Chapter 44 This newcomer is extraordinary
Sunday morning.
Machida Enko, who had a good night's sleep, got up.
So... sleep is a woman's good partner!Especially for an older leftover woman like her who has to work overtime on Saturdays.
Then, on a rare day off, visit the online store!
She opened the notebook in a home pajamas.
She logged in to the online shopping website and found that...because she hadn't logged in for too long, she needed to re-verify her email.
Oh my gosh, the busy Miss Machida is so sad!
With such a sigh, Machida Yuanko can only log in to the mailbox to check the verification code.
Then, because of inertia, she subconsciously entered the account password of her work email.
...Is this already stunned by work?
Machida Yuanko, who was about to quit helplessly, found out, and a new email came.
This is... the newcomer who posted yesterday?
So... so soon to submit again, is... revised?
With such curiosity, Machida Yuanko clicked on the document titled "Volume [-] has been revised".
As she read, her eyes gradually brightened.
"This newcomer... It seems that he is really revising according to the suggestions." The problems of writing and expression pointed out by Machida Yuanzi yesterday were specially replaced with red font, and they were marked as remarks. next to the paragraph.
It's refreshing, and very comfortable to read.
This kind of attitude like a student carefully correcting the teacher's homework immediately made Machida Yuanko a good student.
This kind of obedient author, and the progress is still obvious, no editor will not like it, right?
Therefore, even though it is still time to rest now, Machida Yuanko decided to take up a little of his personal time and take a good look at this manuscript.
After all, although the work is very busy, just urging the old authors to write will be exhausted, but the editor Machida is also a kind editor who likes to help newcomers.
Ah, what a hardship, Miss Machida like an angel.
So boasting with a girlish heart, Machida Yuanko simply re-examined this manuscript seriously.
"Well...here, we can improve it a little more. The words here are too rough, we can be a little more detailed...strange... I always feel that this light novel is a bit strange."
There are too many straightforward descriptions, although the style is a bit depressing, but...when it comes to the heroine, everything seems to be brighter.
This kind of melancholy with a little warm style is unexpectedly attractive.
Moreover, in this mediocre writing, occasionally there are some very attractive sentences.
For example, this sentence "overlapping contours under the setting sun is the tacit understanding between me and her".
This simple yet moving text stands out among other blunt and simple descriptions.
I always feel that this is not a novel, but more like a... love letter?
Still, it's surprisingly good to read.In the light novel industry full of routines, the same manuscripts are reviewed every day, and it is quite interesting to occasionally see such more peculiar works.
It's a pity.If the writing is better, maybe it can develop into the field of traditional literature.It's just a pity that this pen power like boiled water... I guess it's also the reason why the author turned into a light novel.
There is no arrogance and self-awareness is very clear. This is Machida Yuanzi's first impression of this newcomer.
After reading the whole article in a rare good mood, Machida Yuanko picked out some parts that needed to be revised and replied to the email again.
The next thing is to see when this guy is done changing... eh, wait, what am I doing?
Machida Yuanko, who had completely forgotten her original intention of visiting the online store, took a long time to recall this incident.
The work of a library editor is so busy and sad!
......
In the evening, the boys of the baseball team had already rushed back to have dinner in advance, leaving only two big and one small and three people walking slowly on the way back to the Sakura House.
"Have a lot of fun today, Kato-san!" Hinamori hugged Kato-san's arm, "Let's play like this together on weekends in the future!"
"No problem, Xiaoqi." Kato Megumi reached out and touched the little girl's head, "However, I'm tired, Xiaoqi is leaning on me."
"Yeah, but I'm very happy..." Although she said that, Xiao Qi's eyes started to close and open.
Children are like this, their spirits come and go quickly.
"Is Xiao Qi tired? I'll carry you back." Seeing this, Mijin Zhuo also came to touch the little girl's head, and then squatted in front of the little girl.
"Um... Mizu-san is the best..." Climbing up on the boy's back and wrapping his arms around his neck, Hinamori put his head on his shoulder and hugged him like a koala .
After a while, she lost her voice, only a small purring sound of "huhu", it seemed that she was really tired from playing.
As Xiao Qi fell asleep, the atmosphere gradually became quiet and ambiguous.
The two who were walking did not speak for a long time, and the dim yellow rays of light shone on them, pulling the shadows very long.
"Yonezu-san..." Kato Megumi approached at an unknown time, "I still want to say thank you. I'm very happy with everyone."
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