From abandoned baby to CEO
Chapter 135 Benefit a lot
The car drove around and finally stopped in front of a restaurant called Baiweizhai.
This is an antique restaurant with simple and elegant decoration and soft colors, making people feel very comfortable and relaxed.
It's not exactly a restaurant. The huge restaurant is divided into two areas, a dining area and a reading area. It is separated by floor-to-ceiling glass.
Through the glass, you can see people reading quietly, and others making tea and chatting.
Smart and gentle piano music floats in the restaurant. The reading area has a very poetic name: Baiweishe.
The owner of the restaurant is a middle-aged man in his 40s, thin and bearded. The pigtails on his head jump up and down as he walks.
The boss seemed to be old friends with Uncle Zhang and Uncle Lu. As soon as they met, he greeted them warmly: "Mr. Zhang, take a seat first."
Then he said to Uncle Lu: "Editor-in-chief Lu, I haven't seen you here for several years!"
“I’m busy with work and can’t get away!”
Uncle Lu said with a smile. The boss hurriedly asked everyone to sit down, and then said: "Sorry, excuse me, you two. You can chat and eat while I'm busy for a while."
Uncle Zhang and Uncle Lu briefly chatted about their respective lives and then talked about work matters.
The food was also served. Uncle Zhang picked up the wine glass in front of him and said, "Lao Lu, come and have one for our reunion!" He drank it all in one gulp.
So we chatted and ate, and drank half a bottle of wine in a while. When the wine was full, Uncle Zhang said to Sun Xue: "Sun Xue, I'd like to toast your uncle Lu!"
Hearing Uncle Zhang's words, Sun Xue hurriedly picked up the wine glass: "Uncle Lu, here's a toast to you!"
Uncle Lu smiled and clinked glasses with Sun Xue.
Sun Xue drank for the first time. After a sip of wine, her mouth was burning and her face was burning.
"Lao Lu, this is Wenwen's tutor, a very honest and excellent little girl. She helped Wenwen's academic performance from the bottom of the class to the upper-middle level in the class."
Uncle Zhang looked proud.
"Yeah! That's pretty awesome!"
Uncle Lu smiled and nodded towards Sun Xue.
"This is the girl I mentioned to you on the phone last time. She is also a literature lover, just like us back then. She loves literature very much and has written many works. I personally think it is pretty good. She is very malleable. However, she submitted many articles to the Quancheng City Evening News but they were all returned, and she is also very confused. You are professional in this area, you can give her some advice when you have time."
"Oh! Another literary young man, not bad!"
Uncle Lu smiled. Then he asked: "Have you brought all the manuscripts?"
"Uncle Lu. I brought them all."
Sun Xue answered hurriedly.
"Okay, let's go to Baiweishe after dinner to chat and watch at the same time!"
"That's too much trouble for you, Lao Lu! Let's do it again!"
Uncle Zhang said and picked up the wine glass again.
Following this topic, Uncle Zhang and Uncle Lu talked about Baiweizhai again.
From their chat, Sun Xue understood that the old place they mentioned before was where they often came when they were in college.
When they were in college, Uncle Zhang and Uncle Lu were both literary youths, and the boss of Baiweizhai was also a literature lover. The boss opened such a restaurant, and later it became a gathering place for young literary people.
A group of like-minded young people with the same dreams are here to talk about literature, dreams and life.
After eating, everyone came to Baiweiwu. Song Sunxue took out the manuscript that had been prepared in advance. Uncle Lu looked at it carefully. While reading, he took a pen to draw and write next to the article. Soon Uncle Lu had read the manuscripts brought by Sun Xue and gave revision suggestions for each manuscript.
"The article you wrote is okay overall, but there are still many problems. If you look at this article, you did not grasp the theme and wrote astray. If you look at this article again, the narrative is too cumbersome and the characters are not prominent enough; And the serial novel you wrote, the main line is not clear enough, the story lacks suspense, and it is not attractive enough..."
Uncle Lu carefully pointed out the problems in each article to Sun Xue one by one. Sun Xue saw that even the inappropriate words used in the article were marked out by Uncle Lu one by one and the replacement words were written next to them. It was obvious that Uncle Lu had revised them very carefully.
"Overall, the article you wrote is pretty good. You still have a little talent in writing, but the article needs to be continuously polished, including the writing skills."
Listening to Uncle Lu's words, Sun Xue couldn't help but nod.
"Lao Lu, you can give her some pointers on where she needs to strengthen in the future, so that she can have goals and direction."
Uncle Zhang smiled and added water to Uncle Lu's teacup.
"Well, let me give you some suggestions."
Uncle Lu took a sip of water and continued:
"First of all, you start by imitating and borrowing. Choose a writer you like, choose an article, and imitate how to express and tell an attractive and good story. Then close the article, write a thousand-word story yourself, and remember It’s about imitating rather than plagiarizing; then I think you can develop in the direction of writing novels, but start with short stories now. Your current level is not suitable for writing full-length novels; the last point is to read a lot, think deeply, and persist Output every day, constantly polish your work, and finally form your own writing style.”
"Sun Xue, these suggestions from Uncle Lu are very good, you must remember them!"
Uncle Zhang added from the side.
"Let me make a book list for you. You can focus on reading these books at ordinary times."
As he spoke, Uncle Lu made a long list of books for Sun Xue.
"Lao Lu, is there any chance that Sun Xue's articles will be published in your magazine after they are revised?"
Uncle Zhang asked with a smile.
"Her current level is not up to the requirements of our magazine, but after revising it according to my requirements, she can try to submit it to a local newspaper. After you finish writing the manuscript, you can send it to me, and I can take the time to give it to you. "
"Thank you, Uncle Lu!"
Sun Xue gained a lot from Uncle Lu's words and also moved her very much.
It turns out that Sun Xue had always felt that her articles were well written, and she was a little complacent. After Uncle Lu pointed it out one by one, I realized that there were still many problems in my article, and there were too many things that needed to be improved.
"Uncle Lu, I have another question to ask you. This is our school newspaper. You can see if there are any shortcomings."
Sun Xue said and hurriedly handed the school newspaper to Uncle Lu.
After reading it, Uncle Zhang Lu gave his own opinion and then asked Sun Xue:
"Are you in charge of this school newspaper?"
"I'm just an editor, but I want to make the school newspaper better and more influential."
Sun Xue looked at Uncle Lu and said seriously.
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