Zongman: I am on the set of Oregairu, playing the role of Bai Xue

Bei Nuo fell back and lay on the soft mattress.

The system's projection interface was still in front of him.

He was thinking, if he wanted to watch all the works he participated in in the future without missing a single episode.

You must have professional acting skills to be able to respond to various emergencies at any time.

But forget it now.

Even if he doesn't go to watch the movie, he can still visit the comment section to find out how much the audience likes the show.

Of course, the data is the key.

As long as the number of views of "Oregairu" remains stable, he doesn't have to worry.

At this time, he glanced at the data next to the popularity value.

【Story deviation value: 17.4%】

This data fluctuated several times today, as if two invisible forces were pulling at each other. There were times of increase and times of decrease, and finally it stopped at this position.

How will the story of "Oregairu" change next?

Beinuo didn't know, but he had a hunch.

At least that's not a bad thing.

?

The next day.

Beinuo walked slowly to the door of the service club.

He knocked on the door, but no one answered.

But through the round glass on the door, Beinuo could see someone sitting inside.

This was strange, it was rare that there was no response from Yukinoshita when there were people in the Service Club.

He pushed the door open and looked out.

Including Beinuo himself, everyone was present.

Yukinoshita sat quietly in the original position, her eyes naturally closed, her chest rising and falling without noticeable movement as she breathed evenly.

She seemed to be in meditation or resting with her eyes closed. No wonder she didn't even hear the knock on the door. It seemed like she stayed up late last night.

Yuigahama next to her looked like she had just woken up, as if she was awakened by Kitano's knock on the door.

Yuigahama narrowed her eyes slightly and blinked twice cutely, with a hint of confusion on her face. Maybe she was still "fishing" before knocking on the door.

Just like when she was called out by the math teacher in the morning, she was more absent-minded than ever.

In addition to the three people in the service club, there is still one Zaimokuza left.

He looked full of energy and was looking at Beinuo approaching with joy. His stiff sitting posture just now relaxed.

Through the pair of black-rimmed glasses, Kitano seemed to see a glimmer of hope in Zaimokuza's eyes. That was undoubtedly the look of someone seeing a savior.

"Hikigaya! You really kept me waiting!"

Bei Nuo thought that he was not late for long, and it was obviously this guy who came too early, so there was no need to be so excited.

Before he could say anything, Yukinoshita, who was sitting in the distance, seemed like a god or Buddha that had been awakened. The moment she opened her eyes, her whole body exuded a sense of majesty, and then she spoke the truth.

"Quiet."

Her cold gaze swept across Zaimokuza, terrifying him.

When Kitano saw Zaimokuza's timid look, he immediately understood his difficulties, but he did not sympathize with him.

Yukinoshita covered her mouth with her hands and yawned slightly. Then she looked at the time and took out the manuscript she brought home yesterday.

"Now that everyone is here, let's get started."

Bei Nuo responded softly, put away his schoolbag and sat in his seat.

He also took out a manuscript and spread it out naturally. A piece of grid paper with a different format from the original was naturally revealed in the middle, and it could be seen that it was filled with words.

Bei Nuo said in a slightly low voice: "Well, it's finally time for the trial."

"Hmm! This is the time of trial... Hmm? Why does it sound weird?" Zaimokuza's lenses glowed with a dull white light.

If Zaimokuza had been a little more careful, he would have seen that the edges of Yukinoshita's manuscript were filled with labels of different colors.

Even without thinking about it, you can see that there are a lot of problems.

Kitano originally wanted to be the first to give a suggestion, but when he saw Zaimokuza's swollen face with confidence, he thought it would be better to let Yukinoshita take the lead.

Let him see what the bloody reality is.

Yukinoshita glanced at Kitano and Yuigahama, and seeing that they had no intention of speaking, she took the lead and said, "I'm sorry, I don't really understand this kind of work."

Zaimokuza folded his arms, looking like a general, "No problem, I just want to hear the opinions of the world, please speak freely."

Yukinoshita took a breath.

Just one minute passed.

Zaimokuza was already lying on the table, in a state of near death.

His ears were constantly echoing with sharp comments such as "extremely boring", "unimaginably dull", "Have you really been to elementary school", "The story is too clichéd and the next plot is easy to guess", "Instead of developing literary talent, you should learn common sense first" and so on.

At first he could still withstand one or two verbal attacks, but as time went on he could no longer defend himself. In the end his fleshy armor could not withstand Yukinoshita's critical strikes.

Seeing how devastated Zaimokuza was, Yukinoshita couldn't help but sigh, "I haven't finished yet. Forget it, let Yuigahama-san speak instead."

"..."

"Yuigahama-san?"

"Um...ah! Is it my turn? Sorry."

Yuigahama quickly came to her senses, looking just like someone who had been suddenly called by a teacher.

She took out a clean manuscript, just like the one she brought home yesterday, but upon closer inspection, she could find some marks between the lines.

Although not as detailed as Yukinoshita's annotations, Yuigahama did read it carefully.

"Well, here it is. Regarding the campus part here, why did the heroine suddenly hug the hero? There was no explanation later."

After hearing this, Zaimokuza hesitated for a while. He gestured with his hand and took the paper from Yuigahama.

After he read the original text twice, he slowly said, "Yes, why?"

"Unbelievable, are you really the author?"

"Ahem, well! Now I remember, maybe the heroine is scared."

The word "maybe" from Zaimokuza's mouth made his explanation seem pale and powerless. He also realized this and added: "This situation can highlight the reliability of the male protagonist, and most readers like to see this kind of scene."

Bei Nuo was speechless. "So you abandoned logic and created this scene just to please the readers?"

"But I'm also a reader." Yuigahama continued to refute, "I don't like this kind of plot at all, it makes the girl look weird."

"And this conversation is also very strange. Why did she suddenly get angry? Even if she was being unreasonable, there must be a reason..."

When she said this, her voice suddenly stopped.

Yukinoshita was slightly stunned and couldn't help but think of what happened yesterday. She was a little absent-minded at the moment.

But Kitano turned his gaze towards Yuigahama, as if he had noticed something.

Feeling Kitano's gaze, Yuigahama quickly came back to her senses, "Ah, sorry, I was a little distracted."

Perhaps it was the subtle atmosphere just now that gave Zaimokuza inspiration.

At this moment, he was putting on a serious look, playing the role of a swordsman general again, and responded in a deep and slow voice: "No problem, please continue."

Yuigahama paid no attention to Zaimokuza's exaggerated performance and reorganized his thoughts.

"Well... how should I put it?" She said in an innocent tone, inadvertently causing real damage, "You don't understand girls' minds at all. Can you still write novels like this?"

"Uku!!!"

This soul-stirring question once again struck Zaimokuza down.

Tears welled up in his eyes and he almost fell to the ground.

But even so, Zaimokuza still held out some hope and looked towards Kitano.

"Hikigaya... you should understand me, right?"

Kitano avoided Zaimokuza's pitiful gaze and said to himself, "Don't worry, Yuigahama and Yukinoshita are both girls, and they are basically not the target audience for this type of novel."

As soon as these words came out, Zaimokuza's eyes lit up with confidence again.

But Beinuo's next sentence brought him back to square one.

"As a viewer, I have no interest in watching it."

His cold tone petrified Zaimokuza on the spot.

"The beginning of the novel was very difficult for me to read. For the convenience of readers, you should really take into account the advice of Yukinoshita-san."

Hearing Kitano's concerned tone, Zaimokuza came to his senses a little, but before he could reflect, Kitano said another sentence.

“That way you don’t waste other people’s time.”

"..."

Zaimokuza did not respond, as if he was about to leave this beautiful world.

"Wow, Qi is really going too far."

“That’s pretty mild.”

Seeing that Zaimokuza had completely given up, Kitano took out the piece of paper in the middle of the manuscript and slowly read, "First of all, the first three pages of text can be omitted. There is no need to dwell on the background setting. Just briefly explain it when it is needed. The most important thing at the beginning is to quickly get into the story."

"The protagonist's middle school personality is a little interesting, but he needs to restrain himself at ordinary times. It might have a miraculous effect if he releases it in the key scenes."

"The heroine sells benefits too casually, readers won't cherish them. If they can be sold vaguely, it can be a highlight. Also, the description of the protagonist's abilities is too abstract. If it can be..."

These words were like voices from outer space, penetrating directly into Zaimokuza's brain. He, who had originally felt hopeless, gradually sat up straighter.

Except for the negative comments given at the beginning, the rest of the comments about Beinuo are all valuable information.

The more he spoke, the more attentively Zaimokuza listened, and in the end he could not help but start a question-and-answer discussion with Kitano.

Yukinoshita and Yuigahama could only listen silently.

Yuigahama couldn't understand from the middle, only Yukinoshita was still thinking seriously.

Once two boys talk about a topic of common interest, it basically has nothing to do with girls.

"That's all I want to say, but don't forget the advice that Yukinoshita and Yuigahama just gave you. It's not that easy to write a good novel. At least your first works can be regarded as shit."

"If you can keep going, maybe one day I will actually go to the bookstore and buy your work."

Zaimokuza nodded frequently, already lost in thought.

Yuigahama at the side couldn't help but sigh: "So Aqi knows so much about novels?"

"When you have read thousands...many online novels, you will be able to speak fluently." Bei Nuo folded the manuscripts in his hands neatly, then stretched his body, "Of course - that's just talk, it's still difficult to do it in reality."

At this time, Zaimokuza's face was filled with admiration. "Hikigaya, I didn't expect you to have so much experience. I may bother you from time to time in the future, so I hope you don't mind."

"Just talk normally, and I'll decide whether to answer you or not depending on my mood."

Bei Nuo handed him the manuscript, then tilted his neck towards the door, indicating that he was leaving.

Zaimokuza also understood what he meant.

Just as he was about to get up and leave, performing a farewell scene of mutual respect.

But the voice from Yukinoshita stopped him.

"You haven't been allowed to leave yet?"