After Chapter 55 was updated, maybe because I didn’t get enough sleep yesterday, I suddenly had some feelings, so I wrote casually, chatted a few words, talked about the route after this book, and responded to some suggestions in the comment area.

It has been a month since this book was updated. As for the results, they are not very good. The author is not demanding anything. After all, he knows the level of his writing, plot design, and pacing, so feel free to do it. What I like is fate. If you can click and save this book, it is the greatest support for me.

This Douluo fanfic is, if you count, my fourth contracted work since writing novels. The first three were also Douluo fanfics. Haha, I was so drunk writing them one after another, but I couldn’t help it. , I really want to write and love to write. I am a typical person who loves to cook but also loves to play.

I still remember that in July last year, I forcibly finished my first book. That book was my debut novel. When I wrote it, I didn’t know anything, and I just relied on the experience of reading novels. , and then I wrote it according to the route of the original work. It was confusing and made no sense. My head hurt when I read it. In the end, I didn’t want to continue editing it. In addition, the epidemic was about to end and school was about to start, so I finished it and thought about a new book. It would be better, and then I didn’t expect that it turned out to be my best book so far.

When I was writing my first book, I read the book reviews and someone told me not to follow the main plot!Can the author write something of his own? It's boring to keep following the main line.

When I thought about it and looked at other people's writings, it seemed true that those writing about Douluo fans were just about torturing Tang San while standing in the Wuhun Palace, or following Tang San to destroy the Wuhun Palace. Maybe I didn't read enough. Anyway, I just want to write something of my own, try my best to not deviate from the original work, add martial arts that I find interesting, and write my own interesting story.

As a result, due to my poor writing skills and poor control over the pacing, my second and third books had protagonists who were so invincible that I didn’t know how to write them down, so I ended them forcefully.

After that, I originally didn’t want to write a Douluo fanfic, because I couldn’t control myself at all, so I just wanted to pile all the awesome things I thought of on the protagonist (the second and third books ended like this) , but Douluo Continent cannot have such awesome characters. Once it is written to be too invincible, it will be unreadable and I will not be able to control it.

But I was unwilling to give in, so I thought about trying again, and wanted to write a complete story that people would read. After trying for a long time, I ended up with this one.

As for this fanfic, I still didn’t choose to join Wuhundian or Tang San’s forces, I still wanted to write my own story.

Some readers said it was okay, while others still called it toxic and couldn't stand it.

But for me, it seems to be passable. It’s not about how good the writing is, how good the rhythm is, or how good the plot is. The main thing is that I feel that I have improved and can control the protagonist so that he can be invincible, but not Too invincible to watch.

Some people may think that I am farting. A seven-year-old soul master who can punch the Soul King and resist Contra soul skills without dying is not out of control.

But I personally feel that compared to my last book where I wrote about a giant spirit who raised his body to a height of [-] meters earlier, and according to the description, he could blow up the Douluo Continent with one punch, I wrote about a vampire soul emperor in the previous book. The level has begun to fight against the gods. I feel that the protagonist of this book is already quite good, and there is still room for development. He will not be invincible directly. The most important thing is that there is a plot to continue to write. This is for me. The most important thing is that I don’t have a clear outline. What I want to write today may not be known until I turn on the computer. I write it now.

Now I completely rely on burning passion to make up stories. I don’t know how long the passion can last. However, I couldn’t sleep for this book last night. I tried hard to figure out a hazy route that can lead to a reasonable ending. I am I will definitely write it to that ending, and I won’t force it to end!

This is a promise I made to myself.

Next, let’s talk about some suggestions in the comments.

I saw that some readers asked me not to stick to the plants in Plants vs. Zombies, and asked me to write about some more awesome plants, such as awesome plants in the prehistoric world. However, there is one problem, which is the core strength of my book. The method of improvement comes from the Plants vs. Zombies system, and the world is Douluo Continent. Does Douluo Continent allow such awesome plants to be born?

If you want to write about the power of plants and the awesomeness of plants, you will not need a strong opponent to set it off.

But according to what I'm writing now, maybe it's a big problem whether a Titled Douluo can survive safely in a level five Destruction Mushroom with full skills. The awesome plants in the prehistoric world or other worlds can't be weaker than the Destruction Mushroom.

So for the time being, I estimate that the basic fighting methods are still based on the plants in Plants vs. Zombies. If we really want to write about other awesome plants, they probably won’t be used for fighting now, at least not before becoming gods, but There are other effects, of course, this is what I think now, I don’t know what I will think in the future.

Finally, many people have opinions about the plot of Qibao Glazed Sect, so I will explain it here.

The main comments I have seen on the comments are as follows.

First, what is the Holy Sect? It has never appeared in the original work.

Secondly, when the protagonist left, Bone Douluo didn't stop him?Didn't Ning Rongrong stop him?Didn't Ning Fengzhi stop him?

Thirdly, Qibao Glazed Sect is such an awesome sect, but why does it feel like the author’s writing about it is not as good as a third-rate sect that allows others to sneak in at will.

Another thing I just saw is that a Soul King broke into the inner disciples' place, and there was a titled Douluo living next to him. Did the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect react?

Another one, why is it that Ning Fengzhi has no control over the Qibao Glazed Sect, so can the investigation team do whatever they want?

In response to the above questions, I have the following answers.

First, if I don’t create a villain organization, then I will have to go back and choose to destroy Wuhun Palace with Tang San, or destroy Tang San with Wuhun Palace.

Second, Bone Douluo wants to take the protagonist as his disciple, but this does not mean that he will always keep an eye on the protagonist. He is a Douluo, not a pervert, and the protagonist leaves very quickly. I remember that I haven’t written it yet. He decided to leave after a long time. As for why he left so quickly, it was because he had just suffered the pain of losing his master and returned to his status as a helpless orphan. The protagonist understood that only when he is strong is he truly powerful. He has pride in his heart and is not far away. I beg for mercy and ask others for help, even a titled Douluo cannot get my request.

Third, my description of the Qibao Glazed Sect is too weak, because that is what everyone sees from the perspective of the protagonist. The protagonist I set is not a big shot of the Qibao Glazed Sect, but just one who was adopted by the sect and is not very talented. A good orphan, who really knows that the protagonist's talent is only Bone Douluo, how could he be exposed to the truly awesome aspects of the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect?

Fourth, this is what I just saw when I was writing this chapter. I did not say that the protagonist lives in the inner disciple area. I wrote very clearly that it was expanded at the original small attic of the farm. I also wrote that the farm The garden is so large and wide, and the location of the small attic is so deep in the farm. Moreover, when the Soul King broke in, it was still a rainy night. The movement of the fight was not enough to attract the attention of the sect. Moreover, I did not say Bone Douluo Living next to the farm, I probably wrote about living in the back hill of the Qibao Glazed Sect. I should have mentioned it when the protagonist was experimenting with the Pea Shooter.

Fifth, I just saw the comment posted by the same reader. It is the same as the explanation in the third article. The identity of the protagonist is just an orphan. The master did not become an inner elder by virtue of his strength, but by special contribution. Ning Fengzhi Should a sect leader personally make decisions for an orphan?

Also, someone may ask, Bone Douluo and Ning Rongrong will not tell Ning Fengzhi how talented the protagonist is. What I wrote is that the soul king came to attack the protagonist at night after returning from the trial of hunting for the soul ring. , I could only explain that there was no time to mention it, and in the following days, the protagonist was immersed in the pain of losing his master, and Bone Douluo was embarrassed to offer to accept him as his disciple at this juncture, so he did not mention his talent to others.

These are all things I can explain. If you don’t know the explanation, you are satisfied. If you still have questions, please leave a message.

Also, what I can't explain is that the protagonist's master told the protagonist at the beginning that it was possible to upgrade from level three to level ten in half a year. Many people said this was bullshit. I can only say, well, you just want to This is probably Elder Wu’s white lie.

Okay, these are some of my feelings and some explanations. It may be a bit long, and I don’t know if anyone will read it. If everyone sees this, I will still say something as usual.

Please vote for recommendation. The number of votes has increased, I feel better, and the updates are also great.

After Chapter 55, there is a new plot, please look forward to it.

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