After a while, at the coffee shop on the corner.

"Here, your caramel macchiato."

"Thank you, Mr. Dongchuan."

Taking the coffee from Dong Chuan Che and feeling the cool temperature, Wang Yanyan, the girl wearing transparent glasses, had a look of joy in her eyes.

To be honest, she was already very excited just because Dongchuan Che agreed to take a look at her script, but she never expected that Dongchuan Che would be willing to come to the cafe to talk with her in detail!

And

"He has the same taste in coffee as I do."

Watching Dong Chuan Che take a sip of the sweet caramel macchiato, Wang Yanyan's big eyes behind her transparent glasses were filled with even more joy. A feeling that "my idol and I have the same hobbies"!

Very happy, Wang Yanyan is very excited now. Similarly, although Dong Chuanche's face is still calm and he is just drinking coffee quietly, his heart has already been turbulent, and his eyes unconsciously glance at Wang Yanyan's gentle face.

He had never expected to see Wang Yanyan again under such circumstances. And he had never expected that Wang Yanyan would become his little fangirl!

"If I become the younger sister and she becomes the older brother, wouldn't that be the plot of Eromanga Sensei?"

Lived in Bengbu.

In my memory, Sister Yanyan always acted like a big sister in front of me. She was the kind of person who could sit in front of my bed wearing only panties and play PS4. But now she is very shy.

Kind of fun.

Thinking of this, Dong Chuan Che's mouth corners slightly raised. To be honest, although there are many women in the family now, he is indeed not a person who is very good at flirting with girls, or he is not a person who is very good at taking the initiative to find topics.

It's the type that will either make the conversation awkward or be considered sexual harassment by women.

Before coming here, he had thought about how to strike up a conversation, but he didn't expect the situation to be completely reversed now.

The person who took the initiative to talk became Wang Yanyan.

Good.

Dong Chuan Che was mumbling in his heart. Feeling his gaze, Wang Yanyan thought he thought she was too slow, so she quickly took out the tablet from her bag and nervously fiddled with it with her fingers.

"Mr. Dongchuan, this is a script I wrote with great effort! It's a workplace drama, and the main content is that the protagonist faces various difficulties in the workplace and relies on his own abilities to turn things around."

Wang Yanyan pushed the tablet computer in front of Dong Chuanche and her face flushed.

Well, it’s a blush, but not because of shyness, but because of nervousness and anticipation.

I have to say that although I have seen Wang Yanyan's face flush in another state, this feeling is also quite interesting. Dong Chuanche took the tablet with a smile, "Don't be nervous, drink some coffee, I'll take a look first."

"Thank you!"

I really want to read my script!

Wang Yanyan was suddenly excited. People do stupid things when they are excited. I don’t know what she was thinking, maybe because Dongchuan Che is Japanese, she stood up and bowed 90 degrees.

".Alright, alright, I'll take a look first, you can do whatever you want."

Dong Chuan Che was amused by Wang Yanyan's silly look. He smiled and shook his head, then began to read the script seriously.

However, as time passed bit by bit, his brows furrowed as he finished reading an outline.

"This script is a bit weird."

Frowning and looking at the screen, Dongchuan Che kept thinking in his mind.

Although all the games he has made until now are classics from his previous life, that is mainly because he is still in the rising stage of his career and he must accumulate more quickly with those masterpieces. But he was in this line of work in his previous life, and after getting the system in this life, he has been thinking about it when he has nothing to do, so his own screenwriting skills are actually very strong.

This can be seen from the fact that he added a complete female ninja storyline in "Sekiro" and adapted the plots of works such as "Diver Dave" and "K-ON!", but the market response of these works is still very good.

And from his perspective, the script in front of him

There are only two words to describe it - awkward.

Wang Yanyan's script is a hardcore and suspenseful workplace story similar to "Hanzawa Naoki". After reading a few unit plots, it is actually quite interesting, but the problem is that she added a strong love line to this story.

To be honest, the love line is actually quite well written, but this kind of drama requires a tight pace.

A simpler description would be: the protagonist encounters a problem - the protagonist tries to find a way to solve the problem - the protagonist encounters some trouble in the process of solving the problem - the protagonist solves the problem - kills the villain, receives positive feedback, and then immediately moves on to the next problem.

This is a very compact structure, but once the love line is added, an emotional plot must be added behind each frame of this structure, and the structure will be lengthened.

Of course, it doesn’t mean that love lines cannot be added at all, but this is a great test of the screenwriter’s ability to fully satisfy the audience in the right places. Otherwise, the audience will feel dragged out and feel a strong sense of tearing.

It is obvious that although Wang Yanyan has been writing scripts for so many years, she lacks practical experience and does not fully understand what the audience wants to see most and when.

Dong Chuanche felt that the two plots of this script were at least 80 points each, but when the two plots were combined into one TV series, it was not even 60 points. Moreover, the love plot was obviously added later, which made the changes to the career plot very obvious.

"Are you losing confidence?"

While reading the script, Dong Chuan Che quietly glanced at Wang Yanyan, who still looked nervous and carefully pushed her glasses.

Since he became the president of Holy Light Society, some independent game producers often come to him with demos and ask for investment. These people generally have one common problem, that is - chasing hot topics.

It is not a bad thing to chase hot topics. But the problem is that these people chase hot topics because they are not confident enough.

They feel that the subject matter they want to work on may not be accepted by the market, but they are unwilling to completely give up their desire to express themselves, so in the end they can only forcibly add popular elements to their original works.

Thinking of this, Dong Chuan Che frowned habitually and tapped the table with his fingers. Just as Wang Yanyan was getting more and more nervous, he put down the tablet and said, "This script is not good."

Not quite.

As soon as these three words came out, Wang Yanyan felt as if she had fallen into an icy cave, and the big eyes behind her transparent glasses lost their luster!

But before her eyes completely dimmed, Dongchuan Che said, "Or rather, it's not that the script is not good, but that you think too much. You are the creator of this script, you should understand what I mean. If you take this work out and only write about the male protagonist's career line, I might invest in finding some 18th-tier actors to test the waters, but you wrote too much.

An overly complicated plot line prevents you from keenly grasping every climax of the plot, that is, the exciting points of the plot, and also disrupts your narrative rhythm. "

Wang Yanyan kept talking, and with every word, the smile on her face froze a little. When she saw her slender fingers unconsciously grasping the coffee cup, Dong Chuanche took a sip of coffee.

He grew up with Wang Yanyan, and he knew very well what Wang Yanyan was missing.

She and Dong Chuanche have similar personalities, that is, they are both easy-going and calm, but they are still very competitive. But the difference is that Dong Chuanche has a stronger ability to self-regulate and can enter the competition mode at any time, while Wang Yanyan needs some external stimulation.

This stimulation includes pressure, as well as recognition and needs from others.

Thinking of this, seeing that Wang Yanyan was extremely nervous, and knowing that she had completely engraved what he said into her heart, Dong Chuanche put down his coffee cup and said, "This script is indeed not good, but your basic skills are very solid. Let's put it this way, take a look at this script, and if you are interested, I will ask your director Lu to let you go, and you can come to my side as an assistant director to gain some experience first."

"Ahh?! Okay, okay."

Just now she was feeling disappointed, but suddenly, she was stunned by the words "You come to my place and be an assistant director". She adjusted her glasses, took the tablet from Dong Chuanche, and saw five big words - "A Song of Ice and Fire".

"This name is strange, but why did Mr. Dongchuan write the script in Chinese?"

A strange thought flashed through her mind, but soon, Wang Yanyan's attention was completely focused on the script.

As she watched, Dongchuan Che also drank and said, "Your screenwriting ability is actually not bad, the key is that you have too little experience and don't know how to handle multi-threaded narratives. And this drama is a typical multi-threaded narrative. If you can stay in this crew and eat up most of the content, it will be of great benefit in the future."

"Okay, thank you Mr. Dongchuan!"

Although she said this, Wang Yanyan's eyes never left the screen. Her big eyes were full of excitement and shock!

Unparalleled shock!

Although she hasn't officially started reading the plot yet, she was already confused just by looking at the character outlines at the beginning!

Over three hundred characters?!

More than thirty core characters?!

seriously!

Stunned!

It's not like Wang Yanyan hasn't seen group dramas before, but the problem is that this is the first time she has seen a group drama script with more than 300 characters, and more importantly.

The fingers kept turning down, and with each turn, the shock in her eyes grew greater.

Each character has a complete storyline?!

shocked.

I didn’t read the story line carefully, but the exaggerated amount of text is already scary!

Wang Yanyan was completely stunned, and looked up at Dong Chuan Che who was drinking coffee in disbelief. To be honest, because she had played games like Fate, she knew that Dong Chuan Che was very powerful, but it was still too exaggerated to be this powerful!

After taking three gulps of coffee to calm herself down, Wang Yanyan continued watching the drama.

"Edard Stark. So the main plot is that the protagonist leads his children to conquer the continent? It's a bit like the lord novels in China."

Wang Yanyan was not opposed to Western fantasy epic dramas and even liked them very much. She became interested and became more and more fascinated as she watched. As she read more and more of the plot outline, as the plot moved to Eddard Stark's way to King's Landing, as Eddard Stark was involved in a struggle with Queen Cirrus and was thrown into prison, she couldn't help but sweat.

"The protagonist is in jail, who will come to save him?"

"Little Finger? Yes, Little Finger loves his wife very much. He will definitely be the key figure in the protagonist's comeback!"

The more he watched, the more nervous and excited he became. He didn't even notice that Dongchuan Che next to him had already ordered a sandwich and asked for a glass of water.

She was like a silly nerd who came across a novel she liked. She didn't care about the outside environment at all. She just kept swiping the screen, looking forward to seeing the protagonist being rescued and then killing everyone. But when Dong Chuan Che finished eating the whole sandwich and was wiping his hands with a napkin, under his gaze, Wang Yanyan suddenly froze!

Hard!

It was as if Jerry, who was stealing cheese, was hit hard with a spoon by Tom.

Wang Yanyan's whole body stiffened, and her back straightened instantly. She raised her head and stared at Dong Chuanche blankly, "Will this Ed be resurrected?"

Silly!

The protagonist of the first volume was beheaded by the little prince!

There was no mercy, no justice triumphing over evil, the protagonist was killed directly!

Moreover, at the stage of the plot when the audience's emotions were at their highest, the protagonist was killed!

Wang Yanyan was stunned as she had never expected the plot to turn out this way.

Dong Chuan Che was not surprised to see her reaction. To be honest, he was also scared by this scene when he watched Game of Thrones in his previous life, but when he watched the Red Wedding and looked back at this scene, it was not so scary anymore.

Smiling and taking a sip of coffee, Dong Chuan Che said, "How about it, are you interested?"

"For a drama of this level, can I really be included in the cast?"

Wang Yanyan was a little unconfident again, but it was obvious that through the pressure just now from Dong Chuan Che and her own pursuit of art, although her expression was still a little timid at this moment, Dong Chuan Che could still clearly feel the fanatical desire in her eyes.

"Of course, otherwise I have no reason to show you this script." Dongchuan Che smiled and shrugged, then changed the subject, "However, with your current ability, even if you are given the script, you won't be able to film it well. So although you hold the position of assistant director for this drama, you are mainly doing the work of a stage supervisor."

"No problem! Even if you ask me to be a makeup artist, I'd be willing to do that!"

Wang Yanyan was very excited. She never thought that she could join such a high-level crew. She didn't dare to think too much. What's interesting is that she seemed to have thought of something. In Dong Chuanche's eyes, she stood up again and bowed 90 degrees.

It was still a 90-degree bow, but this time

As soon as she bowed, the transparent glasses on her face flew out and flew straight towards Dongchuan Che's face.

Panic!

She quickly reached out to grab it, and as her body leaned forward, the Jiangnan Beauty's Thirty-Six Emperors Jelly was also thrown onto the water cup.

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The glass fell to the ground and the guests around looked over curiously. When they saw Dongchuan Che's wet crotch and his painful expression, the two fashionable girls from Shanghai next to him laughed secretly.

As for Wang Yanyan, this beautiful girl from Jiangnan who wore high-power myopia glasses and had a silly look, was completely numb at this time, and her fingers were completely twisted together.

Panic!

"I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm from... "

She did not hesitate and squatted down to help tidy up the glasses as soon as she reacted. But before Dong Chuan Che could stop her, her fingers were pierced by the glass fragments.

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Really satisfied.

He rolled his eyes at Wang Yanyan who was pinching her fingers, but Dong Chuanche's eyes were full of love. When he was very young, his arm was cut, and Wang Yanyan helped him clean the wound in the same way.

In fact, strictly speaking, the adult Wang Yanyan in his memory did not have this kind of personality.

In his previous life, when he was less than eleven years old, the Wang family suffered a fire. Since then, he was almost raised by Wang Yanyan single-handedly.

He saw with his own eyes how Wang Yanyan's back changed from a cute and nerdy girl from the south of the Yangtze River who actually had a very unconventional mind, to a fierce and aggressive woman who still loved to drink sweet coffee.

In this life, Wang's father and mother did not open that noodle shop, so Wang Yanyan was better protected, and the craziest side of her heart was not forced out.

"That's good too."

Although the sister Yanyan in front of me is different from the last appearance in my memory,

Looking at this lovely woman squatting on the ground, her hips forming a perfect arc, her big jelly pressing against her knees with an overflowing feeling, her face very cute, and she was sucking on the wound on her finger, the corners of his mouth unconsciously rose.

When she was very young, her arm was cut and she cleaned the wound in the same way.

Recalling the past, in Wang Yanyan's surprised eyes, he reached out and pulled her up, "Just using saliva won't work, let's go buy some Band-Aids."

"what?"

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