This is My Holy Grail Battle
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No... I can't think like this, I don't care what you want to see... What I want to write is not this... It's not... Ahhh! ...
——————The dividing line after calming down
Originally I wanted to write an original, but my lack of confidence in my own writing made me choose to write a fan.To be honest, the energy spent on this book is a bit high, even beyond the energy required for the original.
And there's so much to see!This made me even have no chance to paddle.And based on the experience of the previous book, I will not change my outline under any circumstances.
There are still a lot of setting issues that I will explain slowly. If there is not enough space, just wait until the intermission of the next volume.
For example, not every skill will be copied after it is not used for its own glory.
For example, class skills and some spiritual skills cannot be copied.
So rather than copying skills, it would be more appropriate to just say copying the body.
For example, a certain servant first has his own faceplate, and then adds the faceplate and bonus of his class to become a complete follower.
This class is actually separate from the servant itself, and the class skill and class bonuses are more like a BUFF.After copying this servant, the additional BUFF of the class will not be brought, so the class skills will not be copied.
Afterwards, I found a lot of interesting bonus points and battle plans in the post. I just want to say... You guys are really a group of point-adding geniuses without conscience!
Can you get a treasure like Meteor?To be a human being, one has to be conscientious!I think Joan of Arc's Saint of the Red Lotus is pretty good.
In addition, I found that many people are talking about the problem of random treasures, as well as class and so on.I saw a lot of people saying what would happen if they changed to another Master, or another random Noble Phantasm.
In fact, I thought a lot before writing it. After all, a good story needs to be carefully woven, and the more you write, the more problems you will find.
Under the guidance of the post, I have corrected many, many mistakes.In this regard, I want to say thank you to you first... In fact, I have read every post and book review.
There is also the update issue that you are most concerned about. I just want to say: "Amitabha... don't worry, benefactors."
——Next is real intermission.Explanation of rank.
First of all, I want to say that among the seven classes, Saber is the first to be excluded, she is the absolute protagonist.The second exclusion is the other two ranks of the Three Kings.Because the skeleton of the Four Wars is supported by these three servants, if any one is removed, the plot will be difficult to proceed
Second, it's about lancer.This servant can theoretically be removed, but it has a high degree of connection with Saber and the master.Removal needs to pay a considerable price to fill the vacancy caused by the plot, and it is an optional class.Can be considered, but not a priority. The existence of Lancer can easily reflect the characters of Kenneth and Emiya Kiritsugu.
The remaining three classes have been carefully considered and are all convenient classes to choose, whether it is caster, assassin, or berserker.The space occupied in the plot is less.
Therefore, in the original outline, there are three job ranks to choose from, one of which is Assassin, and the others include Caster and Berserker.
If it is the skill drawn by Berserker, it will be drawn directly to 'Forget Correction'.
Then the Noble Phantasm remains unchanged, since the original berserker Lancelot itself does not exist, the protagonist will be disguised as a black Saber, right?But I didn't write it, and I didn't deduce it, so I'm not sure.
One more thing, if it is a Berserker class, the summoner is Kariya Matou.Then the summoner of the Five Wars will not be Tohsaka Rin but Matou Sakura.
Rin line will become Sakura line, but this will lead to the growth of the protagonist to become more black, more berserker
If it is a caster class, the skill drawn is 'Rune Rune'.While obtaining the adaptability of the caster class, it is guaranteed that the protagonist who does not know magic can cast spells normally.The fighting style is similar to Cu Chulainn of the caster class.But at the beginning, agility was added, so the magic power was low. This route could not solve the opening problem, and the fluency was very poor.
And the above lines all have an inescapable shortcoming.That is, "not for my own glory" can actually pretend to be Diarmuid, and the protagonist's priority disguise must also be Diarmuid.
Because Diarmuid itself is not as good as Saber in other attributes except agility, which is the most suitable attribute for the protagonist, it is more suitable to disguise.
But I can't let the protagonist disguise as Diarmuid, because there are not enough bonds!Not enough fetters!Not enough fetters!Important things must be repeated three times.
Therefore, change the skill to a higher level of 'mind'.Due to the duplication of skills, Saber is the only one who chooses to copy with a Noble Phantasm.At the same time, the possibility of the protagonist becoming the doorman was rejected, because this servant also has a heart.
Full of malice, let Assassin only dress up as a woman...
Well, in fact, it is more of a plot need.This is just incidental... No one can beat the protagonist who has no heart and intuition, and the sword, light and sword are what you pay most attention to when watching fate, right?
Similarly, the core setting of the whole book lies in this "mind eye".It has been carefully designed for a long time so that the protagonist can have a saber face, which is one of Xingyue's biggest conflict points, and at the same time have a combat power that meets the needs of the plot.
It is not for the sake of my own glory that this treasure cannot become Diarmuid in any case, because there are too few things related to fate and Diarmuid. You can clearly know the problem by checking the length of the encyclopedia.
Fans who really want to write a good fate must give the character an identity!Unless the author simply intends to write novels with this mentality of playing around.
If you insert a character directly, the 'bond' will not be enough, and there will be no articles to write after it is written.What's more, I'm not writing POV, and I have to write the story with the protagonist assassin alone as the main perspective, so I need "conflict" even more, otherwise the length will be too short.
What if there is no conflict?Of course it creates conflict.
If the protagonist becomes Diarmuid instead of Artoria.There is less interaction with caster;
And the main point of view must be assassin, otherwise it will be irrelevant, which will seriously affect the reading experience.
In other words, you can delete 80.00% of the content of this book if you don't become Artoria.And not only that, but there will also be a large sense of violation in the next interaction.
If that were the case, I would not be able to continue this novel.There is absolutely no way to write any further because the spine of the story is rotten.
This is the role of 'conflict', and this is why there are so many Shuke doves.Because although it looks beautiful on the outside, only the author knows that there is nothing to write about, and this is also the biggest difficulty of Invincible Wen.
When a new book is published, only read the first ten chapters, or even the first three chapters.I can judge whether the book can be finished.This can be analyzed.I believe that even if many readers do not understand this aspect, they can feel it with their long-term reading experience, right?
I think Artoria and Gilgamesh are the best insertion points for WW[-].Because these two servants not only existed in the fourth and fifth battles, but also had a very deep bond.These two heroic spirits are one of the servants with the highest appearance rate in the fate series!
Just imagine, if the protagonist does not have the fetters of Artoria, can assassin still be the center of this story?No, assassin will be reduced to a supporting role.But I must not let assassin become a supporting role.
Once you become a supporting role, you just follow the main line, and then, like most fans, say a few words.The "sense of being designed" of the Fourth World War is too serious, if it can't be handled properly, it can't be written at all.Of course... I've been designing, designing, and designing.The foreshadowing kept burying, and my head hurt.
PS: Compared with the arrogant tiger walking alone in the forest, I prefer the butterfly fluttering lightly in the flower field.
Choosing to be an assassin and pretending to be a saber is the only option!This not only ensures the fluency of the plot, but also prevents loopholes in the setting.
Although Assassin was originally the last choice, with the deepening of the outline and the refinement of the settings, Assassin has gradually become the only possible beginning.
However, when the plot was deduced to the end of the fourth battle, I had already solved the problem of the caster's opening.You only need to draw skills and treasures first. When you get the 'runes', the protagonist will be very eager for magic attributes. At this time, redistribute the attributes to ensure the fluency of the caster's start.
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