Nomenclature of Night
Chapter 10: .8 Modification progress
10.8 Modification progress
Today's revision progress is chapter 729-743.
There are quite a lot of revisions today.
The first modification is that in the plot of Qingchen's ascent to Mount Everest, he held back the masters of the kingdom and the future organization, and let Kunlun and the parents' association attack the opponent's base camp.
But in the original text, Qing Chen's plan is not clear, it looks more like a temporary improvisation.
In the new revision, the plan between Qing Chen and Boss Zheng is clearer, which also makes his behavior on Mount Everest more reasonable.
The second modification is to modify the overall combat link. Many of the plots in this section are explained too much, which makes the battle look meaningless, so it has been simplified.
The third is to modify the life and death test this time, climbing Mount Everest for skiing.
In the original text, after Qingchen fought with king's stand-in Arthur and Kashima Li Yunze, he briefly wrote the test of life and death in a few paragraphs, and basically didn't write it.
So in this revision, chapter 743 was rewritten, and the content of life and death this time was completely deleted. After the battle, Qing Chen did not continue the life and death test.
Originally, he needed to complete the test of life and death this time and return to the inner world to face Chen Yu.
But Dayu finally admitted that he was Qing Chen's teammate this time, so that Qing Chen didn't have to worry, and probably perfected the line between Dayu and Qing Chen.
In terms of the follow-up plot, although Qing Chen did not complete the life-and-death test this time, it did not have a great impact on the main line, because he did not fight Chen Yu after crossing, but used the chemical reaction between the shroud and Dayu to kill Chen's troops. It was pierced.
Then directly explored the underground base of Tinder's bionic body, and Qing Chen didn't have a chance to make a move.
Then, I will put this life-and-death test tomorrow, and Qingchen will complete it in the inner world this time, and the most important thing is to bring Chen Jiazhang, the decadent knight, with him.
Earlier when Qing Chen met Chen Jiazhang, he watched his uncle drink away his sorrows and become decadent, but he didn't do anything, which is very inappropriate.
Qing Chen will lead his uncle through the life-and-death test again. The knight should have the ability to influence and inspire others.
Moreover, it is not appropriate to briefly write about life and death, so tomorrow I will mainly modify this point. I will let you know where the specific changes are in the modification progress.
Okay, that's all for today.
See you tomorrow!
(end of this chapter)
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