God Descends the Second Dimension

After entering high school, Kenji Minemura completely changed the image of a nerd into a refreshing short hair style. At the same time, he learned to play basketball and often communicated with people friendly. He embarked on a completely different path from junior high school and became more popular than before. many.

Although the situation has changed, Kenji Minemura still has a shadow about making a girlfriend, or has a mentality against dating.

Although there is a slight shadow on falling in love with girls, Kenji Minemura still has a good relationship with his childhood sweetheart, Ayaka Hojo. Originally, he thought that his high school life might maintain the status quo until the end.

But one day, in the class where Kenji Minemura was, a super beautiful girl transfer student, Saki Yanagawa, suddenly came to the class.

Because of the relationship between the transfer students and the fact that she is a super beautiful girl and shows her gentle face in the class, Yanagawa Saki soon became a man of the day on campus.

However, it was Yanagawa Saki, the man of the hour on campus, who happened to be placed next to Kenji Minemura, making them sit at the same table.

And I don't know why, Yanagawa Saki suddenly became interested in him, and started to go home with him after school. On the way back from school, he would play tricks on him from time to time, completely different from what he usually did at school.

As a childhood sweetheart, Ayaka Hojo is very hostile to this, and she and Yanagawa Saki often quarrel with each other.

In this way, Kenji Minemura's Shura field officially began.

After flipping through the manga manuscript in his hand, Wang Hao slightly closed his eyes, ready to digest the content just now.

I have to say that Eirili Sawamura is really good. This manga is much more mature than the last one, although there are still many problems to be dealt with, and there are still some unreasonable things in the plot.

But generally speaking, Eirili Sawamura has made great progress. Take this book My Youth Shura Field as an example, as long as I modify some plots and handle the storyboard better, I am fully qualified to write serialized.

Although the story feels a bit old-fashioned, as long as it is well mastered, it is not a problem at all. Judging from the original manuscript just now, Eili Sawamura's mastery is quite good.

After a while, Wang Hao opened his eyes, looked at the nervous Eirili Sawamura next to him, smiled slightly, and said, "Compared to the last manga, you have really worked hard."

However, after hearing Wang Hao's words, Sawamura Erili's head went blank for an instant, her heart felt a little heavy, her eyes were reddish, and she asked in a hoarse voice, "Is it... still not possible?"

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"Although there are still some problems, it is much better than before."

Looking at Erili Sawamura's expression, Wang Hao couldn't help but feel a little unbearable. He knew very well the other party's silent dedication these days.

Thinking of this, he couldn't help stretching out his hand to touch Elili Sawamura's small head, and comforted him: "You really worked hard, in fact, as long as this manga is changed a little bit, there will be no big problem, at least it will not be serialized. question."

"Really?!"

Hearing this, Sawamura Eilili asked excitedly, and she didn't show dissatisfaction with Wang Hao's behavior of touching her head. Now her heart is focused on the topic of serial comics.

Wang Hao nodded, and replied: "Really, if you don't mind, I can express my opinion."

"Well! Just say what you have, don't stop halfway!"

Eirili Sawamura gave him a blank look, and said anxiously, doesn't this guy know that it's easy to get beaten when he goes out to catch other people's appetite?

"Blame me."

Wang Hao couldn't help complaining, and after taking a deep breath, resisted the urge to continue complaining, and said directly: "You handled the front of this comic well, but there are a lot of unreasonable things in the back. , For example, why did the transfer student of the super beautiful girl suddenly become inexplicably interested in the protagonist?

Didn’t you say in the manga that Yanagawa Saki’s attitude towards others is very gentle and generous, other than that, he hasn’t crossed the threshold half a step. It can be seen that this person is quite mature and stable. He was not bad at first, but I didn’t expect She suddenly became interested in the protagonist in the next second, and then immediately the youth love comedy unfolded. She really didn't know how to complain.

That's all, but the plot that can be seen at a glance is really a bit boring. I think you plan to follow the plot of the romantic comedy Shurachang in the future, right? "

"Um……"

This time, Sawamura Eirili's face turned ugly every time Wang Hao said something. She really planned to follow the plot of the romantic comedy Shurachang.

Father, like son.

Sawamura Eriri was not angry at Wang Hao's words, but at herself. What the other party said was something she hadn't noticed before, so there were indeed many problems after hearing it this way.

Seeing that Sawamura Eirili was able to accept opinions very well, Wang Hao's face relaxed. He would be really disappointed if the other party couldn't even accept this level.

However, Wang Hao was very satisfied with the other party's attitude, and continued to say: "I think you can change it like this, it's fine that Yanagawa Saki is interested in the protagonist, but it must be based on a special accidental event. For example, although Yanagawa Saki looks like a gentle and generous girl in school, there is another side that is unknown behind the scenes. Wait.

However, the protagonist discovered the secret of Yanagawa Saki by chance. As a result, the protagonist was targeted by Yanagawa Saki. Can't help but keep reading. "

Hearing Wang Hao's words, Sawamura Hideri suddenly realized, and smiled happily: "So that's the case, I understand! Thank you!"

"It's okay, in fact, you can find out as long as you spend a little more time."

Wang Hao gave up, but Erili Sawamura did not wait for him to continue: "At this time, you just accept it well. I will continue to draw manga first. You are really a good person, thank you!"

As soon as she finished speaking, Sawamura Eilili turned and left with a slightly flushed face, leaving behind Wang Hao with a weird face, and she suddenly received a good person card inexplicably?

Although he felt that he was barely a good person, the feeling of being issued a good person card was really not good.

Forget it, good people are good people.

Wang Hao smiled bitterly, turned around and looked at the scenery outside the window, a little absent-minded, and a little tired of dealing with things these days, so let's go out and take a look, shall we?

With this idea in mind, Wang Hao immediately stood up from the chair, moved his body on the spot, and was ready to set off immediately.

It's still early in the day, so it's just right to go for a walk.

This time he planned to take a walk around Ying Lili in the nearby Haoze Village. For so long, Wang Hao found that he hadn't enjoyed it nearby.

After changing his shoes at the entrance, Wang Hao was about to go out when he found that his sleeves were suddenly pulled.

This kind of familiarity, don't guess.

Wang Hao sighed in his heart, turned around helplessly, looked at the expressionless Shiina Mashiro, stretched out his hand and rubbed the other's head, and asked, "Mashiro, what's the matter?"

"Hao, the room is a little stuffy, I want to go out and play."

Shiina Mashiro said softly, and tugged at Wang Hao's sleeve with his small hands, his amber eyes blinked slightly, which seemed a bit cute, who could resist this? !