Zongman: Nohara Shinnosuke is about to be chopped off

"Well, why don't you show me your novel? Maybe I can give you some ideas."

Xiao Xin pondered for a while, frowned slightly, and said this with a thoughtful look in his eyes.

"Okay, okay, come on."

There was a glimmer of excitement in Kasumigaoka Utaha's eyes, and she extended an invitation warmly. She quickly made way for her chair, her face full of anticipation.

If she could get recognition from her friends, it would definitely be the greatest encouragement for her.

“That’s a lot of words.”

Xiaoxin looked at the words on the screen with dizzy eyes, his mouth wide open in surprise.

With so many words, how long would it take him to finish reading them? To be honest, compared to novels, which require reading a lot of words, he prefers comics because they are simpler and clearer.

"How about that? Xiao Shiyu, read it to me."

Xiao Xin blinked and said bluntly with a hint of cunning on his face.

"okay."

Kasumigaoka Utaha thought about it for a while and then agreed. After all, she knew Yi Xiaoxin's personality.

If he were really asked to read these tens of thousands of words, it would probably be torture for him. She sighed slightly and shook her head helplessly.

Next, Kasumigaoka Utaha read out with great emotion a love triangle relationship that developed among the heroines based on herself.

Her eyes were focused, sometimes revealing sadness, sometimes flashing a hint of anger.

"Now 'Naoto' faces two choices, one is 'Sayuka' and the other is 'Makoto'."

When she reached the point where she reached the cave, Kasumigaoka Utaha sighed deeply. This was one of the reasons why she couldn't continue writing.

According to the plot, the hero needs to choose someone. Regardless of whether it was designed from the beginning or based on her personal preference, she hopes that the hero can choose "Sayuka", the heroine created based on her own template.

But things got stuck here. When she put herself in the male protagonist's shoes, she found that the male protagonist seemed to be more likely to choose another female character.

She, Kasumigaoka Utaha, failed, and was defeated by another female character in her own novel.

She lowered her head slightly, her eyes full of loss, bit her lip lightly, and said silently: "Xiao Xin, what do you think I should do, who should I choose for this person?"

In fact, this question is not only asked to Shin-chan, to make a choice for the male protagonist, but also to let Shin-chan choose from his many female friends. Will he choose herself?

"Little new?"

Not getting a response, Kasumigaoka Utaha called out again with a puzzled look on her face.

When Kasumigaoka Utaha found that there was still no response, she looked up and found that Shin-chan had already been lying quietly on her bed, sleeping obediently.

There was a flash of anger in her eyes. She sat down on the bed and poked his face with her finger while speaking:

"Xiao Xin, I hate you, I hate you..."

"Hmm? What happened to Xiao Shiyu?"

Xiao Xin rubbed his eyes drowsily and found that he had fallen asleep, with a confused look on his face.

"Xiao Xin, you're going too far. I was telling you this seriously, and you actually fell asleep."

Kasumigaoka Utaha turned her face away and said angrily with her lips slightly pouting.

"I'm sorry, Xiao Shiyu, although your novel is well written, it's really not the type I like."

Xiaoxin spoke bluntly with a hint of apology on his face.

"Why? Do you think my novel is missing something?"

When Kasumigaoka Utaha saw that they were talking about the novel that she had put so much effort into, she immediately stopped being angry and turned her head away, her eyes full of anxiety.

"Because I think your novel is so sad."

Xiao Xin blinked and said, with a trace of pity on his face.

"Sad? No."

Kasumigaoka Utaha frowned slightly and supported her chin as she thought.

How can the vague love between men and women in youth literature be sad?

Although it was a love triangle, the relationship between the three people broke down afterwards, and the real sadness has not yet come. Her eyes were full of confusion.

"But according to the development of your novel, someone will definitely leave in sadness at the end, right? I don't like this. I hope that at the end of the novel, everyone can be happy and cheerful."

Shin-chan smiled brightly, expressing his inner thoughts, his eyes sparkling.

Kasumigaoka Utaha looked at Shin-chan carefully, without blinking, staring at him seriously and thinking about what Shin-chan said.

"Xiao Xin, you are really greedy."

Kasumigaoka Utaha sighed, said something nonsensical, and a helpless expression appeared on her face.

"Hehe, it's okay."

Xiaoxin scratched his head and said with a smile, a hint of embarrassment on his face.

“No one is complimenting you.”

Kasumigaoka Utaha rolled her eyes at him, but the corners of her mouth slightly raised.

"Is that all? Where else?"

Kasumigaoka Utaha continued to ask, her eyes full of anticipation.

"I feel like your novel, Xiao Shiyu, seems a little too hasty and rushed, lacking some joy."

Xiaoxin tapped his chin and said thoughtfully.

"Lack of joy..."

Kasumigaoka Utaha lowered her head in thought, muttering to herself, with a hint of confusion in her eyes.

Kasumigaoka Utaha suddenly came to her senses. Among the “joy, anger, sorrow, and fear”, the only thing missing in her novels seemed to be “joy”. Her novels have always been written around the “anger, sorrow, and fear” of love.

"Yes, a novel like mine is incomplete and incomplete."

Kasumigaoka Utaha shook her head somewhat depressed, her eyes full of frustration.

If the four basic human emotions cannot be satisfied, readers will not be able to truly identify with the characters, and the novel will not be popular with more people.

"So what do you think I should do, Shin-chan? How can I add joy to my novel?"

Kasumigaoka Utaha suddenly turned her head away, her eyes full of anticipation.

She now feels that letting Xiaoxin help her read novels was the right choice. Xiaoxin was a wake-up call.

"You can also create some works that can bring happiness to people like me, like my "The Adventures of Fatty Zaemon", so that you will know how to write."

Shin-chan put his hands on his hips and nodded proudly, not forgetting to advertise his comics.

"Can I open another novel..."

Kasumigaoka Utaha thought hesitantly, her eyes full of confusion.

If I open another book, the progress of "Love Metronome" will definitely lag behind, but if I don't open another book, the problems of "Love Metronome" will never be fundamentally solved.

In the end, Kasumigaoka Utaha made the firm decision to open another book.

Anyway, this novel is no longer popular, so why not take a chance?

There was a flash of determination in her eyes.