty for rejecting Shiyu of Kasumigaoka, making the heroine so sad and sad, and on the other hand, she feels joy at the success of her first club activity.

But anyway, with this work.