After giving up on love, the female supporting role dominates the world of immortality

As the title says:

After thinking about it, I finally decided to cut this book off - there will be no more chapters.

Thank you to the readers who support me to continue writing, but I still want to say sorry. I have failed to live up to your expectations. I am really, really - really sorry!

Here, I kneel down and apologize——

My original plan was to change some of the mentally handicapped plots so that the heroine's character would not look so stupid, and make her a little smarter, so that readers would feel more comfortable reading it!

(After all, who comes to Tomato to read novels, not for a cool word?)

However, I tried to change it for several months, and later found that this method didn’t work at all!

Because every plot I designed is interconnected, if I change a little bit of the plot, it will affect the whole body, and the entire outline will have to be changed!

Once the outline is changed, it becomes a different book.

Then why don’t I start a new novel!

Let me tell you here, I did open a new novel, which is also a fantasy romance (why is it a fantasy romance, because this is the category for female videos related to fantasy), and I did include this part of the changed plot in this new book among. I will probably make it available to you in December or January next year at the latest.

Of course, in order to prevent me from cutting it again, I am already saving manuscripts. I have saved many, many, many manuscripts, so much that my hands are itching now and I want to post them immediately, but I have to hold back! ! ! ! ! Revise, revise, and write more.

In addition: In fact, you don’t need to comfort me by telling me that the current plot of this book is very interesting. After reading it myself, I felt that it was based on the defense...

Really, really, many of the plots are so embarrassing that I can’t bear to watch them! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Many of them really show that everyone's IQ is very low. Take the first few chapters as an example, there are already many bugs in the plot:

such as:

1 How could Mo Qianxin not suspect that Zhang Miaomiao, who looked the same as Yan Yixiao, was the orphan of the Demon Lord?

How could she be allowed to be hunted alone? It doesn't make sense.

2. When Ye Luo fled, why didn't he arrange Zhang Miaomiao properly instead of leaving him alone in the village?

Isn't this too irresponsible for a mother?

3 Zhuo Jiuyin already knew that he was being controlled, so why did he meet Luo Qingqing again.

It's really too careless.

From the setting point of view, there are already many bugs in the novel, and the subsequent plot must be poorly written and unresolved.

So this book is completely hopeless and can only be cut! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

In addition to the weak plot and character design, many modern words in the novel should not appear.

The reason for this situation is that this is my first time writing a fantasy novel, and I have read more modern romances in the past. I am really not good at choosing words and sentences with an ancient background.

Therefore, in order to make up for the shortcomings of improper wording, I have been working hard to learn this knowledge in the past few months and strive not to make such mistakes in the next book.

I also read a lot of knowledge and techniques about plot arrangement, trying not to make the plot of the next book read too "stupid".

last of the last--

I promise that I will work hard to correct the above mistakes in the next book!

I will definitely show you a cool article that meets your expectations! ! ! ! ! !

Then let’s meet next time!

Thank you again for your company.

I love you guys~~