The fiefdom increases by 1 soldier in 1 second, and the empress kneels down and begs not to rebel
Chapter 978 Final Thoughts
As you can see, this is the end of the book.
After sixteen months, I finally finished it with great care. I felt relieved, but also very disappointed. This book, which has been criticized a lot, made me feel exhausted and always felt sorry for my fellow readers. For a long time, I felt deeply guilty about it, which led to nightmares and anxiety every day. O(╥﹏╥)O
"You should write a good story, not an essay!" "You are seriously a literary geek!" "It's too slow, Water King!" "Where is the protagonist?" "Where is the system?" "Why write so many minor characters? Do they help the plot?"
I have no way to refute the above criticisms, as this is indeed the case.
I must be honest with all the book friends. This book is indeed an immature work. Many book friends came here because of the word "cool" in the title, but found it to be a bit off in the end. For this, I must apologize to these book friends, but they probably won't read this. (╥╯^╰╥)
But I still have to say sorry for not giving you a good reading experience. Although this is a free novel, I always think that wasting other people's time is also a crime.
But I still have to say that from writing cool articles to micro group portraits, group portraits, a lot of details, aspects, and character descriptions, all of which are my evolving style. When I got halfway through and received a lot of criticism, I thought about changing, but then I felt that this was my style, and I had to find my own style, rather than the more widespread "pure cool article writing method."
Of course, this may also be due to my inability to control the "cool writing style", but in short, I have gone down this path to the end, so I accept all the criticisms, and thank the book friends who criticized me for this. I shamelessly regard it as a spur. O(╥﹏╥)O
Apart from the critics, I am also very grateful to the supporters. Although I have written very little here, I am really grateful to you. Sometimes, even if I see one or two comments saying "the writing is delicate" or "the characterization is good", I will be happy for the whole day and feel complacent. At the same time, I keep reminding myself, "See, there are still people who can resonate with you. Just keep writing like this. This is the right thing to do."
Maybe I am overly sentimental, but as someone who is often in distress, anxiety, and entanglement, I really like reading these comments. I even read them over and over again, because I have no idea whether my writing will get better and better in the next book or the next one, or just become garbage.
I feel that all the contents of this book are my own hard work, and I really don't want it to become a worthless piece of trash. Especially these characters, basically all the characters with names, I have carefully shaped them, trying to avoid homogeneity as much as possible, so I have to use more words to describe them and write about their differences, which has angered many book friends.
The root cause of the "deterioration" of this exciting novel is indeed the characters. When I was writing chapters 109 and 110 [Returning Home], the insignificant little character "Zhu Ba" suddenly gave me a brainwave and I started to turn to the path of a non-exciting novel.
When I was writing Chapter 150.151 and [The Bird in the Cage], the character "Jin Changge" made me suddenly sick. That is the "literary youth disease" that is very common among authors. I have had this disease since I wrote my first book, and when I wrote the Bird in the Cage, I was completely terminally ill.
Damn it, is there any medicine that can cure the literary youth disease! ? (╯︵╰)
However, it was also because of the occasional illness that I wrote two characters that I am most satisfied with, the brother and sister Jin Changge and Jin Jiande. Unlike the protagonist who has a "great, glorious and righteous" personality from beginning to end, these two supporting characters have obvious growth trajectories. Putting them in an online novel, it may not be right to write like this. As many book friends said: "What's the point of putting so much space on such characters?"
But there is really no way. Compared to the protagonist with a single personality, I prefer to write supporting characters with complex personalities. Only when I write about them, I feel that I am writing a living person, rather than an NPC character who appears to show off and then is defeated.
It is certainly possible to write a story in a routine way with constantly appearing NPC characters, the protagonist defeats him, gets a reward, and then meets the next NPC character, and repeats this process for a few hundred chapters. But instead of going on like this, I would rather write about real people, that is, the stories of minor characters.
The prodigal bandit Zhu Ba, the peasant Hu San who rebelled against the government, and the little beggar Wen'er who walked step by step from hardship to happiness. If this book really created a world, then I sincerely hope that these little people can all live happily.
Because the world is made up of these little people, just like us.
But in a novel that uses "explosive soldiers" and "war" as gimmicks, this is undoubtedly contradictory, so my writing was also very contradictory, especially in the later stages, after I went overseas.
When I was writing the chapter on the continent of Salisno, my mind was full of "anti-war" ideas. Because I was so immersed in the writing, I even felt sad when I wrote about the deaths of those "villains".
Due to this contradictory mentality, I became more and more tired the more I wrote, and I resisted instinctively, so in the end I did not write the conquest that a novel about explosive soldiers should have, but ended with a peaceful ending.
So in the end, the powerful Yan State used a military exercise to show its fighting power, which made other countries afraid and dared not to start a war again. I think this is in line with the logic of reality.
Of course, in pure cool stories, there will always be stupid villains who constantly provoke the powerful protagonist. I really don’t want to write about such stupid villains. The protagonist’s system is already too powerful, so powerful that no matter what kind of villain is created, he can’t fight him, so that’s all.
If the process of overthrowing the Kim family is called "new branches growing from a dead tree," then I have already written about this theme.
As for the war overseas with the Delta Federation Empire, the theme was "anti-war", and I wrote about it completely. After writing about the theme, I, who was seriously literary, almost poured out all my desires for expression.
So I’m very sorry that I didn’t satisfy you all, but now I have found my own style. What I’m going to write next is a work with a unified style from beginning to end, which will never be "mistaken".
The new book has already taken shape. It is a non-systematic fantasy novel that will focus more on the description of the protagonist, but I still need to absorb more knowledge and recharge my energy. I hope that there will be book lovers who are willing to read it by then.
Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to all the book friends who have clicked in to read. Thank you for reading, which has given me food to eat and allowed me to continue writing books to fulfill my dream. Thank you very much, thank you!
Bow! Thank you!
The green mountains remain unchanged, the green water flows forever, everyone, see you later, love you?(?>?<?)?
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