Zongman: Exchange lives with the heroines

Taking Gokou Ruri's feelings into consideration, Xia Mo did not continue to chat privately with Yukinoshita Yukino without her.

Anyway, he could probably guess what Yukinoshita was thinking, so there was no need to ask in a hurry.

And Yukinoshita Yukino had no intention of speaking actively, perhaps because she had not yet figured out what her wish was, or maybe she was so angry with him that she didn't want to pay attention to him for the time being.

then.

The three of them returned to the living room and sat on the sofa.

"Please advise!"

Gogen Ruri respectfully handed over the manuscript of the novel with both hands.

Yukinoshita Yukino nodded slightly, took the manuscript and read it formally.

After a while, her brows gradually frowned.

Noticing this scene, Gogen Ruri's heart tightened and she became more and more nervous.

"Don't be nervous, Ruri-chan."

Xia Mo comforted him softly: "After all, you already knew the result, didn't you?"

"..."

Sister Yukino, you comforted me very well. Please don’t comfort me next time.

Gogen Ruri looked at Xia Mo speechlessly, but her mood unexpectedly relaxed.

Yes, there was no need to be nervous. Her sister Yukino had already told her what her novel was like on the train. Why should she be so optimistic and have unnecessary expectations now?

ten minutes later.

Gogen Ruri still became nervous.

I saw Yukinoshita Yukino put down the manuscript, rubbed her eyebrows with a headache, and then turned to look at Xia Mo.

"I don't really understand light novels, but this... let's just call it a light novel, does anyone really read it?"

puff!

The Black Cat sank.

Although I know I won’t get any good comments, it still hurts to receive such a low evaluation.

Xia Mo touched the girl's head comfortingly, then looked at Yukinoshita Yukino with a slightly blaming tone.

"Can you please stop being so discouraging? Liuli-chan knows that her writing is not good, and she wants to correct it and improve, so she came here with me to seek your advice. It's enough for you to just give us your opinions and views. There's no need to be so harsh..."

Yukinoshita Yukino said coldly: "That is my opinion and view. I don't think it's mean. If you want to say something nice, I can only say that you have found the wrong person."

"I'm not asking you to say something nice, but could you be a little more tactful?"

I've said enough harsh words on the tram. If you keep going, Black Cat will cry.

"Wait, you better shut up."

Xia Mo suddenly remembered that Yukinoshita was famous for her sharp tongue, and he must have been crazy to expect her to speak tactfully.

"You should be the one who shuts up."

Yukinoshita Yukino glared at her without any hesitation. What could blindly pampering her achieve?

"Gogen-san, what do you think?"

She cast her eyes towards Gokou Ruri who lowered her head and said, "If you can't accept it, then forgive me for being blunt. If you don't even have the ability to bear it, it would be a good thing to give up early."

Xia Mo agreed, and he also believed that Gogen Ruri would not let him down.

as predicted.

next moment.

Wu Geng Liuli raised her head, took a deep breath, and then said seriously: "Senior, I can accept it. Please give me more guidance."

Yukinoshita Yukino nodded slightly, then shook her head.

Gogen Ruri was a little confused. What did it mean?

"I can't teach you anything."

Yukinoshita Yukino was telling the truth.

She is not a second-dimensional person, and she doesn't understand light novels. She only has a little contact with them because of Xia Mo, and she is not allowed to teach others.

However, Gogen Ruri didn't believe it.

In her eyes, Yukinoshita is a strong person who can sign a contract and make her debut, so how could she not be able to teach her.

It must be modesty!

It must be a lack of sincerity!

"Please! Senior Xia Mo."

Gogen Ruri stood up, bent down and bowed with full sincerity.

Yukinoshita Yukino was very embarrassed. She really didn't understand light novels.

"Okay, Liuli-chan, sit down first and give Xia Mojun some time to organize his words."

Xia Mo spoke up to help, and pulled Wu Geng Liuli to sit down again.

Yukinoshita Yukino breathed a sigh of relief, and noticing Gokou Ruri's expectant look, she immediately glared at Xia Mo.

It's all your fault, what should I do?

Look at me, little sister.

"It's like this, Liuli-chan, you've seen what kind of person Xia Mo-jun is. He's not very good at talking. He's the typical person who's cold on the outside but warm on the inside. He knows a lot, but he's not good at expressing himself. So, Xia Mo-jun is telling the truth when he says he can't teach you."

As Xia Mo explained this, Wu Geng Liuli couldn't help but look disappointed.

"But it's not completely unteachable."

Xia Mo suddenly changed the subject, attracting puzzled looks from the other two.

What does it mean?

"It's just that it's impossible to be as direct and effective as you imagine, Liuli-chan. It may not be satisfactory. Liuli-chan, you have to be mentally prepared."

Of course Gogen Ruri had no objection. How could she be picky when someone was teaching her with good intentions?

"Xia Mojun, you did your best. Even if what you said is not so correct, it is better to listen to both sides. At least it can be used as a reference."

Yukinoshita Yukino pondered for a moment and agreed.

ten minutes later.

Gogen Ruri looked down at the novel manuscript in her hand, her eyes filled with frustration.

Although just as her sister Yukino introduced, her senior Xia Mo was not good at speaking, which gave her a strange feeling that he didn't understand light novels.

But overall, the other party's views are basically the same as her sister Xue No

Boring, incomprehensible, no story, full of self-entertainment...

This was the novel she had written, which had taken her half a year's hard work, but now it seemed like a complete waste of effort.

a long time.

Wu Geng Liuli clenched her white and tender fists, encouraged herself, and cheered herself up again.

"Xue...Huh? Where are the people?"

She looked up and was surprised to find that the living room was empty except for her.

When did you leave?

Where have you gone?

She was full of confusion and was about to shout out.

Xia Mo and Yukinoshita Yukino walked out from the balcony one after another.

"Liuli-chan, Xia Mojun just called the editor to tell him about you. The editor said it's okay to meet. Let's go now."

……

"Click..." x2

The two doors opened almost at the same time, and both parties who went out were stunned.

The black-haired lady with beautiful face, fair skin and slightly cold temperament saw the three people next to her, and a strange color flashed in her red eyes.

He actually brought two girls home, the youngest of whom looked like she was only in junior high school...

"Hello, you must be Miss Kotori Yu that Xia Mojun often mentions. You are indeed very beautiful."

Xia Mo greeted him and praised him with a smile.

stare!

There is murderous intent!

Yukinoshita Yukino, who was closing the door, froze. She turned her head and saw the black-haired, red-eyed lady, Touka Takanashi, staring at her expressionlessly.

"You often mention me?"

The voice was calm and without any ups and downs, but Yukinoshita Yukino could hear the hidden murderous intent in it.

"I……"

There is something I don’t know whether I should say or not.

"Yes, Xia Mojun often told me that Miss Kotori's cooking skills were the best he had ever seen. He still can't forget the taste of that box of snacks last month."

Last month, at the beginning of the time travel, Xia Mo moved here to live.

According to Japanese etiquette, he went to the store and bought some exquisite gifts for his neighbors.

Touka Takanashi gave a box of homemade snacks as a return gift, and they tasted really good.

He wanted to learn a few tricks to improve the food, but the other party was busy with work and left home early and came back late, so there was no chance to build a close relationship with him.

Now that they finally met, he didn't want to miss it.

"Excessive praise."

Touka Kotori glanced at "Xia Mo". So they were talking about cooking skills...

She felt a little relieved, as long as he wasn't thinking about her, otherwise she would be on high alert.

"I'm not exaggerating. You should know that Xia Mojun is very picky about his taste. Miss Kotori Yu can conquer Xia Mojun's taste buds, which shows that her cooking skills are very impressive..."

Xia Mo smiled and started boasting mode.