Douluo, Adventure in a Parallel World

Finally finished, it's not easy. First of all, I would like to thank all my readers who have supported me silently. Thank you. Your support is crucial. If it weren't for your support, I might not be able to write so much in this book, hahahaha.

In fact, the time when I started writing and the time when I serialized were not the same period. The reason why I could update several chapters a day in the early stage was because I had some stock.

I have been writing this book since June. This is my debut work and also a proof of my progress. To be honest, I am really excited and feel a sense of accomplishment to have taken this step.

At the end of writing, my only thought was that it would be good enough to finish this book. Now that it is finished, I will have done my best to live up to my expectations.

Why did I want to write this book? I have to explain it from the following aspects:

First, when I read the ending of the original novel, I felt very sympathetic towards Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue, so I had the idea of ​​writing a book.

Second, I read some fan fiction. The quality of these books varies, but I read them all. The ones I recognized and appreciated the most were "Shocked, I Became Bibi Dong" and "Douluo: The Peerless Angel Qian Renxue", which were both very well written.

At this point, I want to mention that some readers have already noticed that some of the settings and plots in the early part of this book are similar to those in the above two books.

I admit that in the early stage, that is, the first seventeen chapters, I did borrow from other fan fiction, especially the Qian Renxue chapter. This chapter is almost a different version of "Shock", because I really don't know how to improve the relationship between Qian Renxue and Bibi Dong.

Did Bibi Dong really want to confess to her daughter: Your father raped me, and you only exist after that time?

Regardless of whether she believed it or not, even if Qian Renxue believed it, it would be too much of a blow to her, so she could only use this method, or rather, this method was actually the most suitable.

But I have to say that this is what I consider to be my biggest failure. I am too dependent on others. I want to say sorry here.

Although the stories after Chapter 17 are all original, the reference in the early stage did bring me bad influence. But it was my own fault, and I should bear these bad influences.

Closer to home.

Third, there are some videos. For example, the video I watch the most is edited by Bilibili up master - Remember-me. The video is about the anime Douluo Dalu, which really touched me.

Fourth, it satisfies my Chuunibyou. When I was a kid, I dreamed of traveling through Douluo Dalu, and now my dream has come true.

Based on the above points, I opened the book.

For this book, I made up for the original novel of Douluo Dalu, but... I didn't finish it, I just speed-read it through and didn't remember any details.

If you ask me to tell a story, I can probably follow it, but I really can't tell you what it is about.

In order not to conflict with the original work, I chose a parallel world as the carrier.

This has several benefits:

First, you can set up your own plot, which may even go against the setting of the original work.

Second, it can avoid the mistakes in the original work.

Judging from the results so far, the parallel world is undoubtedly my most successful choice. Especially the different world chapter, I think it is a mediocre setting, but it is enough to be praised in the Douluo fan fiction. I have a lot of things to say in this chapter, but readers don’t buy it, so I can only cut down on the steel and only keep the most exciting part of the battle of gods. (Putting hands on hips for a while)

Now that we have laid the groundwork, let’s take a closer look.

Readers may find that many plots in this book are very similar to those in hot-blooded comics. You guessed it right. Whether it is the plot, rhythm, narrative style, or expression techniques of this book, they are all similar to the expression methods of hot-blooded comics.

When writing this book, I referred to a lot of comics. The source of the other world chapter mentioned above is the Edlas chapter of "Fairy Tail"; the Youke Space in the Liankao chapter is similar to the Greed Island chapter of "Hunter"; the Sealing Pillar incident of Fez is similar to the Three Impacts of "EVA"...

There are many more, so I won’t go into details here.

When I first started writing, I had already decided on the protagonist, and it had to be Bibi Dong!

Why do I like Bibi Dong so much? Besides her tragic life story that makes me sympathize with her, the most important point is that Bibi Dong is a strong woman who has her gains and losses.

A character that can truly touch people's hearts and resonate with readers needs to have a certain complexity and depth.

They should own their hopes and disappointments, which should influence their decisions and behaviors.

Some people have to bear heavy hatred, while others face tremendous pressure to survive.

Such characters are more realistic and more likely to attract readers' attention and sympathy.

Bibi Dong meets this condition very well.

She possessed things that many people could not dream of - power, status, talent, and godhood, but the only thing she had never obtained was love.

This is an imperfect place.

What I remember most is what Lu Xun once wrote: Maybe he will come back tomorrow, maybe he will never come back.

To put it this way, it is an unforgettable role, always accompanied by gains and losses.

Is a perfect protagonist good? Yes. But who can handle a perfect protagonist? No one.

The most typical example is Tang San in the original novel. Because he was too perfect, he became the target of criticism from readers, and even passers-by deliberately mocked him.

Because everything he does will be questioned, but San Shao simply cannot control the perfect protagonist, resulting in double-standard plots in the original work, which ruined Tang San's reputation. Or, it is because Tang San is too perfect that readers will focus on small details, and once they find something that does not fit Tang San's character, it will be dug out and magnified.

And in the original work, Tang San always gains without losing.

We all know that you can't have your cake and eat it too, but that's not the case with Tang San.

I remember the original story where Tang San got the fourth ring was very dramatic——

Yu Xiaogang gave Tang San a choice:

Choose between the ten thousand year old crypt spider or the thousand year old human-faced spider.

The Crypt Demon Spider can bring crowd control capabilities to the team, which is beneficial to the team as a whole; while the Human-Faced Demon Spider can further strengthen Tang San's external soul bone, which is more beneficial to him personally.

Tang San finally chose the Ten Thousand Year Crypt Demon Spider Spirit Ring which was more beneficial to the team.

Logically, the story should have ended here, but then something bloody happened.

In order to prevent Tang San from losing the Human-Faced Demon Spider, Tang Jia San Shao cleverly arranged a plot in which the Human-Faced Demon Spider attacked Xiao Wu. Tang San took advantage of this opportunity to use his external soul bone to successfully absorb the power of the Human-Faced Demon Spider.

I was very confused when I read this. If that's the case, why bother in the first place? Why not just choose the human-faced demon spider? Why make the readers disgusted?

Far away.

In addition to Bibi Dong, the character Qian Renxue also makes me sympathize with her.

Like her mother, Qian Renxue's fate is also full of gains and losses.

She was born with the glory of angelic blood, with extraordinary talents and a distinguished family background. Even those coveted god positions seemed to be within her grasp.

But she lacked the warmth and affection of ordinary people. Her desire for maternal love could never be satisfied, and her love and pursuit of Tang San was ultimately unsatisfactory.

With gains and losses, the depth of the character is immediately revealed!

Even in this book, Qian Renxue and Bibi Dong have their own character flaws, and have misanalyzed situations - Bibi Dong loses her patience due to fear, and Qian Renxue ignores the consequences due to calculations... Of course, this is only a small part.

However, they must have realized their mistakes and tried to correct them.

Now that we have discussed the pros and cons, what remains is a discussion of strong women.

In my opinion, the term "strong woman" usually describes women who excel in work, career or other fields, and are independent, confident and strong. They are often able to overcome difficulties, achieve their goals, and often play a leading role in society.

Obviously, Bibi Dong fits this positioning better.

Although I am a man, I have to admit that in modern society, more and more women have achieved remarkable achievements in various fields, and their success stories inspire more women to pursue their dreams and goals.

Let's put it in the original novel. Although Bibi Dong turned completely evil and did some incredible things, making people think that she was in love, it must be said that she had strong political skills and her goals.

In order to achieve her goal, she can do everything she can, even at the cost of the entire Spirit Hall and the continent.

Although these are relatively negative things, they can also prove from the side that Bibi Dong is indeed a strong woman.

But as I said before, Bidong is just more suitable. Why?

That's because she is Yu Xiaogang's vassal in the original work.

The purpose of Bibi Dong's existence, besides helping Tang San level up, is to set off Master Yu's love.

Yu Xiaogang loved Bibi Dong but couldn't get her, so he turned around and had an affair with his cousin Luan Lun; Bibi Dong stayed alone in the Spirit Hall, but in the end she only helped Yu Xiaogang and Liu Erlong become a pair of lovebirds.

The character of Bibi Dong in the original novel was created to pave the way for Yu Xiaogang and to contrast with Liu Erlong.

Of course, this is a plot written by Tang Jia San Shao. I have no right to interfere and am not qualified to judge.

All I can do is try my best to bring the character of Bibi Dong to life. In this book, Bibi Dong becomes exactly what I imagined her to be. She is not someone’s vassal, nor a victim of political struggle, nor a stepping stone for Tang San!

Let me tell you about the process of coming up with this book.

Once the characters are determined, the next step is to conceive and develop the plot.

Actually, I only showed a part of the wild imagination in my mind. At the beginning, I was very bold, and I set it up like this: fantasy novels emphasize the word "mysterious", so why not make this work more fantasy?

But I quickly rejected this idea. If I were to detach myself from the masses and only write about the "mystery" in my mind, most readers would not be able to continue reading.

Finally, I chose the traditional leveling and growth model. This model is more comfortable for everyone to watch, and the story is better developed and easier to tell.

After finalizing the story outline, I started writing. Yes, that's right, I started writing without any preparation.

This is why the early stages seem so nonsensical, with things always going here and there without being able to grasp the core.

Regarding the plot setting, I set it up like this:

The first chapter is very simple. It takes so much space to tell the story of how Bibi Dong came here and got the Huiyao system. It also introduces Bibi Dong to the divine test. In the first trial, I also roughly explained the format of the trial.

I have already described the Qian Renxue chapter, so I will not elaborate on it here. Why is this chapter so early? Because I think repairing the mother-daughter relationship is more important than anything else. If the mother and daughter cannot work together, they will only face a failed ending.

The chapter of Yin-Yang Eyes of Ice and Fire is about seizing Tang San's chance. I originally wanted to write Dugu Bo and Dugu Yan directly, but thinking of Dugu Bo's sacrifice of his life for justice in the anime, I chose to keep them and add them to the protagonist camp.