Salted fish opened an inn, and martial arts heroines came to stay

"First of all, the title of your book is too popular. If readers don't see the highlights, they won't be motivated to read it."

Lin Hainan pointed to the title of the book "Wulin Biography" on the first page and said.

"Then what kind of title should be used?"

Lu Xiucai blinked.

"For example, martial arts: kill eighteen masters instantly at the beginning, so it looks awesome, right?"

After thinking about it, Lin Hainan said.

"This seems a bit exaggerated..."

Lu Xiucai was a little dazed.

"It's not an exaggeration, our son can do it."

Baiyin blinked her innocent big eyes, and interjected.

"Look, right? Listen more to readers' feedback."

Lin Hainan shrugged.

"This is the title of the book, and in terms of content, what you wrote is too conservative."

Lin Hainan said while opening his manuscript.

"For example, in this place, "Lin Haibei cut the big tree in half with one sword."

Lin Hainan pointed to this sentence on the sixth page of the manuscript.

"Is there something wrong with this sentence?"

Lu Xiucai asked curiously.

"Of course! It's so uncommon to cut a big tree with one sword, it's too childish."

"It should be written like this: Lin Haibei raised his sword with both hands, and slashed at the big tree. He only heard a "click", and the big tree was split in half, just like splitting a piece of firewood."

"Then, the ground suddenly shook. After the rumbling sound, a big crack opened in the ground. At a glance, it was bottomless. Lin Haibei's sword actually cut out an abyss!"

Lin Hainan touched his chin and said.

"This is too exaggerated...I wrote about martial arts..."

Lu Xiucai almost dropped her jaw in shock.

"Hey, this is called Gao Wu, a high-level martial artist. Your style is outdated, Blue Bird, don't you think so?"

Lin Hainan turned his head to look at the blue bird.

"My lord is right. Low-level martial arts are outdated. A master standing at the top can already cut rivers with a sword and mountains with a palm."

Bluebird smiled slightly.

"Is it really......"

Lu Xiucai muttered in a low voice.

"Of course, what our son said is all right."

Baiyin interrupted again.

"Also, your writing is too long-winded when it comes to emotional scenes."

Lin Hainan turned to page No.18 in his manuscript.

"For example, what you wrote here, Lin Haibei spent a lot of effort and tried his best to catch up with the heroine. This is too troublesome. It should be written that the protagonist has a look, but she is so weak from electricity."

Lin Hainan knocked on the table and said.

"But she already has a fiancé, how could she be chased by the protagonist with just one look?"

Lu Xiucai's jaw dropped in shock.

"You are writing about the protagonist! Who dares to snatch the protagonist's woman? Just kill her fiancé with a sword."

Lin Hainan frowned.

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"Is that all right?"

Lu Xiucai was numb.

"Blue Bird, tell me, am I right?"

Lin Hainan turned his head to look at the blue bird again.

"Hehe, the young master is right. A true temperament that dares to love and hate is more attractive to women."

Qingniao covered her mouth and smiled, fully cooperating with Lin Hainan.

"If the protagonist is so decisive, I will like him."

Baiyin suddenly showed a nympho expression.

"Will readers find it unreal?"

Lu Xiucai still had some doubts.

"How many people still read novels with their brains now? How can it be fun if you don't exaggerate? How can readers laugh and scold you if you don't exaggerate?"

Lin Hainan laughed.

"Understood! Boss Lin's words woke me up! Isn't it just a cool word to read a novel? It doesn't matter if it's true or not!"

Lu Xiucai slapped the table and suddenly realized.

The bowl of tofu nao trembled a few times when he patted it.

"A child can be taught, you go back and change it, then take it to a bookstore and try it, it will be a big hit."

"If it doesn't work, bring it to me. I'll invest you 100 taels of silver and help you publish a book."

Lin Hainan put away the manuscript and stuffed it into his arms.

"With Boss Lin's words, I can rest assured, and I will go back and change it right away. Thank you, Boss Lin!"

Lu Xiucai immediately became full of confidence.

He ate the tofu nao in two or three bites, wiped his mouth, and trotted back to Tongfu Inn.

"My lord, I didn't expect you to have such a deep understanding of novels. Baiyin admires you more and more."

Baiyin looked at Lin Hainan with admiration.

"Hehe, since he uses me as the protagonist to write novels, of course he can write as good as he wants."

Lin Hainan laughed.

"So that's how it is, the young master is really smart!"

No matter what the angle, Baiyin can find opportunities to flatter her.

Blue Bird stood aside, holding his forehead with his hand, leaning his elbows on the table, trembling with laughter.

"Don't laugh, hurry up and eat, this tofu brain is cold."

Lin Hainan picked up the tofu nao in front of him and ate it.

In the distance, three people were watching this scene.

"Brother, this kid is really strange. He doesn't know martial arts, but he is accompanied by several half-step master beauties."

"Ah Er, there are countless strange people and strangers in the Jianghu, you must not underestimate anyone."

"Brother, what else can this little boy do? I think he only attracted so many beauties around him by relying on his face and smooth words."

"Ah San, if you think so, you underestimate him. If he only has face and sweet words, how can the princess be willing to be the shopkeeper of his inn?"

These three people are Ah Da Ah Er Ah San of Ruyang Palace.

They have been secretly inquiring about Zhao Min's situation in Qixia Town for the past few days.

When they learned that Zhao Min became the shopkeeper of Xianyu Inn, they were extremely surprised.

One must know that Zhao Min is the princess of the palace with a heart higher than the sky, how could he be willing to be the proprietor of a small inn?

When they learned that Lin Hainan was the real owner of the inn, they couldn't understand it even more.

Lin Hainan didn't seem to understand martial arts, and apart from being handsome and rich, he didn't have any special strengths.

Therefore, they changed the investigation target to Lin Hainan.

It turned out that, apart from sleeping late every day, Lin Hainan spent the rest of his time eating, drinking and having fun, and even went to brothels occasionally.

However, besides the half-step master Zhao Min, beside him, there are actually two other half-step masters who are beautiful and beautiful.

If Wanwan hadn't returned to the Yingui sect during this time, there would be three of them.

"Ah San, when will Master Ku Toutuo and Er Lao Xuanming arrive?" jj.br>

Ah Da turned to Ah San and asked.

"It should be here tonight."

Ah San replied.

"Okay, let's discuss the plan after they arrive."

A Da stared at Lin Hainan in the distance, and said slowly.

.......................

Night falls.

Tongfu Inn.

Tong Xiangyu and Lao Bai huddled at the counter, raised their heads, and looked upstairs with some doubts.

"Old Bai, what are the origins of the six people who just entered that room? There is so much evil spirit, as if they want to eat people."

Shopkeeper Tong peeked at the room on the second floor where the oil lamp was on, and whispered to Lao Bai beside him.

"Shh!"

Lao Bai quickly covered shopkeeper Tong's small mouth, and dragged her to the back kitchen.

"Take it easy, don't be so rude~"

Shopkeeper Tong blushed and muttered.

"I'm an ancestor, please keep your voice down."

Lao Bai's anxious eyes almost popped out.

"Those six people, if I'm not mistaken, are all master masters!"

"Anyone of them can beat me to death with a single punch."

Lao Bai put his mouth close to shopkeeper Tong's ear and said softly.

"Is it really that powerful?"

Shopkeeper Tong exclaimed in a low voice.

"Of course! It looks like a Mongolian person from the appearance and accent, and I don't know why I'm here."

Lao Bai pondered.

"Hey, who cares? For those who run an inn, just pay for the inn."

Shopkeeper Tong lightly flicked the silk scarf in his hand, and gave Lao Bai a white look.

In the room, those six menacing men were discussing something.

These six people are all subordinates of King Mengyuan Ruyang.

Three of them were Ah Da Er Ah San who had been in Qixia Town for a while.

Among the other three people, two of them are white-haired old men with dark eyes.

One of these two old men is called Luzhangke, holding a deer head short staff.

The other is called Crane Pen Weng, with two pens in his waist.

Although the weapons of both of them are very strange, but the most powerful martial arts of these two is palm technique.