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As for the guy who shows off his words, he's even more childish.

I just want to show off how awesome my writing is, and I want to be praised by readers as a clever person like a literary giant.

Who the hell is proud of such a superficial writing style for a real writer in the cattle district?

Head... These days, literary giants have long since ceased to be popular.

You, light novel writers, toilet paper writers, either rely on buying illustrations to give toilet paper, most of your skills are concentrated on the cover, title and illustrations, and the text, you must feel that this is toilet paper! Value yourself. The more glassy you are, the less you can write things that are recognized by the market. Before writing, you have to ask, who am I? As a reader, don’t you like that kind of novel that is particularly cool? Then, as a writer, for Why did you start writing this kind of thing? "Master! Please give me some pointers." Masamune Izumi said in shock. Liu Xing couldn't help being old-red. Before he was reborn, he was a lover of literature and art. Writing style Sloppy, sloppy thinking, poor storytelling ability.

However, I saved my experience, and I also know what successful novels, comics, and animations should look like.

However--. I know, but I can't write it out. I can only be a good teacher, point out the country, and tell others what you should do.

Hong's novels have their own characteristics. The novels of Pujie are always very similar -- Liu Xing still has some opinions on avoiding some common elements of Pujie.

"Among other things, in terms of text layout, are you in a mess? One paragraph is extremely long." Liu Xing asked. "Not all of them, but some paragraphs are extremely long." Izumi Masamune was puzzled. "Times have changed, and now light novels have to be shorter and shorter in order to be more popular.

Look, are the paragraphs of the light novels that are popular now extremely short?! "Liu Xing boasted that the paragraphs were too long, and a few stinking literary youths would gnaw on them, and most readers felt that it was very tiring to read.

The easiest way to make it easy for readers to read is to start with paragraphs. "Niu Fu, boss! However, there is a goblin author in the industry. The writing is poor and the plot is inexplicable. I thought it was superficial.

1 But after listening to the analysis of the big brother, I know...it turns out to be technical!" Izumi Masamune was suddenly terrified. In fact, most of the editors and colleagues Izumi met felt that this kid had good writing and thought. As long as he If he wanted to write novels on the street, his peers would be fans of him. Once he wanted to write the subject of a popular novel, they would discourage him one after another. not red

Of course, although the subject matter is small, the writing style makes the general readers feel trembling, thus dissuading most of them.

However, many editors and fellow writers in the industry are fans of his works, which also proves that Masamune Izumi is actually a genius.

It's just that the preferences of readers in the toilet paper reading market have not been identified.

"Also, you are only under 20 years old, don't think that you are very thoughtful, don't think that you are very good at writing.

These days, the younger you are, the more you like to show off your writing and thinking. It-...this is naive.

You should shift your goal to plot, character setting and the like.

Make the characters more interesting, or the plot leave the reader dumbfounded.

Or hilarious, or excited, or other emotions! Best-selling novels are usually not about new ideas and writing, but about arousing readers' emotions. If the readers look, laughing from beginning to end, they must be successful. J. Reader It seems that the emotional ups and downs are also successful.

If your words can't make people emotional, then - must be a failure.

"Liu Xing thinks of reading novels, watching anime, watching movies, watching comic sketches, any good literary and artistic works, Liu Xing is difficult to be moved by the so-called thoughts, and more depends on the number of mood swings. Qingxu is a master at controlling people's emotions. If he is not popular, he will be damned! It is also a reason for a chef to cook! If the cooking skills reach the level of Yao, there is no reason for such a chef not to be popular!

Chapter 200 Drinks

"Hey, your cooking is done!" Soon after, Liu Xing served the mapo tofu and white rice rice made by Tian Suohui.

"Thank you, master!" Masamune Izumi said while eating. "Sorry, I'm the chef, not your master.

"Liu Xing thinks of the street novels he wrote before time travel, it's so sad.

The flutter is definitely more fluttering than Izumi Masamune. Izumi Masamune is a light novel writer who has officially debuted.

Although it is not as good as those big sellers, it is actually much better than the real hit on the street. At least, Izumi Masamune is easy to submit manuscripts, and the manuscript fee is not lower than those talented people who are booked by the pigeon nest. Pigeon "A master is a master, what you said really opened my eyes.

I figured it out, a lot of things I didn't understand before. "Izumi Masamune said, "Even a professional editor is not as good as the master. Liu Xing blushed, and he believed it himself. This is actually the difference between a reader and a writer. Before a reader becomes a writer, read There are many people, and their horizons are high, so they can talk about it.

However, once you feel that you are good at writing and start writing, most of them will get stuck in it and quickly become, what should I do, Mengxin, please teach me. In fact, before Mengxin became a writer, those before Boss, they are all being pissed off by Mengxin! This means being outside the mountain and being able to see the whole picture.

Being in the mountains, it is difficult to see the difference in the whole picture.

If Liu Xing crosses over and mixes into the circles of novels and comics, he will soon become familiar with the dynamics in the circle, but he will lose the advantage of being an outsider who can see the whole picture.

It is precisely because of not being caught in it that the mouth can be so sharp.

As long as people do not involve themselves, it is easy to release a bunch of brilliant ideas.

And once you are involved, your eyes will be blinded and your thinking space will become narrow, which is common.

"By the way, master, there is also my sister's problem! I am also very troubled. She is still a primary school student. If she doesn't go to school, what will happen to her life and work in the future?" Izumi Masamune said distressed,' ' Even, since she stayed at home, I only saw her when we met for the first time.

After that, she stayed in her room all the time, and only opened the door to take the food in when eating.

Washing clothes and cleaning are all done when I am not at home at school... "In this case, it is not acceptable." Liu Xing couldn't help but shook his head and said, "I think you should enlighten me more."

Going to school is actually not that scary. Even if you don’t study, you can go shopping and just look at the scenery and people on the street, which is also good.

"Unfortunately, my sister doesn't listen to me." Masamune Izumi sighed, "Even, I can only talk to her through the door or with a mobile phone." "I think you can try to talk to your sister, because For some reason, she couldn't go home, so she went out to buy food by herself.

In this case, your sister may walk out of the room because of hunger. " Liu Xing suggested. "-.. What the master said makes sense.

Masamune Izumi said.

Although Liu Xing felt very speechless about the cheap apprentice, but thinking of his lovely sister, he forgave him.

Master, thank you for the hospitality, I should go." Izumi handed the money to the bar in a respectful and respectful manner.

After Liu Xing's banknote detector clicked, it was placed in the drawer for depositing money at the bar.

'Wait, boy, here's the change. "Liu Xing looked for two coins in another drawer, "Master, there is no need to make change. "Izumi Masamune shook his head again and again.

The food prices in your store are already much cheaper than those around you.

It's a pity that it's so cheap. Liu Xing glanced at him and said, "If you don't give me change, I'll take two pissing beef balls back and let my sister taste something new."

In addition, when you go back, let your sister eat more vegetables and fruits.

Eating these alone is not nutritionally balanced enough.