But... it looks like it's unexpectedly good?
only...
As the reading deepened, the brows of Golden Legend couldn't help wrinkling. She endured the slight discomfort and barely finished reading the five chapters, then relieved and immediately cut back to the game.
"The writing is so bad, you guy! The atmosphere of such a good story is gone."
"Is that so... I don't want to, but... I've changed it many times, and no matter how I change it, there is no good effect."
"Well... this is also a big problem. If a good plot doesn't have a matching writing style, it's like a bottle of white water with gorgeous packaging." After sending this sentence, Golden Legend touched his own head with a headache. forehead.
This guy's writing... how should I put it, the description and lines in the book I drew are better than this guy!
It's the kind of utterly hopeless...
"I originally wanted to ask for advice. It seems that it's too bad to give any advice... I'm sorry." The Almighty Knight was a little disappointed, but he accepted the reality.
This is indeed the limit of what he can do. He is ordinary like this, and he can't do anything well.
"However, the plot is really attractive. Don't give up! Find someone who is good at this and ask for advice, it's much better than modifying it by yourself!"
"But, there doesn't seem to be any such person around. Even if there is, I don't know it."
"Well... Well, I'll take a look again and give you some advice to the best of my ability. But for more in-depth things, you must ask a relevant professional for advice."
"In that case, I am really grateful, senior." The Almighty Knight immediately thanked him solemnly.
professional...
The Golden Legend couldn't help but think of that nasty woman.If it was her guidance, maybe it would work?
Do you want...
No no no!If you show her this guy's stuff, she will definitely, definitely think that I wrote it myself, won't she be laughing at me for a long time!
But... Almighty Knight, it seems that he is really trying to write this book, after all... this book is written for the girl he has a crush on...
Ah, ah, ah, what a headache, I'll help him make it a little more readable first, and then think about this kind of thing at the end!
Golden Legend cut to the word interface again, grabbed a bunch of hair and forced himself to look up, trying hard to find a place to improve.
"Ah, ah, this writing is really... so uncomfortable, so uncomfortable!"
Not to mention the pain of the Golden Legend, the Almighty Knight is waiting for the other party's revision opinions in tension and anxiety.
However, he also paid attention to the word "professional".
Professional... Speaking of which, I do know a professional, but... I am a complete stranger.
He thought of the best-selling author named "Xia Shizi" who was resident on the rooftop.
Chapter 28 Public Execution
Today is Saturday.
Mizutaku got up very early in the morning, and had no intention of sleeping in at all.
In other words, since yesterday, he has fallen into a state of confusion and has been unable to extricate himself.
Everyone couldn't get up.
Because, today is the day when Miss Kato accepts the invitation to meet with Detective Poe.
With such a sour mood, Mizutaku casually took a few bites of breakfast and went out.
Walking all the way to the izakaya, Sister Bee was holding a rag and wiping the wooden door frame on tiptoe.
"I'm coming, Sister Bee!" Mijin Zhuo hurriedly stepped up to take over her job.
"It's very early today." She seemed to have seen something, but Feng Shao Ling didn't say more. She put her hand in a basin of clean water next to her to wash it a little.
"Well, I couldn't sleep, so I came over first."
"I'll go get those two out." She shook off the water droplets on her hands and walked into the house.
"Is Yukinoshita coming today too?"
"Well, made an appointment with me early. It's not the same as you who came here uninvited."
It didn't take long for the old Shiba Inu to slowly pace out amid the envious, jealous barking of the many dogs behind him.
It sniffed around Mizutaku, who was standing on a chair wiping the signboard, and said hello, before strolling back to sleep.
Seeing that the old guy was still healthy, Mizutaku's mood improved a little.
After finishing the work at hand, Mizutaku went to pour out the dirty water, then returned the cleaning tools swiftly, and then returned to the main hall.
"Eh? Here we go, Minister."
While he was doing the finishing touches, Yukinoshita Yukino had arrived at the izakaya at some point, and was now hugging Yukihime with an innocent expression on her face.
"Good morning, member."
"Good morning."
Then, Mizutaku opened the backpack he had brought and took out his laptop.
"?" In an instant, both eyes were focused on him.
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