My Boss, the White-haired Nun

Now that I have realized that I am a new author, then I need to have the consciousness of a new author.

I must understand what are the deficiencies in this chapter I wrote, where I need to improve, and where I need to correct.

Some senior authors also gave me a lot of advice, and frankly, I have benefited a lot.My retouching is not concise and clear enough, the characterization is too jerky, the change of emotional lines is a bit abrupt, and the writing power is not enough to support my needs in many places.These are the places I need to gradually correct in the days to come.

The plot is slow to heat up, the characters are not full enough, too many original plots are mixed in, etc., etc., are also problems that I need to solve immediately.

But these things are not in a hurry, and I can’t be in a hurry. I am only a freshman this year, and I have enough time for me to make progress and keep a humble attitude. What I have to do is to maintain a humble attitude.

After reviewing so much, let’s also talk about the harvest.

In this volume, there are actually not many main characters, and there are very few appearances. In fact, there are only ten important characters in total, which can be roughly divided into a 3331 structure.

The trio of the older generation, Ogg Kaslana, Roman Apocalypse, Gong Ming.

The trio of the younger generation, Kallen, Otto, Eleanor.

Three disciples, Shakespeare, Michelangelo, and Elisa.

And the solitary, fairy Chi Yuan, Miss Sister.

Ogg Kaslana I have already said before, there is nothing more to say about this, a character that exists in the background, an image constructed through the words and memories of various characters, a swinger, a playboy, Prodigal men, and heroes.

Gong Ming is omitted as the main character.

In fact, Roman, I have something to say about this role.

Now when you go back and read Chapter No.17, Roman, and Roman behind the plot, his changes are very big. It can be said that he is almost not alone.

He became cold-blooded, greedy for power, and neglected family affection.It can be said to be very standard depravity.

This change is similar to Otto's later changes in terms of results, but not exactly the same. I am unique and made a comparison here. The comparison between Roman and Otto, from the heroic youth when he was young, to the coldness later Bishop, they are similar but not the same. It is not only the things they experienced that lead to this connection, but also many more essential things.

This is also the biggest charm of the role of Otto.

This part, let me tell you slowly in the plot later.

Next is Karen... Well, let's skip this young lady, I think we know enough about her.

So Eleanor...

In fact, this is a very important role in the original outline, but many of the plots about her have been deleted, and only the most basic parts are kept to ensure that the development of the plot is not affected, so that now it looks like a trick of.

I will explain the interpretation of this role in tomorrow's plot, so I won't go into details now.

Then came the trio of disciples...

This is serious, because the deletion of the plot deletes the passerby, but she is still required to be an important example.

Shakespeare played the most roles and appeared first, followed by Alisa, and there are at least two chapters telling her story. As for Michelangelo's role, it is pitiful.

But it doesn't matter, as the only character in the trio who will appear in the following plots, her role is indispensable.

She is a very important character. Among the characters that appeared in this volume, she can be ranked third in importance, second only to Otto and Chiyuan.

But that's another story.

As for Miss Chiyuan, you all understand why she is important. As the only character in the stock market that can be said to have opened, it belongs to the existence that will not drop the stock price even if it has not appeared in the market for a long time.

A novel is like a Ukiyo-e, and there will inevitably be many characters of all kinds. This is where the author's writing skills are particularly tested. It should be said that ten of the characters in the writing skills I can make in one volume have been tempered. It's a great harvest, and I hope that one day I can also write characters with vivid images.

I have always admired those authors who write about the harem... such a huge group of characters, how do they describe them so that their attributes do not repeat.

Although I don't like this.

Today, the editor told me that if there is no accident, after I finish my recommendation, there should be another chance for the editor-in-chief to recommend it, that is, it will be on the shelves next Friday, around June [-]th.

Of course, the premise is that there are no accidents.If the results of this recommendation are so poor that the editor thinks that I have no hope of getting a big bookshelf, then the next recommendation probably won't be there either.

The results here refer to collections, so I say these are not asking for votes or anything. Readers who have already joined can accompany me to continue, which is the greatest support for me.

It is rare to meet each other in life. Since I have this fate, I have the honor to tell you a story, and I should cherish it.

I will try my best to update it in the future, so I hope that readers will not always think about fattening... I am a newcomer, and fattening really consumes the author's enthusiasm, because I can't see the readers. Feedback and performance, it is easy to die after raising it.

Of course, it is a fact that the number of words is small at present, so I just hope that readers can follow their own ideas.

Oh.By the way, there are two last things.

Since I opened the book, many readers have given rewards... Well, although it is an affirmation of me, I still want to say that this kind of thing should not affect my life, and occasionally give a few hundred happy coins. It means that I am naturally happy, but for things like W rewards... I still pay attention to myself.

Yes, Xiaojia, I'm talking about you, the one who gave me 2w rewards today.It would be a lie to say that I am not happy, but since I treat readers as friends, in addition to posting my legitimate labor income in the future, I will give you a reward...

I'm in a very complicated mood right now, do you understand... I'm just thinking that the reader will come and reward me so that I can get rich.On the other hand, I feel uncomfortable.

Tsk... To be fair, I'm not such a noble person...

The second thing is that during the day, I was greatly molested by the editor, thinking that my recommendation was in vain, so I sent out the group number.So let’s list it here now, there are no conditions, and there are not many people in the group now, and friends who are interested come in to play, just as a chat.

The group number is 157387591. The name is Mrs. Cattery.The owner of the group is not me, but my eldest wife, and my eldest wife is the biggest in the group, so it is useless to find me if there is a problem (laughs).

It is said that it will not be updated, but in the blink of an eye, I have written more than 3000 words. If I go to the code words, I will have finished writing so many words and update them, so I can’t write them.

I suddenly had the urge to write another 800 words to keep the leave slip...

Just kidding, since there is no update, at least hand over the fake note, this is morality. I still have...

It's 2 o'clock, good night everyone.