My retirement life in Neon

67 days, 340,000 words, finally going to be on the shelves. No matter what the results are, this is the result of my hard work during this period.

This is not the first novel I wrote, but it is my first novel to be put online. The previous ones were all for my own enjoyment. There was no outline and no reader interaction, so I soon stopped writing. Let me talk about why I wrote this novel.

I had the idea of ​​writing a novel about four or five years ago, but at that time, due to various reasons, this idea was shelved (actually now I think those problems can be overcome, so it’s mainly because I’m lazy).

The opportunity was that a novel I read about traveling through Japan ended badly (personally), and that book was really well written. I felt very sorry at the time. With the feelings for this book, I began to have the idea of ​​writing a novel myself (I had written short stories before).

I would like to thank my editor Xiaoyuan here. If she hadn’t signed me, this book might have been a long time ago.

When I was choosing the subject, I also thought about writing fan fiction. There are many advantages to that. Not to mention that the world view has been set, there will be no big problems as long as you follow the main line, and the characters have been set, which all have their own traffic. There is no need to think about the personality of the characters, and there are a lot of lines that match the character's personality for reference.

More importantly, I know what the nature of a certain point is. As long as it is connected with American comics, Pokemon, Naruto, One Piece, etc., it will definitely not fail.

But I still didn't choose fan fiction. It may be influenced by that book, or it may be that I don't like to be bound by rules. I chose originality, so I know this data myself.

Of course, there are many big guys who write original works, and my data just shows that I am not capable enough (I still have a number).

When this book was first constructed, I spent a lot of time collecting information about Japan (I actually rarely watch anime), and the easiest way is to catch up (have you tried to watch anime at double speed).

But the problem is that I feel that the male and female protagonists always fall in love for no reason. I have been reading novels for many years and have read most types. Will anyone really read this kind of plot?

Shouldn't you have a common unforgettable experience before you like someone? Because I am a single dog and I don't understand emotions, I want to write a love story, but I dare not write it. (Some of them are embarrassing for me to read)

There is also the problem of Oda's mother and daughter mentioned by some book friends. There are many big and small things.

Here I want to tell you about my outline.

In fact, the setting was to carry out multiple lines at the same time at the beginning, but I was worried that my writing skills were not enough, so I changed it to a single line in the early stage. This is to compress the plot of Oda's mother and daughter from the original plot of more than 300 chapters to less than 100 chapters, so you can see that the plot is monotonous and boring. This is my problem, and I will correct it later.

Book friends who can see this all know that I have a problem, that is, I don’t like too many scene descriptions, but I like to use long paragraphs of dialogue (please don’t hit me, I really don’t have enough words), because I personally think that compared to scene descriptions, dialogue can better show the characteristics of characters, whether it is personality or interaction between characters.

Some book friends also said that this book has no main line, so I want to say, isn’t the main line of writing daily life just to survive?

I also want to say something about the character of the protagonist. Some people say that he is childish or has a bad taste, and he doesn’t fit the template of a big boss at all, but now he is no longer that Tianzun. He has been beaten by reality, and now he is just a salted fish who has lost his dream.

The character of the protagonist is set as a character like an old naughty boy, with a different way of thinking from normal people, and a little bit of a black belly.

And the whole neon cannot suppress his existence, so he acts as if he has no scruples, hiding his identity on the one hand, and showing his abilities without scruples on the other.

When I wrote here, I still have a lot to say, but it’s useless. Everyone knows that I am a chatterbox, so compared to recommendation tickets or rewards, I prefer comments and complaints.

Of course, it would be better if you have all of them (I have all of them.jpg). I also know that some book friends don’t like to comment or something (I am one of them), so don’t force it. Reading is a leisure activity, and of course, happiness is the most important thing!

I still remember the names of several book friends, such as Tang Yuji, Xia Shizi teacher, Canmeng, Ean, etc.

In fact, I have always wanted to use your names to play a supporting role, but I didn’t get your permission.

I will graduate and find a job soon, so until I settle down, the update will not be very stable, but I promise not to eunuch, even if something really happens, I will definitely come back.

In fact, I like writing novels very much. The feeling of immersing myself in the world I weave is very wonderful, and I can even forget the troubles of the original world (I’m not crazy! I’m going to the second dimension, and I’ll bring you a wife next time I come back.)

But I know that this kind of failure is not qualified to be a full-time writer, so I can only hope that there will be this opportunity in the future.

Finally, I will tell you a secret secretly. I chose Neon because Neon names can be watered down.

Do you want to get my saved drafts? If you want, I can give them all to you. Leave a message, ten people per chapter! I put all my saved drafts there.