A Salted Fish in the Second Dimension

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No.15 page, supplement of supporting roles.Although I feel that there are too many settings, it should be to make the work look more complete.

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No.30 six pages, the setting of the villain boss.Damn, are there so many characters?

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Page.Times background setting.Explain the background of the times, so that readers can feel more involved?

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No. 70 pages.set up.How many pages are left to finish the setting.

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When Hanyu turned the manuscript page after page, he found that it was full of story settings.At first, Hanyu kept reading patiently and carefully, trying to understand what the black cat was thinking.Then slowly Hanyu got further behind, and Hanyu's patience became less and less.Hanyu once tried to give up and continue watching, but because he agreed to the black cat, Hanyu could only bite the bullet and continue watching.

But in the end, Hanyu lost his patience and stopped reading carefully, but found that as long as he was still setting, Hanyu would turn the page and skip it.

As a result, after skipping nearly [-]% of the pages, Hanyu finally saw the beginning of the story.

"Huh, the prologue, it's normal to have more settings." After comforting himself, Hanyu watched the beginning of the story with a hint of fear.

Chapter 390 Five Setting See also Setting

"Maya, what the hell is this written?" When Hanyu was patient again, he read the last part of the black cat's manuscript.It didn't take long for Hanyu to collapse, shouting and throwing the manuscript to the ground.

Originally, the story was normal at the beginning, and Hanyu could barely continue to read it, but after a while, a supporting character jumped out and began to introduce various world backgrounds, ins and outs, to the protagonist.That is to say, from here, the novel fell into a cycle of talking about setting again. Hanyu couldn't help turning to the last page of the novel, and found that the supporting character hadn't finished explaining the setting.It is equivalent to that in the prologue of the story that Black Cat gave himself, more than 90.00% of the content is talking about the setting, and it is justified.So Hanyu finally couldn't bear it anymore.

However, after dropping the manuscript to the ground, Hanyu picked it up embarrassedly and put it away so that it wouldn't look damaged.After all, at this time, the black cat's handwritten manuscript, no matter what was written in it, Hanyu didn't have the face to break the manuscript for others.

Then looking at the black cat who was always online in the chat software, after hesitating for a while, Hanyu decided to send a message to the other party.

"I've finished reading the manuscript."

"Hanyu-kun, what do you think? Is there anything that needs to be improved?" The black cat seemed to have been standing in front of the computer waiting for Hanyu to read it.After Hanyu's message was sent, he immediately replied within a few seconds.

Hanyu felt the eagerness of the black cat from the reply time, and he didn't know what to say to the other party for a while.Finally, after hesitating for a while, Hanyu replied to a message from the past.

"It looks a little subtle."

The nervous black cat on the other end of the computer also caught his breath after seeing Hanyu's reply.Because of the experience of being rejected many times before, the black cat is very self-aware, knowing that this reply from Hanyu is definitely not the meaning of how good his novel is, but euphemistically saying that his novel is not good.

So some lost black cats tapped on the keyboard and asked Hanyu. "Is there anything wrong with the novel? Or is there something to improve?"

Hanyu looked at the black cat's question and wondered if he should directly say what the problem was. He was a little worried about whether it would hit the black cat.

So it took a long time for Hanyu to organize the language and reply to the black cat with the most euphemistic words possible.

"How do you say it. Although the settings in your novel were quite interesting and attractive at first when I saw them. But after reading it, I found that your settings took up too much space."

"However, these settings are the essence of my novels."

'Your novel at this time, not the set is good or not. ' Hanyu looked at the black cat's reply, and complained in his heart with some toothache.Then reply again.

"But your settings account for nearly [-]% of the content. Although the settings are very interesting, too many words will make readers tired."

After Hanyu sent it, he found that the message box indicated that the black cat was typing. For fear that the black cat would be entangled in the settings and would not give up, he hurriedly continued typing.

"I'll make an analogy. It's like people who read your novels want to eat delicious food. As a result, before the dishes are served, the owner of the restaurant begins to introduce the history, techniques and sources of these dishes to you. And this introduction It hasn't stopped. At first everyone was hungry and looking forward to the food, but after entering the store, they just listened to the owner's introduction but couldn't see where the food was. Do you understand this feeling?"

Hanyu felt that this analogy was more euphemistic and appropriate, but after sending it out, he still waited anxiously for the response from the black cat.

After a long time, Hanyu was relieved to see the reply from the black cat.

"I see, I will correct it."

Hanyu looked at Black Cat's reply and felt that the other party should have obeyed his own opinion, and couldn't help feeling a little relieved.

"Well, if you encounter any problems, you can come to me, and I can give you some advice. Then when is it convenient to return this manuscript to you."

"Hanyu-kun, it's inconvenient for your legs and feet right now, so I'll put them with you for the time being. Let's talk about it when your legs are healed."

Hanyu frowned at the black cat's reply.

"However, wouldn't it be inconvenient if you don't have the original manuscript, if you want to revise the novel."

"It doesn't matter, I have all those settings in my mind."

'All in your head? ' Hanyu looked at the black cat's reply, and glanced at the manuscript at hand in a speechless manner.This thick manuscript has a few hundred thousand words, of which [-]% are settings.Hanyu suddenly felt that it was not a simple matter to suggest writing a novel to the setting maniac of Black Cat.

So Hanyu had a headache and replied to the other party. "Anyway, you should make the setting less. It's better to integrate the setting perfectly into the plot of the novel. It feels like you eat a delicious dish, and when you feel a little curious and ask the boss, the boss jumps out. Let me tell you about the cooking situation. Is this how you feel?"

"let me try."

Then Hanyu ended the call with the black cat with some trepidation, praying in his heart that the other party would listen to his opinion.Hanyu said that he really didn't want to read the setting book again.

However, since he was chatting with the black cat, Hanyu naturally thought of Kosaka Kirino, and when he saw that the other party was just ahead, he sent a message.

"Are you there?"

"Yes, is something wrong?"

"No, I just feel like I've been out of touch for some time, so give me my greetings."

"Hehe, so you are harassing me because you have nothing to do?"