God Descends the Second Dimension

"Humility is a traditional virtue of our Chinese dynasty."

Wang Hao shook his head disapprovingly. The Celestial Dynasty is called "the state of etiquette". Although he lives in Nihong, his predecessor has received the Celestial-style education from Mr. Wang since he was a child, and even specially invited There are various teachers, some of whom are responsible for teaching the etiquette culture of the Celestial Dynasty.

I dare not say that I am proficient in everything, but at least these aspects are involved, so I know a little bit.

It can be said that under the influence of this environment, the predecessor was naturally greatly influenced by the culture of the Celestial Dynasty, not to mention that Wang Hao himself traveled from China, and he still knows a lot about the various cultures of the Celestial Dynasty.

He didn't explain much about these. After putting down the teapot, Wang Hao looked at the other party, pondered for a moment, and said: "Iida-san, can you tell me your views on Dragon Ball? No matter from the editor's or the reader's point of view, Either point of view is fine.”

Hearing this, Iida Ayano hesitated for a while, took a deep breath, and said resolutely: "If you really want me to say it, you don't need me to tell you that the first three episodes of Dragon Ball are perfect. From a point of view, it is undoubtedly difficult for people to find any flaws in the manuscript you submitted. I guess even if I hand it over to the editor-in-chief, he will not be able to find any flaws, but the subsequent development is very disappointing.

From the perspective of a reader, I originally thought that after reading this beginning, the following plot would definitely exceed my imagination, but with the development of the plot, it can be said that it is really disappointing. The plot is completely different from the expected development at the beginning. There are two developments, and now Dragon Ball Yan Ran has become a funny comic, or a funny comic of the adventure type. "

"Um……"

Wang Haoqing, who was sitting next to him, let out a "hmm" and suddenly fell silent, and began to think carefully about what Ayano Iida said.

The other party looked at Dragon Ball objectively from the perspective of the two. It can be said that these words had a great influence on Wang Hao.

Seeing Wang Hao's silence, Iida Ayano did not try to comfort him, but after a brief silence, she continued to speak slowly: "In the final analysis, whether it is from the perspective of an editor or a reader, I dare not It represents the opinions of the public, but according to my personal opinion, the protagonist of this manga is too ordinary, which is also the fundamental reason why Dragon Ball is now ranked lower and lower, and not many readers are willing to read it!

I don’t know what other people think, but in my opinion, if the protagonist Monkey King in the manga “Dragon Ball” continues to be so ordinary, it will be difficult to attract readers’ attention.

Maybe other manga magazines will tolerate this kind of ordinary protagonist, but there is no way for a protagonist with no bright spots to survive in the weekly jump. If you haven’t realized this, then it’s only a matter of time before Dragon Ball is cut in half. The problem! "

Following Iida Ayano's words, the silent Wang Hao's eyes gradually lit up, and suddenly he had the feeling of seeing the sky through the clouds and mist, and finally knew where the problem was.

He had never noticed this before, because Wang Hao's angle made him unable to think about it at all. He was completely thinking about how to optimize the next step, and he didn't realize that the problem was always around him.

Sure enough, it is worthy of confirming the saying "The authorities are obsessed, but the bystanders are clear." It seems that most of the things the ancients said were not unreasonable, otherwise they would not have been passed down to this day.

"I see... I didn't notice this at all before! Thank you Iida-san, it's really great to talk to Iida-san!!"

Wang Hao said to Ayano Iida excitedly, with a hint of gratitude on his face.

Chapter 470 IX Setting Change

If you look at the early stages of Dragon Ball from an editor's point of view, there is nothing wrong with it. This is true, because both the plot and the style of painting are not bad.

The problem lies in the serialization, because the manga magazine serialized in Dragon Ball is called Weekly Jump, and this kind of ordinary protagonist is not allowed here, because most readers of Weekly Jump don't like the protagonist who is too ordinary, so there is no popularity.

Wang Hao has never thought about this, because from the perspective of a cartoonist, Dragon Ball is really not a big problem, and he finally understands why the previous life and the current Dragon Ball are so bad in the early stage. The path is wrong.

Only now did Wang Hao realize how ridiculous the optimization he did alone was. He was advancing in the wrong direction and doing useless work.

He even thought complacently that as long as he continues to develop on this road, he might not know how Dragon Ball will be cut in half.

If he continues along this road, all his efforts will be wasted in the end, and he may not understand until after the incident, and it is estimated that it will be too late to say anything by then.

But if such a thing really happens, Wang Hao can't blame others, because he was the one who chose to go his own way, so it is only natural that he will get that kind of ending.

If you do something wrong, you have to pay the price. Isn't it a matter of course to pay the price for the mistakes made by arrogance?If at that time Wang Hao complained to God about the unfair fate, then he would be truly obsessed!He's not that stupid yet.

"That is to say, change the protagonist from an ordinary type? But in this way, the risk is too huge, after all, the setting cannot be changed immediately..."

Wang Hao whispered to himself, considering that it would be a bit inappropriate to suddenly change the character of the protagonist, but he couldn't think of a good way for a while, and his brows furrowed tightly again.

The setting is not something that can be changed just by changing it. It is difficult for people to accept a sudden change in the style of painting, not to mention setting something that is related to the foundation. A sudden change in the setting is enough to make many people give up.

To use a simple analogy, it’s like writing a novel. Your original protagonist is a ruthless swordsman in white clothes like snow. He walks in the rivers and lakes without touching a leaf, and even if his arm is broken, he will not frown.

But if the setting is changed suddenly, the original ruthless swordsman will turn into a dandy who hangs around in all kinds of romantic places and does all kinds of evil, so there is no way for people to watch it.

Of course, this is not to say that the settings cannot be changed. At some point, the settings can also be modified slowly. Such modifications can be said to be very common.

For example, to give a simple example, the original protagonist of a certain work was a kind and indecisive male high school student, but after experiencing certain things, his personality became a cold and heartless person, which means the setting has changed.

It can be said that in most cases, the setting of the novel is gradually changed with the development of the plot. This way of changing the setting is slow, but it is obviously not possible to make major changes all at once.

"I didn't ask you to change suddenly. If you change the settings immediately, I will definitely stop you immediately."

Iida Ayano rolled her eyes at Wang Hao, stretched out a slender hand to gently brush her hair, and brushed the messy ends of her forehead to both sides. After thinking for a moment, she continued: "Now we can only take slow The method of slowly changing the setting, in short, the protagonist will keep it like this for the time being, but you have to change the setting slowly as the plot develops, and the plot should not be delayed for too long.

Because Dragon Ball's current ranking is really dangerous, I actually don't recommend this method. I believe you know the reason, but now there is no other way to choose. "

Having said that, Iida Ayano spread her hands helplessly. In fact, there is still something in her heart that she is hesitant to say, because with the current ranking of Dragon Ball, it can be said that it is not surprising that it will be cut in half at any time. She is afraid now. Can Dragon Ball continue to be serialized?

But considering various reasons, Iida Ayano still couldn't bear to say it, and she believed that Wang Hao also understood this.

Just as Ayano Iida thought, Wang Hao also knew that Dragon Ball is in a very dangerous situation. Seeing the rankings keep dropping every week, he was always in a state of anxiety.

If this continues, Dragon Ball will really be cut in half.

Although the situation looks dangerous, it can be said that if Wang Hao hadn't made up his mind to discuss with Ayano Iida, Dragon Ball would be cut in half, because the optimizations he made before were all in the wrong direction. It's hard to imagine what would happen next.

But through the conversation with Ayano Iida today, Wang Hao immediately noticed this point, and there was a glimmer of life in this mortal situation. As long as he looks back now, maybe he really has a chance!

Combined with Iida Ayano's words, Wang Hao recalled the plot development of Dragon Ball and the optimization changes he made before in his mind, and immediately felt dizzy, and stretched out his hand to gently rub the center of his eyebrows.

calm!calm!The more you encounter this situation, you must be calm, and you must not panic now!

After taking a deep breath, Wang Hao kept telling himself to think about the problem calmly, because impatience and panic cannot think of a good way to solve the problem.

Reaching out to pick up the teacup next to him and taking a sip of tea, the dryness of his throat was relieved. After thinking calmly for a while, Wang Hao finally came up with a solution, staring into Ayano Iida's eyes and slowly said: "You said to change the protagonist a little bit. For a moment, how about changing to the type of protagonist who wants to be strong? In this process, I will try to weaken the surrounding supporting characters to set off the protagonist, so that the protagonist will not appear too ordinary. After all, there is a contrast will show the difference.

Moreover, if the theme of "a protagonist who is dedicated to pursuing strong strength" is used as the theme, it also fits the theme of the weekly jump. At the same time, it will not make people feel that the setting changes are very abrupt. It's even more fun, what do you think? "

After expressing his thoughts, Wang Hao stared straight at Iida Ayano, because the county was a little nervous, and now he really wanted to hear the other party's opinion.