Sister Hui Ye Wants Me to Be Reliable

"It's okay." Ying Lili supported her with one hand, "But your writing style this time, compared with the previous books, has really changed a lot."

Kasumigaoka crossed her arms across her chest and pulled the edge of the blanket on her shoulders. As if she was not used to the low temperature in the air-conditioned room after waking up, she covered her mouth and yawned, talking about her thoughts: "Like this The plot development of flying from outside the sky will be criticized in commercial works, but since it is a work of fan nature, this kind of thing can bring topicality instead. So I challenged it in that direction."

"A wise judgment." Shi Zhu blinked, "Because I don't have any commercial goals, I let go of my hands and feet and try it out. After all, it's not a bad thing."

"Dare to say, if this kind of topical effect is not good, all the money you put in will be lost." Xia Zhiqiu closed his eyes and examined the relaxed face of Dianthus.

"Just take it for fun." Shi Zhu said, "I don't really expect to make money doing this, otherwise I would go directly to the Tokyo Stock Exchange to open an account."

Kato didn't quite understand, "Then what is Shinomiya-kun's purpose?"

"I'm afraid this guy will ruin his job in the fandom because of his three-no plan." Shi Zhu had a funny face.

Although Ying Lili really wanted to say something, but she didn't have a suitable explanation, so she just hummed.

"I see." Kato understood.

Shi Zhu picked up the pile of plot ideas again, "To be honest, only fandoms can still play like this. Commercial works are too much to reflect personal preferences. If there is no ant-queen-level IP behind it, or more than ten years of Accumulation, it will really come to an end."

"There's no need to talk so deeply about doujin and business things here. We all know that Kato-san, who doesn't know much, probably isn't interested in learning more about it." Kasumi Hills lay down on the table, "Can you tell me your thoughts first? Praise Words like that are fine, I want to hear opinions.”

This sentence stumped others.

Although the idea of ​​Kasumi Hill looks very similar to the writing done by a student with a second-year illness or a second-year high school illness, the setting and the layout of the main line of the plot are extremely exquisite, which fully reflects the ability of Kasumi Shizi, a high school student light novel writer.

As far as this concept is used as a script for a fan game, even Sawamura Eriri can't find any faults.

"I don't have any opinions or anything." Ying Lili waved her hand, "As far as I am concerned, it is nothing more than that the script of Xia Zhiqiu this time is too flattering. The heroine was the younger sister of the hero in her previous life. She's a sick girl. Well, I personally can't hate it."

"It's surprising that Sawamura-san would comment on my work like this." Kasumigaoka smiled, apparently discussing the creation in a calm manner.

Ying Lili looked away, and said nonchalantly: "It's just that the setting of the male protagonist is not to your liking, and the personality that is easy to get carried away, can't you be more reliable? Compared with the previous life of the male protagonist, the kind of responsible With a serious personality, it is more plausible, although there is no drama."

"I see, I hope the character of the male lead is more likable." Kasumigaoka smiled meaningfully, "I will give satisfactory modifications without destroying the existing composition. What about other opinions?"

Kato Megumi raised his hand slightly at this time, "Well, although it's a bit redundant, I want to confirm that I want to play the role of classmate, great-grandmother and sickly younger sister at the same time?"

"There are quite a lot of tags." Shi Zhu chuckled, "It's really a big test of acting skills. If you do it well, maybe you will be greatly improved like Sato Takeru."

"Ah——, I know that actor, I like his performance in "Winter Sakura" very much."

In general, Megumi Kato is just an ordinary female high school student, and she knows a lot about popular actors or singers without accident.

"Come on, Kato-san, if you can play eight roles by yourself like when Sato Takeru played "Dian Wang", you will definitely become famous after you have trained your acting skills." Shizhu joked.

Kato smiled slightly troubled, "I have no intention of becoming a celebrity."

"Don't take it seriously, this guy is just joking with you." Ying Lili kindly persuaded her.

Xia Zhiqiu, who was lying on the table, nodded lazily, "It seems that everyone has no opinions. As long as Mr. Mori thinks it is okay, it can be used as a final draft, right?"

"That guy Lunya will definitely not have any objections." Eriri looked as if she had guessed it, "and if we can have a specific plot idea here, the character setting can be real sooner. Just looking at Kato, it is very It’s hard to come up with the right characters.”

In any case, it's something on the creative side, and it's also a partner. Ying Lili doesn't want to make meaningless moves that are nitpicking, and it will trip her own heels.

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Chapter 56

"The final draft, huh?" Shi Zhu clasped his hands with one hand, and glanced at the cover of the plot idea, "With that classmate An Yi's picky personality, I don't think it will be as smooth as Ying Lili said."

"Hey?"

Ying Lili and Xia Zhiqiu were stunned at the same time.

Afterwards, Ying Lili narrowed her eyes slightly, and looked at Shizhu seriously: "Dianzhu, don't you believe my judgment? I have known that guy Lunye for so many years. I don't know what kind of dead house he is? Xia Xia Zhiqiu's conception is impeccable, what thorns can that guy jump out of?"

"I'm not doubting Ying Lili's judgment." Shi Zhu held the edge of the chair with both hands, "I just think that no matter how much you know each other, you can't replace the other party's thoughts, right? It's okay if you guess right, but you guess wrong It would be troublesome if you do.”

People's thoughts are very different. Even family members who get along day and night cannot say that they can grasp the true thoughts 100%.

Any answer is possible before it is spoken.

The so-called "know it very well" and "know it all" are just a coincidence—after all, in terms of probability, the chance of guessing right is relatively high.

But not [-]%.

"...You are right..."

As far as the matter is concerned, Dianthus' point of view is not unreasonable.

"And you also saw that time, after Yinglili changed her hairstyle, everyone thought it was okay, but An Yi didn't think it was good, didn't she?" Shizhu gave an example, "Maybe, it's also possible this time. That’s it. Even though everyone gave OK, he would also give the opposite opinion.”

At this time, Xia Zhiqiu was a little dumbfounded, her face was speechless and she wanted to laugh, "Uh, the example seems to be correct...but that time...probably not..."

Then it seems that he is restraining the emotion of wanting to laugh.