Nomenclature of Night

  10.5 Modification progress

   Today's revision progress is chapter 686-697.

  Currently, the Rat Tide plot is over.

In this plot, first of all, together with the revisions made a few days ago, the biological pollution plan of Shendai Chichi has been refined a little bit. He used Chen and Kashima's gaps in targeting shadows to cause biological pollution, and it is precisely Because of the battle of the demigods in the south, the Forbidden Tribunal was transferred.

   In this way, the plan will appear more reasonable.

  Secondly, when re-watching this plot, I still feel that although the character iodofu spends little ink and ink, it is well written, and a few sentences are added later, which will not affect the main plot.

  I actually want to change the embarrassing part of this modification the most. For example, Xiao San said something like "You are going to be your own heroes!" It is really inappropriate to look at it now, and I feel embarrassed.

So writing a book is really afraid of using too much force. When I write the climax, I will listen to songs, such as Last. In the overdrawn emotions, let yourself be on the scene.

Sometimes I even listen to the song for two hours first, and then write when the emotion is in place, and write while crying... But when you watch it, there is actually no background music, and then my emotions may be too high, and then Embarrassed.

  This is not very good, which means that the level is still not good.

   When I read Squid’s books, what I admire the most is that he is very restrained in writing, and some places can be left to write, but he is very restrained, which will be better.

  I hope that in the next book, I can let go and at the same time restrain myself very well.

  Looking at this episode again, iodofu and Qingchen didn't say a word when they faced each other upstairs. They were calm and peaceful, but it made my eyes moist.

  Finally, there is the story of Chichi Kamitai not dying in this battle. In fact, the original text intends to kill him, but I always feel that it is rash for such an old thing to die in a wave, so I forced it to be reversed within a chapter.

  Now, the foreshadowing of the early stage has also been modified, and this section has also been modified to make him live a more reasonable life, and the later stage will also cause him to have deeper conflicts with Shendai Yunluo.

  Okay, that's all for today.

   See you tomorrow!

  (end of this chapter)