How Did It Become a River Crab?

In this process, the lower area is to clench the fist, and the upper area is to throw the fist out.

In order to increase the threat of various collected items in the early stage of the story, I set up the lock skill node, so that the combination of the crab and the only brother can do more interesting things. At the same time, the unlock skill itself is also to accumulate strength and hold A process of tightening the fist.

Write the fee again, send it out first, and there will be more

Small talk and hip pull at the end of the paper

Let me see where I am.

Oh, make a fist.

In terms of the structure of clenching fists, the story of the entire volume can be roughly divided into the following parts: the introduction part: from the birth of the detention room to the escape from the laboratory, this is the beginning, and it is to let everyone know what these two old scumbags are going to do.

Early stage: Escape all the way, deal with all kinds of confiscated items, thrilling and exciting, until you find Hemo and Brother Ji.This is the first half of the lower area.

Mid-term: From the beginning of encountering the melting furnace, all the way to the real protagonist's little brother fighting and killing the melting furnace, all the staff in the upper area regained their full strength, clenched their iron fists, and were ready to go.

Late stage: Go to the upper area, kill the BOSS at high speed with combined punches, the pioneer of the canyon hits the wall violently, the joy is boundless, and the victory ends.

It can be said that in terms of the plot structure, I am personally satisfied with this volume. Each character has a clear positioning, and some characteristics have been written, and the last set of combined punches is also very refreshing. I wrote it quite destructively. The joy of cracking rocks.

But in terms of writing and small plot arrangements, I found a very serious problem, that is, the mid-term is too bloated.

I am personally satisfied with the early and late plots. In the early stage, I want to write about the joy of Mo Lan and the only brother who opened up wasteland and write about the happy interaction between these two living treasures. Now it seems that I have written so many I feel very much, such as the section of the friend statue, with that sense of joy.

But after entering the mid-term, the plot had too many characters and too many things to do, and I fell into the difficulty of choosing which one to focus on.

In the whole mid-term, there are actually two goals, release the boxing sister, and blow up the melting furnace. Unexpectedly, a veteran with a normal IQ made it more difficult to defeat him, and the protagonist team had to do too much preparation, which made it painful for me to write the middle part, and it was also troublesome for the brothers to watch, which was quite miserable.

(But there is one thing to say, I personally like the role of Furnace very much. In the whole volume, I think he is the only villain who barely stands up. His sister got rid of it after Durkan’s death in the setting Control, have a good time, casual mention here.)

Therefore, I deliberately deleted two collaterals that I like very much, namely [Ocean Current in Dream] from Lobotomy Corporation, and an original collateral, which accelerated the rhythm of the mid-term decisive battle.

At the same time, I learned a lesson, accelerated the pace of the later stage, and cut out all unnecessary factors, that is, fucked up all the villains. As a result, everyone has seen it, and it is indeed effective.

But what’s interesting is that even in the bloated mid-term, there are plots in this paragraph that I think are very happy to write. One is Brother Ji saving people, and the other is the decisive battle between the little brother and the mutant brothers of the melting furnace. There is a plan, but when I write it, my blood boils and I am very happy.

As for me, I personally think that the whole dungeon is the best machine brother.

Damn, this guy wasn't even on my outline!

Brother Ji originally had fewer roles than Sister Quan, but when I actually wrote about him and started to outline the details for him, I realized that this character has great potential, and I can see the big from the small, and outline the unity of the top animals character.

Nothing but kindness

If the word count exceeds, send it out first

Small talk and hip pull at the end of the paper

Because of my personal growth experience, I am more or less a bit extreme. I think that good people are more ruthless than bad people, heroes are more ruthless than villains, and swords are not sharp enough to uphold justice.This kind of thinking is extreme and inappropriate. Don’t study it, I just mention it.

Out of this point of view, I wrote the lunatic concentration camp of Qianbaihu. This is a concentrated area of ​​strikers with poor average quality but a strong bottom line. It is also a group of players that I will focus on describing in the future.

Combining Brother Ji's early childhood education attributes with the former hundred animals, the plot of the damage transfer god-level operation was finally obtained. In fact, this skill was born for this moment, and the final effect also met expectations, which is impressive. satisfy.The character of Brother Ji may not be included in the protagonist group, but I believe that anyone who has read this book will never forget this character in the future.

Brother Ji, you will always be God.

From this point, I confirmed a point of view of the horse thief/crow/squid/bird thief teacher. The outline is used to constantly modify, overthrow and rebuild. Establishing the outline itself is a boring job, and the first edition will definitely have various The problem is that it needs to be constantly filled with new inspiration in subsequent updates, and properly modified according to readers' feedback, so that the story can be good-looking.

I have benefited a lot, Mr. Squid, I wish your new book is still a hit.

At the same time, I also learned that the longer the story structure, the easier it is to collapse due to various problems. Therefore, no matter what the story is, the length must be properly controlled to avoid collapse.

The next Holy Grail War will be a short story similar to Ghost Slayer, the core of which is the Jedi battle of the seven top animals, hoping to improve my ability to arrange short plots.

Of course, fighting all the way doesn't seem to test much structural ability...

All in all, work hard to continue, it is rare to realize a dream in this life, try not to make it short-lived.

The next step is the traditional art of hip-pull literature: hip-pull strips.

Due to the one-day outbreak, I have now entered the brink of burnout, and I need to take a day off (up to two days, but most likely not two days) to adjust my mentality, go out to eat and play, recharge my energy, and sort out the connection part and Outline for the next volume.

All kinds of martial arts, this is hip pulling, please forgive me.

It's late at night, go to bed early, I wish you all good health, ten consecutive flashes, and never see teammates like He Daojian.

Crab Panel so far

A portion of the income of this copy has been calculated.

【Miscellaneous Summoner Mo Lan】

Level: 【16】

Health: 100%

Energy value: 250

Mechanism: [Race Template: Canyon Sprinter] (Void Evolution 3/3)

Mechanism skills: [Void Evolution], [River Crab Sprint], [Acceleration Altar], [Canyon Swift Crab], [Wild Area RBQ], [Canyon Pioneer], [Storm Gathering], [What happened to eating you? 】

Skills (9/10): [Self-Explosion Button], [Summon Specialization LV.29], [Durability Aura +1], [Concentration Aura], [Black Limousine], [Heart Box], [Attack Command], [Summon Ice Archer], [Aphotic Shield (Improved Version)]

Equipment: [Pioneer Shield +1], [Special Luxury Ball "Bond"], [Swift Emblem], [Programmer Magic Book (Level II]...

addition:

[Sun Flame Cloak +1]: Slightly

[Zzlot Teleportation Gate +3 (Esdeth Gene Enhancement)]: slightly [Flag of Command]: slightly

[Esdeth's Blessing]: Physical Defense +2%

[Excellent Trainer]: All [Pokémon] all attributes +5%

Collectibles: [Stone Beetle Model], [Lightning Bird Model]

Backpack: [Thunder God Slaughter Arrow], [Steel Mixture], [Sakura Axe (2/3)], [Spring X5], [Holy Grail War Invitation Letter], [Exquisite Summoning Scroll 1/3], [Super Madness] Dance Disco Ball], [Atonementer's Contract], [Storage Iron Cage (loaded)], [Rhode Island Talking Machine (3/3)]

Endless points: 8500

Programmer Spellbook pages: Hammer (I), Swiftness (I), Triple (I), Magic Arrow (I)

There are also selected capsules X2, normal capsules X2, extra strong, and one strong each. In addition, the little brother killed three bosses in a row, and now he is level 45. The little old bean defeated the puppet and rose to level 7, adding a level W, now it is Level 1 Q4 Level W1 Level E1 Level R If there is an omission, please point it out.

Chapter 290 IX Traditional Arts

Seeing that Dekan was blown up and all the infected children were protected by Rhodes Island, Brother Raider let out a sigh of relief, closed the spectator interface, and began to wait for the rewards to be settled.

"Player [Fierce Bird], the dungeon [Prisoner of the Rhine] you participated in has ended and is being settled for you. You will receive corresponding contribution compensation based on your contribution to various plot tasks in this task. "

"During the judgment of passive games, players who are judged as passive games will be deducted endless points and randomly delete skills... The judgment is complete, you are a highly motivated player."

"During reward determination... your comprehensive contribution compensation rate is 39%. Your compensation rewards are as follows..."

It's really not high.

Saving children is not within the scope of any mission requirements, so if I GG because of this, I will naturally not get much compensation and rewards, this is a normal thing...

Brother Ji let out a sigh, feeling a little nervous in his heart, but he didn't regret it. What a person can gain in the game is never just a simple reward.

Just as he hastily browsed through a series of rewards and was about to go offline for a rest, a new message suddenly came out of the system.

"In addition, due to your positive performance in the game, trying to protect innocent children outside the mission, the system will reward you with an additional 4000 endless points, and selected gashapon coupon X1 as a reward."

"Reason for the reward - the verses of the Lord of Endless Space are being played for you:"

"I've always felt that one of the most stupid things in the world is to test the kindness and bottom line of others."

"You use other people's tolerance and kindness to shit on other people's faces. He takes a step back and you take a step until one day he finally can't bear it anymore and shoots a gun from your ass to your forehead. You can tell your father about it." His kindness can't stand the test? I can go to your mother and give me a B."

"While raising your face, behaving like a dog to lure the wicked, while coldly disgusting those who are really doing practical things, treating them harshly is the greatest waste of resources."

"Kindness has always been limited. What we have to do is to encourage every piece of humanity and maintain every bottom line, instead of disgusting good people for some philosophical reason of cerebral palsy. What kindness needs is guidance. What should really be tested is Those gutter bugs are the ones who sit in corners, spray their shit in other people's faces, and gloat about it."

"Maybe there are many people who disagree with my point of view, and his eloquence is so good that I can't speak against him at all, but fortunately... those who can speak well of me have never beaten me."

Brother Ji listened to the whole sentence in a daze, and stared at the extra rewards on the account. He was dazed for a while, and the little fear in his heart disappeared.

"Damn, cool."

"The settlement of the experience value is completed, and the player [Mo Lan] has been upgraded to level 16."

"My Crabman is back!"

Mo Lan landed a superhero landing perfectly from the portal, stood up, and looked around her familiar personal hall.

"Huan, welcome back!"

Playing backgammon against Nidorino on the ground, the little sister Yazi, who was about to continue her No. 19 winning streak, stood up immediately, and Pata Pata ran to Mo Lan and bowed to greet her, quite ceremonially.

"Little sister performed very well today. Without you, we won't be able to win at the beginning." Just after the massage, the steel claw crab master Crab Yan Dayue, who was in a good mood, praised the little sister sincerely. My brother is free to move around, and I started to return to traditional arts indefinitely, counting the gains of this dungeon.

"Hey, you, how did you grow up so big?"

"Roar (All kinds of martial arts, this is evolution.)"

"Waibi (This will be a milestone in the evolution of my little brother's martial arts.)"

"Roar (Miaozai, Miaozai!)"

"Nido? (Why can I never understand what you guys are talking about?)"

Amidst the chittering of the little ones, Mo Lan rubbed the pliers like a fly rubbing her hands, and began to look at her spoils from this battle... the benefits.

In terms of endless points, the main task rewarded 3500 endless points, and defeated six deposits, a total of 6X500=3000, plus the 1000 endless points received by the child rescue, plus deposits, Mo Lan now has a full 8500 points funds.

During the period when there is no need to upgrade the summoning specialization, with 8500 endless points, there are many things that can be done.

Two ordinary gashapon coupons, from the K5 mech defiled by the only brother.

Two selected gastronomy coupons, one from the Ifrit branch line, and one from the puppet who was turned into a comedian by a flying fairy. I hope this will not affect him from abandoning the dark to the bright in the future and defecting to our Great Rhodes Island.

A random enhancement coupon, from the Ifrit branch.

A special enhancement coupon, an additional reward from the main task lock skill.

Rhodes Island talker, there are three opportunities to ask Rhodes Island operators for help in PVE instances, I hope it won't be three kokodayo...

A copy of the puppet's gene.