From abandoned baby to CEO

Chapter 345 You slammed the door and left, but he cried

Liu Bin adjusted his glasses and said: "A good film and television work mainly depends on the entertainment, influence, artistry, visual effects and emotional resonance of the work."

Sun Xue scratched his head and said, "What you said is too professional and I don't quite understand."

"Let's put it this way, good film and television works will give viewers emotional satisfaction and physical and mental pleasure."

Sun Xue felt that what Liu Bin said was quite similar, and continued to ask: "Based on the standards you mentioned, how much do you think my novel meets?"

"Well..."

He glanced at Sun Xue and hesitated to speak.

"Liu Bin, just say it boldly, it's okay, I'm strong inside."

Liu Bin seemed a little embarrassed: "Then I told you not to be angry!"

"Say it quickly! I'm almost dying of anxiety!"

Sun Xue had an upright temperament, and when she met someone who spoke so slowly, she felt anxious and anxious.

"Actually...it's better not to say anything!"

"Oh my! Hurry up and say it! I'm convinced by you, why is a grown boy so stubborn? No wonder..."

Sun Xue was so anxious that she almost spilled the beans and quickly swallowed the second half of her words. Fortunately, Liu Bin didn't ask any further questions.

"Actually, if I compare the novel you wrote according to film and television standards, I don't think it meets the standards at all."

This was said so suddenly that Sun Xue was stunned for a moment.

My heart suddenly went cold. These words came from the mouth of a foreign person who specializes in film and television. You can imagine what they mean.

Sun Xue looked at Liu Bin with an embarrassed look, and pretended to be calm and said, "Then please tell me in detail."

"Your topic selection is good, your writing style is also good, and the story is attractive. However, the protagonist is not fleshed out enough. You have to create a character that people will never forget after watching it. Do you still remember that when we were children, we watched Journey to the West, and we were so fond of Master and Disciple. The four of them remembered it immediately, do you know why?"

"What?"

"It's just that each of them has a very plump image!"

Sun Xue nodded thoughtfully.

"Then how to solve it?"

"This is easy to solve. You can describe it through details. In the movie, it is called a close-up. Your lens should focus on the protagonist."

"What else?"

"The other thing is that your story doesn't resonate with people emotionally, it's just telling a story..."

Liu Bin did not save any face for Sun Xue. He analyzed one by one and listed a laundry list of problems.

Sun Xue was criticized so badly that she didn't even say anything, but she was already unhappy in her heart. After all, I have written a novel that was made into a movie.

Unexpectedly, in his eyes, his novel had a lot of flaws.

Sun Xue was naturally unconvinced and asked: "Then what you said before were all hypocritical?"

"What I said before is that your writing is good and the storyline is attractive. It has nothing to do with these. Isn't your writing goal to develop in the direction of film and television? Then the requirements must be set higher!"

He immediately blamed himself and said, "I'm sorry, Sun Xue, did it hurt your confidence? I just said stop commenting, you have to let me say it."

Sun Xue forced a smile: "No! I humbly accept your suggestion."

Sun Xue calmed down and carefully considered what Liu Bin said, and felt that his analysis was quite similar. She knew in her heart that her novel did have the above problems mentioned by Liu Bin.

But it has been serialized for more than a month now, and it would be a big project to revise it again.

After thinking twice, Sun Xue asked tentatively: "Can you be my first reader after I finish writing every day to help me check and make suggestions?"

"Then I'm very happy!"

Hearing Liu Bin agree so straightforwardly, Sun Xue's gloomy mood improved a lot just now.

"Sun Xue, in terms of film and television, our works are still inferior to those of foreign countries. We usually analyze the best works in class. The teachers in many professional courses are all senior actors, screenwriters and screenwriters from the film and television industry. director."

……

Liu Bin talked eloquently, and Sun Xue listened carefully.

This was the first time for Sun Xue to hear a lot of the content. Although it was confusing, it felt very fresh and made sense.

"Okay Sun Xue, I will bring you some professional books on film and television tomorrow. You can study them when you have time. It will definitely be helpful for you to write novels."

"Can I ask you for advice if you don't understand?"

Liu Bin smiled brightly: "That's for sure! Anyway, I'm not in a hurry to find a job during this period. I have a lot of free time. By the way, I'll leave you my phone number. You can call and communicate at any time."

Sun Xue complimented: "How about you become my teacher."

Liu Bin looked shy and said: "I don't want to be a teacher. Let's learn from each other and make progress together!"

Sun Xue thought of Boss Liu's words again. Apart from being a bit too talkative, Liu Bin was really good in other aspects.

Especially when the topic of movies was brought up, his whole person completely changed, his expression was high and his face was filled with confidence.

The two chatted until dinner time.

"Liu Bin, let's go, I'll treat you to dinner at noon."

The two came to the street and passed a row of noodle restaurants. Liu Bin pointed to a noodle restaurant called Lao Li Tou Zhajiang Noodles and said, "Can we just go to his house to eat?"

Sun Xue readily agreed that the noodles in this noodle shop were indeed good, and Boss Liu even took her to eat them twice.

After the noodles arrived, Liu Bin closed his eyes and smelled the strong aroma of the fried sauce, and sighed: "Wow! It smells so good, a taste I haven't seen for a long time. I haven't eaten it for a long time. I used to eat it every time I came back, and I felt I could never get enough."

"Yes, it tastes very good, and your dad also likes it very much."

Liu Bin suddenly withdrew his smile: "Don't mention him, he will get upset when you mention him!"

Why! It seems that the father and son have a deep grudge!

It seems that the relationship between father and son has not yet been reconciled, and Liu Bin is still angry with his father.

Sun Xue's mind reappeared in the scene where Boss Liu was tearfully talking about his past, and his eyes were full of deep self-blame and regret.

Boss Liu also specifically told him to persuade Liu Bin when he met him. Looking at Liu Bin with a resentful face in front of him, Sun Xue felt inexplicably sad.

Although Boss Liu used foul language towards Liu Bin and even hit him with an apple, he was more affectionate towards Liu Bin. Liu Bin should feel happy to have such a father. Why! It’s true that I don’t know how blessed I am.

Thinking about myself again, I have never had this kind of experience before, not even a word of scolding from my parents...

Hey!

……

"Sun Xue, what are you thinking about?"

A trace of doubt flashed in Liu Bin's eyes.

"I didn't...thought of anything!"

Sun Xue smiled lightly, but felt aggrieved in her heart.

The noodles in the bowl suddenly lost their taste, and they were just chewed mechanically in their mouths.

On the way back to the Internet cafe, Sun Xue was emotionally brewing for a long time, and finally decided to persuade Liu Bin.

"Liu Bin, I want to tell you something."

"Yeah, tell me."

"You actually misunderstood your dad. Your dad loves you very much!"

When he mentioned Boss Liu, Liu Bin seemed very excited, and the decibel level of his speech increased: "Love me? If you love me, you won't scold me. If you love me, you won't hit me with an apple. Besides, you are still here, I am no longer a child, and he doesn’t give me any face.”

Sun Xue did not dismiss Liu Bin's words. After he calmed down a little, he said:

"You know? After he argued with you, you slammed the door and left, but he cried. He cried so sadly, my heart broke when I saw it."

Hearing this, Liu Bin raised his head and looked at Sun Xue in surprise.

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