A Wizard's Survival Guide to the 20th Century
Chapter 55 A hasty summary at the end of the volume
Well, the first volume is over...
Very quickly, and in a hurry, I should have finished the shortest volume in the entire starting point, and the volume ended before it was released...
Looking back at this volume, the copy of Bridgewick at the beginning should be said to be well written, and it can score an overall 6 points in my heart.
Of course, the problem with this copy is that the level of completion is not high enough, and many places are not explained clearly. This is a matter of experience. As a newcomer, my experience is still too shallow.
Moving on to the plot of Jinshan City, what is criticized here is the lack of motivation for the protagonist to intervene in the whole incident at the beginning. Here is my question, why?
Because of Kavin.
At that time, I was like a traveler who had just stepped out of the oasis of Bridgewick and stepped into an uninspiring desert.
So the style of painting changed here. I didn’t want to write a boring plot like the second volume of So-and-So, so I thought about how to make this uninspired plot interesting.
The solution I thought of was to make a Tongliao joke. Unfortunately, the response was not very good, but this was the best solution at the time.
Haha, Shiba Inu, I am actually a person with a bit of dark humor. However, there won’t be any funny plots like 22~24 in the future, so don’t worry.
The subsequent battle of wits with several families can only be said to be quite satisfactory. Fortunately, the climax of this copy is pretty good. I used a magical and stream-of-consciousness writing method, which should be good-looking...right (T_T).
The second copy should be 5 minutes in the beginning, 6 minutes in the end, and 8 minutes in the climax?
It's a pity that the protagonist lacks motivation due to the poor beginning.
Throughout the volume, what I want to express is that a person who hates forests wants to leave here, but when he escapes from a forest, when he looks back, he finds that it is difficult to abandon the other people in the forest. This contradiction made the protagonist miserable, so he set fire to the forest, but when he stepped on the embers, he felt confused.
Just like a bug needs to eat plants to turn into a butterfly; a firefly glows in the night, but it uses light-seeking bugs as food. Those at the bottom always want to do something that hurts other people.
The bug volume should be short, because the protagonist needs to escape from this environment quickly, but now that I think about it, I should insert a branch line of more than ten chapters before the protagonist inserts the kangaroo robber incident to build up motivation for the protagonist, so that this volume will be complete.
I didn't write it well, so I apologize.
In any case, "Like a Worm on Humidity" is over, and I don't ask for any leave. Then comes the next volume:
"The little beast that wanders among the bushes"
Just like mice or rabbits, the protagonist can see bugs on the wet soil downwards, and the sky is still far away upwards, but at least everything is not a giant mountain.
So, I hope you all will continue to support~
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