My Lady Is Not A Demon
Chapter 214
Summarize!
The sacrificial ceremony case is not over.
How should I put it, this case is the most attractive one I have written so far.
But it is also one of my most ingenious designs.
Since the last two cases ended, some book friends said that they wanted to change the way, so I decided to change.
At the beginning of the design of this case, it was carried out by three lines.
Xu Wuqing a line.
Fox Demon one line.
Yin & Yang Zong is a line of traitors.
I plan to advance in three lines and finally twist them together. By the way, I will portray a few supporting characters and write a few paragraphs of daily life, so that the protagonist will contact some officials in the court and gradually expand the pattern…
I did this in the beginning.
But I overlooked one thing, and that is the rhythm.
Although I update a lot every day, when I really follow the outline, I find that the rhythm can’t be screwed together at all. The result of the three lines running at the same time is that the reader looks very loose and feels east or west, although it will twist in the end. Together, but I don’t think so when I look at it, so problems such as raising books and skipping orders arise.
Especially for skipping, I laid the groundwork for every chapter, which caused some book friends to look at the next two chapters after skipping, completely confused.
The most typical example is that Zhang Awei’s “father” is a woman. I broke it out a long time ago. As a result, when I wrote it later, there were still many people asking question marks, but they obviously didn’t look at it.
At this time, I realized that if the pace of detectives is too slow, it is really too hurt.
The three lines set off at the same time, resulting in a serious slowdown in the rhythm. At this time, if you want to portray other supporting characters, you are looking for death, let alone the plot in the court.
There should have been four chapters of the court story, but in the end I could only cover it in one stroke, trying to get the rhythm up as much as possible.
If you really follow the outline, it is estimated that there will be more than a dozen chapters of the plot, so the deletion should be deleted, the streamlined streamlined.
Even when I planned to write a story on bed of 20,000 words, I gave up in the end. (Because I feel that everyone is just as serious as I am and will not look at this stuff.)
Back to the subject.
In the end, the status of the prince of Pisces Elementary School can only continue to the next case.
If I write it down again, I guess it will break down. The three lines must be closed first, and then the next case goes directly to a single line.
The advantage of the single line is that although everyone can easily guess, at least the rhythm can be pulled up.
By the way, I can write a few daily.
I want to come to this sacrificial ceremony now, but it is a pity and helplessness.
In order to keep the logic, I used A4 paper to paste on the wall, just like the protagonist Chen Mu, I wrote all the clues, thinking about it every day.
The first thing I wake up every morning is clues that are full of walls, and then I frown and look at it to see if there is a conflict, out of touch with the outline, and so on.
It made me feel like I was working on a case for a moment.
It’s a pity that there is no such a lady as Bai Xianyu by her side.
This kind of portrait is too tiring, and the book friends are also tired looking at it, so all the subsequent cases will go one-liner, and don’t engage in those bells and whistles.
It’s better to write two more chapters of sex scenes to make it so complicated.
The next few chapters are indeed in a hurry, but there is no way. You must end this writing as soon as possible, otherwise you really can’t hold it, but the clues are still logical. If you have any doubts, wait two days to join the group before asking.
I have already built the group, but I haven’t had time to manage it, so I won’t add people first.
The keynote of this case is that the protagonist and the two masters Martial Sage Tong and Ji Wuming secretly made moves, but were delayed by the rhythm.
I also changed the final plot. It was supposed that the protagonist entered the altar, fought with Martial Sage, and merged with the ‘venom’ in the altar.
But in the end, in order to simplify and omit, let him commit suicide directly. At the same time, Ji Wuming was released in advance.
As for the venom in the altar…
You are also a mature venom. You should have run out to find the master by yourself.
According to the outline, Ji Wuming actually has two and a half chapters of the plot, and Ji Ping’er and Tian Xiaoyi also have a chapter, and then follow the vine to find the little prince, as well as the aforementioned Nine tailed Fox.
But it can’t be delayed.
As I said before, there are more than a dozen chapters according to the outline, which is unnecessary.
The advantages and disadvantages of online novels are obvious, and that is the daily update. If it drags on for a long time, the readers will have no time.
Reorganize the rhythm and take a single line is the best.
Don’t think about the layout or something.
This book is actually like this. The advantages and disadvantages are obvious. It is too far away from the work of God, and it is OK to write what should be written.
So this case is over for the time being, and the little prince appears next.
And the Shura field of the Queen Mother and Bai Xianyu.
Regarding the ending of Ji Wuming, it was originally intended to shape it well, and then become the protagonist’s first general, paving the way for the protagonist’s major events in the future.
After all, only the protagonist can heal his daughter’s pulse.
But it hasn’t been shaped now, let’s talk about it.
It’s a pity that this beautiful woman, Meng Yanqing, originally planned to push both Bai Xianyu and Meng Yanqing in this case.
But after all, I still feel shortcomings, so I let her go for the time being.
Finally, I still want to say a little bit about female characters…
I will not grind what should be collected, and let her cool off if it is not necessary. I worked so hard to create a girl who warmed the bed for the protagonist. Otherwise, why did she write that she has such a good figure and so beautiful?
Bean sprouts are lsp, it’s so simple.
Finally, let’s talk about the group. If it is free this Saturday, it will be announced. Let’s get an ordinary group first.
The late stage is a little more standardized.
I will definitely write the supplementary version of this book in private. Whether it is Bai Xianyu or the sister-in-law, it is rare to write books that I am interested in. It is rare that there are female characters that I like. It is impossible not to write a 100,000-character supplementary version.
At the end of the day, I’ll watch it again when I’m free, and then get a more standardized group, anyway, take your time.
An old character returns in the next chapter.
This one had been riding on her way before, but this time I let her have no horses.
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