The author of the depressing comic book series makes the heroine cry.

[That autumn when I was eleven, I could no longer play the piano. ]

[Two years later, in April, a girl named Miyazono Kaoru appeared in my world. ]

[My name is Kousei Arima, and I am composing music in the piano classroom.]

【Everything started when a baseball hit me. Maybe it was the beginning of my good luck.】

The beginning is very attractive, and the writing is concise and simple. It does not make the mistakes of newcomers such as a lot of long-winded settings and unclear developments, and the plot is presented in a simple and straightforward manner.

The plot and setting should be of a similar type to her novel "Love Metronome", both of which are about love, healing and sweet moments.

It starts with the male protagonist being unable to play the piano due to some problems, and the female protagonist inserts herself as the person who saves him.

However, the more Kasumigaoka Utaha read on, the more frightened she became. Is this level really something that a novice novelist can achieve? Could it be that some big shot was reincarnated from the dead?

After a long time, Kasumigaoka Utaha finally finished reading the novel. She gently raised her head and looked into the distance with a confused look in her eyes, as if she was still immersed in the plot of the story. There was silence around her, only the sound of the breeze coming from beside her and the sound of Bai Ye chewing the bread brought by Kasumigaoka Utaha.

The silence lasted for a long time, as if time had frozen. Kasumigaoka Utaha's thoughts gradually withdrew from the world of the book, but her heart was still deeply touched. She sat there quietly, motionless, as if she had turned into a sculpture, thinking about the various plots in the book.

From a reader's perspective, she really wants to read on! Why is it discontinued at this point!!!

But from the author's perspective, it's very strong! The novel written by this junior is really strong. As long as you submit it, it will definitely be accepted, and it will even sell very well.

There is an unwritten rule in the light novel industry that if warm and everyday novels can become popular, then the author's level must be very high.

This type of novel is too demanding on basic skills. Unlike the orthodox and different world types, which have rich settings and plot support, the warm and everyday type relies too much on writing style and character setting.

In short, this is no longer a masterpiece that Kasumigaoka Utaha can comment on.

Rubbing her temples, Kasumigaoka Utaha felt that she might have been too pretentious in front of others. She had originally planned to teach this junior fellow student as a senior.

The result was that he just puffed himself up with something bigger than himself.

"Junior, is this really the light novel you wrote?"

"Why? Senior sister thinks it's not pretty?"

…………

Kasumigaoka Utaha was silent. No! Rather, it was because it was so beautiful that she didn't know what to say for a moment.

“You really haven’t submitted any manuscripts?”

Even Kasumigaoka Utaha couldn't believe it.

"No, this is my first time writing a light novel, but I've submitted it to Dengeki Bunko, and it seems to have been nominated for a grand prize."

Grand Prize Nomination!!!

This almost shows that there is a high probability that this novel will be selected for the grand prize, as long as there is no dark horse. However, dark horses are not so easy to appear.

Utaha Kasumigaoka only won the Newcomer Award, and she was from a medium-sized publishing house like Busei. How can she be compared with large publishing houses like Dengeki Bunko?

For a moment, I felt an inexplicable sense of frustration. I was not as young as others, and my talent was not as high as theirs.

Suddenly, the little bit of self-esteem in Kasumigaoka Utaha's heart, which made her think she was superior to her peers, disappeared.

After all, Kasumigaoka Utaha's starting point in high school life is higher than that of ordinary students. The light novels she wrote can be published, her grades are among the best in school, she has a harmonious family, and she is also very beautiful.

This was the first time that Kasumigaoka Utaha felt defeated by her peers.

Happy and cool!

How about it! Do you feel how powerful my buddy is?

Xia Qiu secretly became arrogant in his heart. It is necessary to be humble. Of course, as a young man, it is acceptable to be a little hot-tempered.

Just get the balance right.

Even though the work is from an older generation, the fact that I was able to copy it out and retell it completely is also my ability, isn't it?

I still say that if you can't even copy it, I suggest you go to Shen Dongjing Bay.

"Based on this plot alone, I am indeed not as good as my junior."

Or it should be said that it is very far away. Although the first light novel of Utaha Kasumigaoka became a small hit, the second volume fell into an extremely boring writer's block, which made Utaha Kasumigaoka fall into a very anxious state.

As the submission deadline was approaching, Kasumigaoka Utaha was a little overwhelmed because she had not started writing the second volume yet.

"No, no, I should call you senior."

Xia Qiu spoke very friendly and took his phone.

"Hey, don't tell me, Senior, I've been having a hard time with Kawen Ka recently. I can't even continue writing my original idea."

Kasumigaoka Utaha smiled self-deprecatingly, and thought it would be better to forget about calling Xia Qiu a senior. It was good enough that she could maintain her current level.

"Senior, are you stuck? Do you need my help?"

Hearing this, Kasumigaoka Utaha nodded and played the second volume on her phone for Xia Qiu to see.

It is indeed feasible to have others to help and comment on your work, which is always better than working in isolation.

"So 'Love Metronome' was written by a senior!"

“Have you seen it!!”

"No."

Kasumigaoka Utaha was speechless, then why are you so excited! ! ! !

Needless to say, Kasumigaoka Utaha's writing style is very immersive, but the plot is a bit disappointing, neither good nor bad, just barely acceptable.

As for this second volume... although it only has tens of thousands of words, it's obvious that Kasumigaoka Utaha is having a hard time writing. These tens of thousands of words are like constipation that can't be defecate, and even if they are defecate, it's just a lump.

No wonder this guy had such an embarrassed expression.

I read it very quickly, not as carefully as Kasumigaoka Utaha reads her own novels. There is no need and no point in doing so. One can get the general idea from these tens of thousands of words.

Xia Qiu rubbed his temples with a headache.

"How about it?"

Kasumigaoka Utaha asked impatiently.

"Although I don't want to say it, but what you wrote is really a mess..."

Xia Qiu did not say the following words because they were too insulting.

"I haven't read the first volume of Senior Sister, but I can roughly guess the plot of the first volume based on the second volume. First of all, the plot of the first volume should be well written, but the progress of the male and female protagonists is too fast. And one thing is obvious that it progresses too fast, resulting in the lack of any side plots and main plots that can promote the plot in the second volume of Senior Sister."

"To put it simply, the plot is too bland. If the first volume is a candy that you can eat, then the second volume is just bland water, which makes people lose the desire to read it."

And as expected, the second volume of Kasumigaoka Utaha was almost cut short due to poor sales.

"I see. I know the hero and heroine progressed too fast in the first volume, but I don't have a better solution."

Many novel writers will find some unreasonable contradictions and bugs in their works after re-reading them after they are published, but they have already been published and cannot change them even if they want to.

"There is a solution. I wonder if senior knows this... Bah, bah, bah, do you know that it's all in vain?"