I was eliminated from the draft, and I became a superstar with a ballad

Lin Qingyin's little head shook like a rattle.

"Su...Student Qingyun's writing...it's great!"

"Nearly perfect!"

"As expected of a talented musician!"

Lin Qingyin's face was still slightly hot.

Hearing this, all the teachers were shocked!

What?

Too well written?

Almost perfect?

In the office, teachers, you look at me and I look at you. Everyone's eyes are full of incredible expressions.

"Mr. Lin, are you kidding me?"

"Mr. Lin, we have no grievances or enmities with you, why do you treat us as fools?"

"Yeah, what good song can you write in 3 minutes?"

"I don't believe it. I still believe you said that a poem can be completed in seven steps. It is impossible to write a song in 3 minutes."

The teachers shook their heads in unison.

Obviously don't believe this kind of thing!

At this time, Su Qingyun had already written the song, and he handed the lyrics to Qian Muwen and said:

"Old Qian, exactly 3 minutes, no more and no less."

Qian Muwen took the paper, and the other teachers couldn't help but gather around.

"When I was a child, I chiseled the wall and stole someone's light."

"If you don't comb the past, you will suffer for ten years."

"Now reading under the lamp, red sleeves add fragrance."

"Half a lifetime of false fame is just vain."

……

For an instant.

quiet!

Deathly silence!

The entire office was silent!

Here are the top teachers from the highest institutions of higher learning in Luzhou.

At this moment, they all stared wide-eyed!

Some people even opened their mouths wide, as if they wanted to eat people!

1 minutes have passed!

Some teachers couldn't help but wiped the sweat from their foreheads!

The office is still silent,

It's just that at some point, everyone's breathing became more and more rapid and heavy!

"Moonlight in Luzhou, pear blossoms and rain are cool."

"Who are you by now?"

"The moonlight in my hometown is deeply etched in my heart."

"But I can't shed tears back then."

……

3 minutes passed, and everyone was stunned!

5 minutes passed, the whole office was eerily quiet, and the atmosphere was very weird!

8 minutes passed, and teachers kept swallowing their saliva!

After 10 minutes, Qian Muwen finally moved, slammed the table, and said in tears:

"Good! Great writing!"

"If this word is used in ancient times, it is no less than Liu Yong, and it can be called a master of the generation!"

Having said that, Qian Muwen couldn't help wiping away his tears!

He is happy from the bottom of his heart:

"The Chinese music scene has finally produced a once-in-a-century genius!"

He said this tremblingly, but no one in the office refuted, and everyone followed Qian Muwen and applauded.

"This lyrics reminds me of my first love, the moon is shaking, people are wandering, the ultimate beauty!"

"Absolutely, this song is absolutely amazing in terms of lyrics and music!"

"When you see the moon in Luzhou, you can look at the moon in the world. When you are young, you know that you are young. Good songs, good songs, good mood!"

The teachers are not stingy with compliments.

Hearing everyone's words, Qian Muwen showed a very gratified expression on his old face.

"Since you all think this song is good, let me test you."

"Teacher Lin Qingyin, can you tell me what is so good about this song?"

Lin Qingyin is a new teacher this year and has just taught.

She knew that Mr. Qian was deliberately testing her.

Lin Qingyin took a deep breath and said slowly:

"Mr. Qian, this "Luzhou Moon" is full of allusions. The beauty of the words is almost magical."

Qian Muwen was noncommittal: "Please tell me in detail."

Lin Qingyin pondered for a moment, then spoke again:

"This song uses the allusion of "chiseling the wall to steal light" at the beginning, which comes from "Xijing Miscellaneous Notes Volume II". It tells the story of Kuang Heng, a great writer in the Western Han Dynasty, who chiseled through the wall and read by the candlelight of the neighbor's house when he was young. Stories of writers."

Chapter 30 030 The song "Luzhou Moon" touches the hearts of the beauties

Lin Qingyin pondered for a moment, then spoke again:

"This song uses the allusion of "chiseling the wall to steal light" at the beginning, which comes from "Xijing Miscellaneous Notes Volume II". It tells the story of Kuang Heng, a great writer in the Western Han Dynasty, who chiseled through the wall and read by the candlelight of the neighbor's house when he was young. Stories of writers."

"Followed by "Su Xi did not comb", a sentence from "Midnight Song", "Su Xi does not comb his hair, and his silk hair hangs on his shoulders". It describes the hard work of young people in studying."

"The first two sentences portray a poor family who studied hard for ten years."

"The words March, Haze, Orioles Flying, Grass Growing, and Catkins can be associated with "Fireworks in March in Yangzhou" in Li Bai's "Yellow Crane Tower Sending Meng Haoran to Guangling."

"The lovers on the bridge come and go, and the red medicine by the bridge sighs that the night is too long. These two sentences are adapted from the Southern Song Dynasty poet Jiang Kui's "Yangzhou Slow Huaizuo Famous Capital", '24 The bridge is still there, and the wave heart Swaying, the cold moon is silent, reading the red medicine by the bridge, knowing who was born every year?'."

"Part of the chorus uses Nalan Rongruo's mourning poem "Huanxisha·Who reads the west wind and cools alone" written by Nalan Rongruo. '."

"In short, this song is full of allusions, full of talent, and every sentence is a stroke of genius. It is amazing and brilliant, and people have to be convinced."

Hearing this, Qian Muwen nodded in satisfaction.

"That's right, Mr. Lin is right! This song "Luzhou Moon" uses allusions throughout, and every sentence rhymes, almost magical."

"However, what I want to say more is that this song "Luzhou Moon" is different from many so-called national songs now!"

"Those national songs on the Internet now are made up of many ancient poems and verses, which make them unintelligible and disgusting!"

"However, the imagery of this song "Luzhou Moon" is completed in one go, and allusions are used throughout, but there is nothing blunt about it."

"This is the real national style song!"

"If you say that before, national style songs were just trails, and they couldn't stand on their own!"

"Then Qingyun Xiaoyou's song "Luzhou Moon" can be said to have created a new era of national style!"

"Little friend Qingyun has really elevated the national style music to a new level of style!"

The more Qian Muwen spoke, the more excited he became, and there was a rare dazzling light in his cloudy eyes.

He waved his hand excitedly:

"Thank you Qingyun for creating such a classic, and what's even more commendable is that it perfectly fits the classical and elegant charm of Luzhou."

"Luzhou got this "Luzhou Moon", and it should be a beautiful story through the ages."

After finishing speaking, old Mr. Qian Muwen stood up, walked tremblingly in front of Su Qingyun, and bowed heavily.

"Little friend Qingyun, thank you on behalf of Luzhou."

Seeing this, the other teachers didn't dare to be negligent, and followed suit one after another, bowing deeply to Su Qingyun.

"Thank you, student Su, for creating such a masterpiece for Luzhou."

This scene made Su Qingyun restless, and quickly helped Qian Muwen up:

"Everyone is serious, you really broke me like this."

Qian Muwen shook his head firmly, and said earnestly:

"Little friend, on the road of art, the master is the teacher!"

"With your talent, you can stand our worship."

Hearing Qian Muwen's words, Su Qingyun was a little apprehensive: "Old Qian, your reputation is too high, no matter what you say, you are an elder."

Seeing that Su Qingyun was a young genius, yet so humble, Qian Muwen felt even happier.

"Little friend, I have a granddaughter who is quite beautiful, with a good temperament and a gentle personality. Would you like to introduce me to you?"

After hearing this, Su Qingyun looked helpless: "Old Qian, I'm still young, and I don't want to get married so early!"

Qian Muwen said unwillingly: "My granddaughter used to be a college belle, she won't let you down."

Su Qingyun shook his head and said: "Men still have to put their career first, and I won't consider the matter of love for children for the time being!"

Qian Muwen sighed helplessly.

However, Lin Qingyin, a beautiful teacher at the side, had blushed to the base of her neck at some point, and her beautiful eyes would sneak glances at Su Qingyun from time to time.

It turns out that the beautiful teacher Lin Qingyin is the granddaughter Qian Muwen mentioned.

She was admitted to university at the age of 16.

Graduated with a master's degree at the age of 23.

Now working in Luzhou University.

In order to avoid suspicion, Mr. Qian never disclosed the relationship between the two in the school.

Lin Qingyin loves literature and is obsessed with learning.

Now at the age of 23, I have never been in a relationship.

This made Mr. Qian very anxious, and he also admired Su Qingyun from the bottom of his heart.

"Little friend Qingyun, if you can become my grandson-in-law, the life of this old man will be interesting."

Su Qingyun smiled lightly: "Mr. Qian, this kind of thing is about fate, you can't force it."

The two seemed to be chatting casually, but Lin Qingyin who was on the side felt ashamed and anxious.

But when she heard that Su Qingyun had no intention of having a relationship with a man and a woman, she felt a little lost again.

At this time, Yangmi on the side seemed a little jealous, grabbed Su Qingyun's arm, and said fiercely:

"Grandpa Qian, your business is over, we should go."

Qian Mu is an old man, so how can he not see Yang Mi's carelessness.