The Teacher is Not Interested in Your Love Story and the Second Illness

What Xia Shu said about 'this matter' refers to the day when Shi Yu climbed over the wall to enter the school, and Xia Shu supported Shi Yu under the wall to help her land smoothly.

In the love metronome, this incident was adapted by Shi Yu into a key plot for the further relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist.After that, the whole book is a male protagonist who is like a little sun, and a warm and relaxed daily life with the indifferent female protagonist, commonly known as feeding dog food.

I have to say, under Shi Yu's excellent writing and rhythm, this dog food is quite fresh and sweet.

"That's why I don't want you to see it. If you misunderstand that I have a crush on you, it will be very troublesome."

"Relax, I have long passed the age of excess self-consciousness. The protagonist of this book and I are simply two extremes." Xia Shu said after taking a bite of the Big Mac.He also saw that the heroine Sha Yujia in the love metronome should be based on Shi Yu herself.

"So, how do you feel after reading it? Don't eat here and forget what you promised me." Shi Yu shook her feet impatiently, which is quite unsightly for a beautiful girl to do so.

"I feel like you're in a hurry to go to the doctor, but you came to me for advice. Could it be that your editor is not optimistic about you, and has already half abandoned you?"

"That's right, she asserted that the book wouldn't sell before it was published. If it wasn't for the support of the deputy editor, this book probably wouldn't have been published."

"It seems that your editor-in-chief's judgment is correct. This book cannot be sold at all."

"It doesn't bother you, Oreki-sensei."

Shi Yu took a light sip of coffee, but her legs trembled even more, and she could clearly feel how irritable she was now.

"Well, I'll just talk about it, for the sake of this Big Mac package."

Xia Shu stretched out a finger.

"First of all, let's talk about the event in which the relationship between the hero and the hero changes, which is the episode where you draw from yourself and the first time you meet. To be honest, this episode is very ordinary. Not only is it difficult to leave a good impression on readers, It will also lead some readers to think that this passage is a parody of a classic scene from a certain work, and the parody is very poor."

"...Monthly girl Nozaki-kun."

"So you know it yourself."

In this four-frame manga written by the original girl manga artist, the tall male protagonist once lifted the petite female protagonist high and helped the late female protagonist to get over the closed school gate.It is precisely because of this incident that the male protagonist and the female protagonist gradually began to have a crush on each other.

Although Shi Yu is based on personal experience, but in the eyes of those who do not know, this episode is just imitating this classic scene.And because of the different characters and types of works, this imitation is quite clumsy.

"Similar to the male protagonist of Shota Kazuya and the arrogant female protagonist of the Iceberg series, readers will not find it very cute or interesting, and even feel a little nonsense when such a plot occurs in such a character."

Shi Yu wrote down what Xia Shu said in a notebook.

"...I already understand this, is there anything else?"

Xia Shu raised a second finger.

"There's also the plot aspect. Although the dog food is sweet...I mean it's easy to read and interesting, but the plot is too bland. In almost two-thirds of the plots I've watched, the hero and heroine's The relationship is going so smoothly, and it feels like a natural progression. Just as everyone knows that flying dragon riding a face will definitely not lose, such a stable plot cannot make readers curious about the follow-up plot. "

"...Although I don't quite understand what the flying dragon rides on the face or something, I understand the general meaning. Is there anything else?"

"More? This McDonald's is really tiring."

Xia Shu thought about it and raised a third finger.

"The second point I said earlier doesn't mean that easy daily life can't attract readers, the problem lies in your character design and the audience of light novels. Most of the readers of light novels are male otakus, I don't think there are many Otaku will like to watch the story of two people who are currently in a sweet relationship. This will neither generate a sense of substitution nor a sense of identity. Simply put, the characters of your male and female protagonists are too good. Female protagonist, you You should be referring to yourself, what about the male lead? Could it be the ideal male in your mind?"

"No, it's just that I think that such a male lead should be very popular, so I wrote it like that. If you have to say which character is a reference...Shota Kazuya."

"I really want to die. Your original book is a girl's manga, which is different from light novels. It seems that you still need to accumulate more relevant experience... By the way, Kasumigaoka, you have never been in love, right? "

Shi Yu ignored Xia Shu's question and nodded lightly after taking notes: "I understand. Oreki-sensei, thank you for your pointers and suggestions."

"I want to give you one last suggestion, if you don't mind."

"Please say."

"Take the three points I just said as nonsense, and just write it according to your original idea."

Under Shi Yu's surprised gaze, Xia Shu continued, "You're not going to listen to other people's opinions, are you? Otherwise, your editor-in-chief will not give up on you. Also, although I only read a part of it roughly, I seem to I have seen several interesting foreshadowings, and I am looking forward to the reversal of the next plot. Emmmm... provided that you are not cut in half."

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ps1: Hey... I was dragged to drink by my high school classmates today (I am a little allergic to alcohol), and they had to take a big health care after drinking it.Of course, a conscientious author like me firmly rejected them, and with tears of regret (crossed out) in my heart, I came back and wrote.

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ps2: I went to McDonald's at noon today and found that the prices of hamburgers and wheat-flavored chicken have really increased, one is 8.5 and the other is 10.5=. = With such a comparison, a 100 yen hamburger is really not a conscience.

chapter 069. my sister is a little weird

On the streets of Akihabara, Shi Yu was walking beside Natsuki, keeping a distance not too close but not too far.

If it's just like that, that's fine, Xia Shu doesn't dislike having beautiful women walking by his side.But Shi Yu didn't just follow Xia Shu, she also kept observing Xia Shu's every move, and even recorded what products Xia Shu picked up, what he wanted to buy, and what he wanted to eat.

This made Xia Shu a little uncomfortable.

"...Kasumigaoka-san, why did you start following me?"

"Huh? Oreki-sensei, didn't you say that you have already passed the age of excess self-awareness? I just happened to be walking on the same path as you, so why did I become following you all the time?"

"You are too old-fashioned."

"It's useful, I'm a pragmatist."

Shi Yu had already made it clear that he was following Xia Shu.This made Xia Shu begin to regret that he had gotten into such trouble for a McDonald's meal.Xia Shu didn't expect that Shi Yu, who looked so cold, would be so... annoying.

"Don't you mean to put me in your book?"

"There is no room for a character like you in the plot of the second volume, and the third volume... whether there will be a third volume is not sure."

"Don't worry, Xia Zhiqiang." Xia Shu turned to look at Xia Zhiqiu, "Although the results of the first volume seem to be very poor, no matter what, generally speaking, they will be cut in half in the third volume."

"It's amazing, shouldn't I be encouraged and comforted at this time?"