Konoha's younger brother is not easy to take care of

When Kenichi was chatting with Murakami, Boss Togashi was always by his side.

He kept this quiet and didn't make any noise to show respect for Murakami.

After chatting for a while, the shadow clone introduced him to the main body very considerately: "Let me introduce you, this is the big boss of Daikanyama Tsutaya, Boss Togashi."

"Happy meeting!"

Kenichi greeted Boss Togashi politely and shook hands, but still maintained a cold expression on his face.

"I'm honored to meet Mr. Murakami! If Mr. Murakami doesn't mind, we can talk together in the car." Boss Togashi's attitude towards Murakami is much more enthusiastic than towards Kenichi.

Kenichi naturally agreed to Boss Togashi's proposal.

Nonsense why walk when you can take a car?As for the shadow clone over there, Kenichi said that life lies in movement.

Boss Togashi is indeed a rich man. Although it is a carriage and looks ordinary from the outside, once you get inside, you will find a world of difference.

There was no bumps in the car at all. You could tell by looking at the tea placed on the small table in the center of the car. There were almost no ripples in the tea in the cup.

"Good tea! I wonder what Boss Togashi wants from me?"

Xian Yi tasted the tea and praised it first. Although he didn't know what it was good about, would the tea that Boss Togashi brought out to entertain the guests would be of inferior quality?Then he asked pretending to be confused.

"We are holding an event here and would like to invite you to meet and communicate. What do you think?" Boss Togashi asked cautiously.

"No problem, I'd also like to hear what readers think of my book."

Of course I have to do this. Boss Fujian still has to give him face, and more importantly, the money will definitely not be missing.

Boss Togashi remembered that Kenichi seemed to have said that Mr. Murakami’s new book had been written, and this trip to the City of Fire was for publication.

"Mr. Murakami, I heard that your new work has been completed. I wonder if I will have the opportunity to take a look at it." Boss Togashi will naturally not miss the opportunity to appreciate Murakami's masterpiece in advance.

"Give."

Kenichi opened the suitcase, took out the manuscript inside, and handed it to Boss Togashi.

Boss Togashi was flattered and solemnly took Murakami's manuscript with both hands, as if he was holding some rare treasure.

Looking through it slowly and reading it carefully, the expression on Boss Togashi's face changes, sometimes with disappointment and sometimes with joy.

Kenichi was quietly sipping tea next to him. He was very confident in his new work. Although it only took about a month, the more he wrote, the more he felt.

He has reason to believe that the words he writes with care can impress all readers.

After reading it in one go, Boss Togashi sighed, feeling lost, and said, "Mr. Murakami, you can't write like this!"

Boss Togashi's words made Xian Yi feel a little uneasy.

It's impossible to write like this. These words are like bullets, hitting Xian Yi's heart, and he feels that his vest can hardly be worn anymore.

He really wanted to grab Boss Fujian's neck and ask him, "Little Liu Bei," whom you scrawled so highly, why did you praise him so highly, but now that you wrote it carefully, it doesn't work anymore?

You said writing like this is not possible. God knows how to make up for the loss in the previous bet!

First ask what the problem is and see if there is any chance of rescue.

So Kenichi asked: "What went wrong?"

His tone was still so calm, as if he didn't care, and Fan still wanted to pinch his waistcoat.

"Mr. Murakami's writing is very good and touching!"

"The innocence of the heroine in the Pastoral Girl chapter makes people involuntarily recall their first love. This is often the most nostalgic time."

"The heroine in the Castle Princess chapter makes people want to protect her, but men should never be content with the status quo and be restrained in that castle, no matter how luxurious and comfortable the castle is."

"The Female Swordsman chapter showed me another thought. Women should not be a stumbling block for men on their way forward, and men should not restrict their lover's pursuit."

"What moved me the most was that in the last piece about the soul dancer, Ito was willing to be cut into pieces by a hatchet in order to let the soul of the girl who died in a foreign land return to the pure land. What kind of love is this, how touching is this!"

Yeah?Did you really write this?

It feels a little different from what I thought!

Isn’t role-playing all the rage these days?Reading a book with only one female protagonist will inevitably be a bit boring at the end. Like a traveler, seeing different scenery along the way and meeting different girls will bring more freshness.

As for the ending of Hatchet in the end, shouldn’t it be what everyone expected?

The protagonist, this old scumbag, meets one after another, and the girls still fall in love with him to death. If he doesn't have a hatchet, is he still a king?Are there any laws?

Even the author Kenichi felt a little jealous at the end!

In the end, Kenichi was so angry that he gave up the idea of ​​making a sequel to make money, and sentenced the protagonist to death immediately.

But from the evaluation of Togashi’s boss, this book is not bad!So what's wrong?

Kenichi continued to ask: "Boss Togashi, you said there is nothing wrong with this book?"

"Mr. Murakami, your new work is perfect in general, especially the protagonist who loves each girl very deeply, but has reasons to leave them, which is the most sad."

Xian Yi's mouth twitched, wasn't he writing about Little Liu Bei?So it feels like Boss Togashi is reading romance novels?

If the protagonist doesn't leave, how can he find the next one, and how can the story advance?

And it still doesn’t get to the point. What’s wrong with this book?It’s hard to be told no, okay?

“The only drawback is that it’s too short!”

"It's too short?"

Xian Yi doesn't quite understand. The protagonists in his novels are all very big, and the sizes are all based on his own. Why are they short?

"Yes, it's too short! It's such a pity that such a wonderful story ends like this!" Boss Togashi sighed.

Then he suggested: "Mr. Murakami, why don't you consider expanding the story?"

"No!" Xian Yi replied firmly.

Since it was just a matter of the story being short, Kenichi felt relieved.

As for the expanded story, it doesn’t exist!

Kenichi, the boss of Togashi, probably understood what he meant. He just wanted to add a few characters to enrich the protagonist's experience.

But this is impossible. Shu Kenichi really can’t do it if he gives Ito Makoto another girl!

"Boss Togashi, what is concentrated is the essence. Every girl is representative. Forcibly adding content will only destroy the integrity of the story." Kenichi explained.

"I didn't think carefully about this, sorry!" Boss Togashi said.

The atmosphere between the two gradually became harmonious, and they had further exchanges on the content of the book and creative ideas.

In the opinion of Boss Togashi, Kenichi's new book is very amazing overall, but the details can still be improved.

Boss Togashi is worthy of being in this field. With his help, Kenichi revised the manuscript again, and some of the rougher parts became smoother.

This time I really benefited a lot!

If Kenichi writes a new book, he will definitely be able to use what he learned this time!