ninja correction belt

One month later, in the country of Kawa, at a certain hotel.

Zheng Dai knocked on the door, pushed the door in, and said with a smile: "Master Zilai, are you busy with creation? You insist on creating even if you are unwell. You are such a great educator. But if you go out for a walk more, there will be Good for health, I have come up with a new method, this time guarantee success!"

"Seventh time."

"……what?"

"This is the seventh time you have guaranteed success." Jiraiya turned his head, his face pale as if he had not recovered from a serious injury, and said quietly: "Let me go, if this continues, I will be beaten to death by Tsunade."

Zheng Dai blinked, and muttered: "Accident, it was all accidents before. Besides... it's your fault too.

Let’s just say the day before yesterday, we made an appointment that you pretend to chat with other girls, to test whether Tsunade-sama will be jealous, and to see if you can get a marriage proposal.But what about you, joking and laughing, you almost grabbed his hand, isn't this courting death? "

"It's not the last time, you asked me to spy on the women's bathroom to test Tsunade, I happened to see that girl, and when I saw it again, my mind was full of..."

Jiraiya's expression changed several times, and he suddenly realized that he seemed unreasonable, so he reluctantly said: "I'm acting, basic ninja skills, do you understand?"

"Understood." Zhengdai nodded repeatedly.

"This time it's time for you to show off your basic skills again, so we..."

As he was talking, Zheng Dai's voice gradually became quieter, because Zi Lai had already covered his ears, as if he was "not listening or listening to bastard chanting scriptures".

Seeing Zheng Dai's mouth closed, Ji Lai also opened his hand again, waved and said, "You're done? Just go out after you've finished speaking, don't disturb my creation."

"Master Jiraiya, what about it? What about the trust between us?" Zheng Dai said sadly.

Jiraiya shook his head: "No more. And if I don't hurry up and create new works, my wallet won't be able to afford Tsunade who loses every day."

Still want to afford her?Who gave you the courage...Zheng Dai rolled his eyes and said, "Then Master Jiraiya, let me teach you a way to make your new book more popular."

"roll!"

"okay."

Zheng Dai nodded and backed out the door, thought for a while, laughed twice, and went back to the room.

……

Early the next morning, Jiraiya came out of Tsunade's room yawning, and smacked his lips.

"Listen to that brat's bad idea, get hurt by Tsunade, then Tsunade will be gentler, it's not bad...it's weird."

Shaking his head and throwing away the messy associations, he went back to his room to wash, then sat back at the desk, ready to create.

At this time, he suddenly frowned.

"Huh? Who moved my manuscript?"

"It must be Zhengdai, what's the bad trick?" He muttered, and Zilai also picked up his manuscript with a frown, "What do you mean, copied it again?"

The first story is based on Yakura and is called "The Voyeur". It tells the story of a young man who often peeps at women's bathrooms because of curiosity.

This is a long story, which tells in detail the happiness of the boy before he was caught. After he was caught, the women in the women's bathroom surrounded and beat him, his father beat him, his mother comforted him with tears, his friends rejected him, etc., ensuring that the teenager After reading it, I dare not give birth to the idea of ​​peeping at the women's bathroom.

Jilai has also revised it several times, and he is very entangled in whether the boy in the end can be forgiven, so he almost knows the story by heart.

Looking around, the passive manuscript, except for the different handwriting, everything else is completely copied from him... Huh?

At this time, Ji Lai also stared blankly, looking at the middle section, the turning point of the story, the section where the boy was found peeping.

Woman [-]: 'God, someone

peeping! '

Woman [-]: 'What?where? ! '

Woman [-]: "Hey, wait, don't worry, the peeping... seems like a handsome guy." '

Woman [-]: "Little handsome guy?Hey, what a handsome boy.What are you doing peeping, come in directly, let the sisters see, giggling...'

Jiraiya:? ! !

"Zheng Dai! What the hell are you doing?!"

……

Three months later, in the country of craftsmen, Ji Lai also sat down at the desk with a serious face in the early morning.

"I don't know what that brat Zheng Dai has changed my story to. This child's thinking is too unhealthy, he must be criticized and corrected!"

"I'll first see what unhealthy thoughts he has this time, and then criticize."

Picking up the manuscript, Zilai was also slightly taken aback.

"Huh? Is this mine?"

"No change?"

"It really hasn't changed..."

Zilai was also stunned for a while, feeling a little lost. After three months of reading in the morning, he had become a habit, and even he was secretly thinking about how his story could be adapted.

Why is it gone?

It was not easy for him to ask Zheng Dai about this matter. After waiting for two days, the manuscript was never changed.

"How about... I do it myself?"

……

One year later, Snow Country.

"Woo...Brother Zhengdai, I will miss you!"

Four-year-old Fenghua Xiaoxue kissed Zhengdai's forehead with a crying voice, and Zhengdai touched her head comfortingly: "See you again."

The figure flashed, and disappeared directly in front of Fenghua Xiaoxue, and Zhengdai appeared on the top of a snowy peak in the distance, beside Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Jingyin.

Jing Yin breathed out from the cold: "But, can I go now, Zheng Dai?"

"Let's go, his boring hero game is finally over, let's leave this country." Tsunade said, turned and left, and Shizune quickly followed.

Jilaiya and Zhengdai followed behind, and Zilaiya asked in a low voice: "Is this interesting? That turbulent coup d'etat was obviously going to fail, so you insisted on helping him secretly, making him king, and then helping to pacify him on the same day?" chaos?

Have you taken a fancy to that four-year-old girl?Well, she should be pretty when she grows up. "

Zheng Dai clicked his tongue: "Master Zilaiye, you have become obscene, the little girl is only four years old."

Ji Laiya was startled, the wretched smile on his face disappeared instantly, and he returned to his elegant appearance, and soon sighed again: "My book is about to be published."

Zheng Dai's eyes lit up: "Release? Are you thinking about it, are you willing to release a new work?"

It won’t work if I don’t publish it. My savings for so many years have only lasted one year and four months with Tsunade. If I don’t publish it, I will starve to death, and... I can no longer write normal stories.

It's all your bastard's fault!Zilai also glared at Zhengdai angrily, and said with a bit of expectation: "I hope it can be sold well, the name is just as you said... "Kissing Heaven"!"

'Jiraiya's correction rate is 100%,

Get free attribute points*5! '

Zheng Dai almost burst into tears!

Finally, finally 100%!

One year and four months is the longest time I have spent on revisions. If I hadn't accidentally discovered the coup d'état in the Snow Country, which was about to fail several years in advance, I would have completely revised the "Snow Country" The country coup event', the rate of return of attribute points is too low.

Zheng Dai Yang smiled: "It must be sold!"