"I don't need you to praise how good-looking my illustrations are, and I don't need you to use this kind of praise and derogation! Before the matter is fermented, quickly remove it for me, do you hear me!" Ying Lili's anxious tone carried There was a sense of command.

She is... what's wrong?

An Yilun was also a little confused.

In the content he wrote, he separated the text part and the illustration part well, and discussed it in two parts, which will definitely not have any negative impact on Kashiwagi Eri's reputation.

Even... it may also have a positive impact because of this contrast that looks like a pearl covered in dust.

I think... such a story is not worthy of your illustrations, Eriri!What's more, you know what, Yinglili? "An Yilun explained his thoughts to the other party.

"what do you know?"

"The author of that novel, that Mr. Nakamura...actually used the editorial department to kidnap senior sister and sell his own book bundled with senior sister's work!" Speaking of this, An Yilun was also slightly dissatisfied.

After seeing the twitter posts of Ying Lili and Kasumigaoka Shiwa on Monday night, he immediately found them and asked them respectively.

To Ying Lili, he expressed his congratulations and congratulations, which made the childhood sweetheart happy for a while.

It's just... On Kasumi Hill Shiyu's side, he assumed a different attitude.

He doesn't approve of the model of bundling two books together.In his view, this newcomer is sucking Xia Shizi's blood and using her popularity to promote himself.

He persuaded his senior sister, hoping that the other party would protest to the editorial department.

only...

Compared to his excitement, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's attitude was nothing.

"I think that story is not bad, and... always give newcomers a chance." This is how she replied.

However, although the master seems to be indifferent, An Yilun still believes that...that kind of dirty commercial behavior will only destroy the purity of Teacher Xia Shizi's works.

Because of this, he has been suffocating in his heart.

So, on the day the novel was released, he canceled the club activities, quickly went to a nearby bookstore, and bought the two books at the same time.

He wanted to see how this novel could be placed on the same shelf as Xia Shizi's works.

So, with this critical mood, he opened the novel.

Then...

With a somewhat unbalanced mentality, he didn't read the novel carefully and emotionally.

After a quick glance, he was only slightly disappointed.

In his opinion, this is a somewhat flat and old-fashioned story.

The writing style is not particularly stunning, and the plot of the first volume is not very attractive, and some places even give people a somewhat abrupt feeling.

For example... At the end of the scroll, the plot where Rie Asakawa finds out that she is terminally ill alone gives people a feeling of forced talk.

And, more importantly... In his opinion, the portrayal of the heroine in this book is not very good.

Because, the heroine of this book is really... too ordinary.

Good looking, kind hearted, gentle...

The description of her in the novel is just that.

She doesn't have any cuteness that can attract people, nor does she have any special personality that is enough to make people shine.

For him who is used to seeing all kinds of excellent heroines, such an Asakawa Rie...it is impossible to like him.

not to mention...

He doesn't fit well into the book's main character, Nakamura Hachi.

Because, in his opinion, the hero is too inferior and inferior.

Unexamined, without dreams... It also gives people a feeling of trying hard to gain favor.

And it was such a guy who was forcibly "saved" by an ordinary heroine...

He couldn't understand at all why a simple smile and compliment could move the hero so much that he couldn't sleep all night.

People... really need to be so humble?

All in all, what this novel tells is just a sad love story between two ordinary people.

Although there are some touching small details in some places, overall...it's not particularly good.

If it was him who usually came to do the trial reading strategy of this book, he might give an above-average evaluation and leave some words of encouragement.

but...

At this time, An Yilun also felt that this book was completely unworthy of Xia Shizi's works, or even... Kashiwagi Eri's illustrations.

So... Driven by some kind of impulse, he opened his own blog, trying to help his two members of the club, and distance himself from this author who he thought was not very good.

then...

In these two blog posts, he was not stingy in admiring Xia Shizi and Kashiwagi Eri, thinking that they have both made greater breakthroughs in their fields of expertise.

Just... for Mr. Nakamura, his evaluation is as follows:

"The author hopes to tell the ordinary love experienced by the ordinary protagonists, but in my opinion, such a story did not attract me, but just gave me a sense of embarrassment that cannot be replaced. Moreover, his love for the protagonist The design completely limits Mr. Kashiwagi Eri's performance. In order to portray such a serious and ordinary heroine, the series of paintings that Mr. Kashiwagi Eri is good at will not be reflected at all. But even so, the teacher still handed over a quite Amazing answers. I hope the teacher can find a better collaborator next time!"

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