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With the help of software, the translation speed is much faster.

The email was indeed sent by BANDAI. The general meaning above is this. BANDAI is very optimistic about the brief script of "DEATH-NOTE". It feels that the setting is very novel, and the plot of the characters is also quite good. However, due to the current situation in Japan, At least one formal and detailed short script can be approved upwards. This way, it is also convenient for the production team to make a project proposal. Therefore, BANDAI asked Ren Hao to produce several detailed storyboard scene scripts for review and review.

It is not difficult to see from the English script that Ren Hao is a layman, perhaps because he is afraid that he will not understand, so the definition and writing method of the storyboard script are also written below.

At the signing office, BANDAI gave him the email address of the review team, saying that the email address of the main website is too heavy, and it is not specially used for animation review, so it is very likely that the letters will be lost.

"So complicated?" Ren Hao pulled his hair frantically after reading the letter: "What storyboard script do you need?"

After a little research on the detailed description on the email, Ren Hao suddenly realized.He originally thought that the Chinese script was the Japanese script, just with a different name, but it was not the case.

Japanese animation script writers have too many things to do, because there are no live actors in the animation that can rely on acting skills to perform on the spot. The main thing is to formulate everything with the script and supervision (director). Therefore, in addition to the detailed plot direction, the script should reflect There are also many, many details, such as the subtle expression changes of the characters, the Japanese dialogue specific to each word, the simple environment description, and so on.

It seems that none of these details are missing.

Chapter 27 Fan the fan...

Sitting alone in front of the computer for a few minutes, Ren Hao suddenly thought that these text descriptions were all written in English, which should not save so much effort. More attention, which gave Ren Hao initial confidence, but he said that the storyboard script is really not that easy to write.

It is true that Ren Hao in his previous life was obsessed with animation, and he could clearly remember the plot direction and character relationships in it. However, he is just an ordinary person. Do you remember the facial expressions of the characters?

This time BANDAI presented Ren Hao with a big problem.

Copy the content of the email to WORD, disconnect the network, and turn off the computer.

Leaning against the back of the chair in a comfortable posture, Ren Hao turned the ballpoint pen back and forth in his hand, and forced a bitter smile at the notepad.

Recalling that when he was a publishing editor, Ren Hao often wrote some scattered novels, with tens of thousands of words in eloquence, without any effort at all.But a novel is a novel after all, and the author can pile up a complex story with a lot of words without any worries.

Animation doesn't work.

The difference between the two is that animation, regardless of the complexity of the story or the size of the world view, needs to achieve the key point-to use the most concise way to completely describe what it wants to describe and what must be explained. Express it fully.

Because of an animation of about 10 minutes per episode, time must not be wasted on explaining some irrelevant issues.

For example.

In the novel, two old friends meet by chance in a remote warehouse. Because of the need, the author of the novel will usually explain why the two came here by chance, their psychological activities, the purpose of coming here, etc. These can be It can be narrated in narration mode, and can also be slowly elicited in the form of dialogue flow.

But the animation doesn't work.

The animation needs to use a one-second storyboard to explain why the two came here. For example, one of the people's mobile phones appears in the screen, and it says "Come to the XXX warehouse, your sister was kidnapped by us", and then this shot needs to be added. The expression of the character above shows his psychology at this time, whether he is calm or nervous, and there are other actions, such as a hand in his pocket, and a knife protruding from the pocket. Finally, and most importantly, two old friends use The simplest and most direct dialogue allows the other party to let the judges lying in front of the TV know something they must know.

The novel is tens of thousands of words, and the animation is only a few seconds.

Undoubtedly, these are the things that script writers have to do.

If you have the basis of drawing comics and experience in writing light novels, these are not difficult, because animation is the evolution of the streamlined model of manga and light novels, but Ren Hao is the kind who can only read but not write guy.

A headache!

Annoyed eyes drifted back and forth, and suddenly landed on Kingsoft PowerWord next to the computer desk. Ren Hao frowned, pondered for a long time, and then quickly relaxed.

Got it!

With a swipe, Ren Hao picked up the CD case and went to Aunt Rong's house.

As a publishing editor, you will inevitably come into contact with many types of books, whether it is online novels or traditional novels.But because Ren Hao is not used to biting words, he just writes online articles in his spare time.

But Aunt Rong is different. Several of her books are traditional literature, not to mention concise, but also very connotative. Perhaps Aunt Rong can grasp the most important things in animation?

"Aunt Rong, I need your help. Is it convenient for you now?"

Fan Qirong, who was wearing a light white long dress, was eating a meal with spinach and bean products on the writing table, all of which were vegetarian.Aunt Rong put down her chopsticks when she heard this, and wiped the corner of her mouth with a flowered handkerchief: "Just tell me if you have something to do, Auntie just finished eating."

Turning his gaze around Aunt Rong's plump body, Ren Hao quickly stepped forward, "Have you watched animation?"

Fan Qirong hesitated for a moment, then Fang gave Ren Hao an answer that made him dumbfounded: "I've seen it, but I've seen it, um, gourd baby, you're making trouble in the Heavenly Palace..."

"Uh..." Ren Hao wiped off his sweat: "It's not that, the animation I'm talking about refers to Japanese animation."

Fan Qirong looked at him, and shook her head thoughtfully.

"What about comics?"

"nor."

Ren Hao smacked his lips and scratched his head and said, "I want to write a script. I have probably thought about the plot flow and the relationship between the characters, but I can't write the most critical dialogue in it. How about I tell you a small plot, and you write it down." look?"

Fan Qirong saw that he was so caring, and slowly nodded her head: "Auntie can only say try it."

BANDAI's requirement is several storyboards, and Ren Hao estimated that a small plot would be enough, so he described to Aunt Rong the jokes in the previous episodes, when Ye Shenyue dealt with the police and eliminated her suspicion.

After hearing this, Aunt Rong went through the plot in her mind, and then began to write.The more Ren Hao watched, the more surprised he became, and hurriedly stopped her with a cough: "Aunt Rong, don't need connotations in the dialogue. It's fine if you can explain the incident clearly in a few sentences. It should be concise, and it should be more popular." Although Japanese animation likes to play with some Seemingly esoteric things are half-understood, but in comparison, these few sentences written by Aunt Rong may still be a bit too obscure.

"Well, then try again, auntie."

"You've worked hard, worked hard." Ren Hao went to get a fan from the bed with some flattery, and sat on a small stool beside her, fanning Aunt Rong's cool breeze all the time.

Although the fan is small, the wind is quite strong.

Ren Hao inadvertently discovered that the small wind blowing from his angle could actually flap Aunt Rong's side skirt, exposing her white thighs in front of his eyes.

Ren Hao swallowed and spit, feeling a little excited, a sense of tension like peeping spread all over his body in an instant, after he watched Aunt Rong didn't notice, he pretended to be very casual and continued to fan, this time the goal was to Skirts can be worn up the thighs, or simply let them float.

For the first time, Ren Hao was afraid that Aunt Rong would find out, so he didn't dare to use too much force.I saw the loose pleated skirt fluttering inward, and Aunt Rong's entire right knee was exposed.

Stimulate!

Ren Hao slapped the second time nervously, this time with a little more force.The little skirt fluttered again, swishing, and moved a little bit towards Aunt Rong's waist, half of her white, tender and plump thighs were exposed.

Ren Hao slapped it for the third time with straight eyes, this time quite forcefully, the hem of the skirt suddenly flew into the air, and the edge of the white lace could be vaguely seen...

"Ren Hao! What are you doing!"

Suddenly, Fan Qirong's sullen voice came straight to her. She pressed the hem of her skirt on her lap and looked at him with frowns. Obviously, Fan Qirong discovered Ren Hao's little plot.

Ren Hao suddenly woke up, sweating profusely, turned to concentrate, blinked his eyes pretending to be calm: "I, I didn't do anything, I was fanning you, haha, haha, ah, Aunt Rong, you finished writing Is it gone?"

Chapter 28 PublicationEdit

Staring at him for a long time, Fan Qirong, who had a faint melancholy between her brows, sighed quietly, and slowly turned her head away: "Auntie finished writing, what does it mean to you?" There seemed to be no anger in the words.

Ren Hao felt a little relieved, then leaned his head over and looked at it tremblingly.

After a long while, Ren Hao exclaimed again and again: "Aunt Rong, you are a genius, this is the situation I want, it's great!" At a glance, even the embarrassment just now was forgotten.

Due to the short time, Aunt Rong only wrote about five shots of the script, but this has already surprised Ren Hao. Although there is no scene description, no character expressions and movements, the language of the characters definitely reaches Ren Hao's Require.

If it is written in this way, Ren Hao only needs to add blood and flesh, add the environment, scenes and character expressions, and then complete the dialogues of the anime characters in his own memory, and it will definitely be at least 70.00% the same as the original "DEATH-NOTE". of similarity.

Of course, there is no problem with the direction of the plot. The remaining 30.00% is just a slight discrepancy in the language dialogue, which will not affect too much.Besides, the dialogue written by the scripter may not always be used, it depends on the meaning of supervision, they are responsible for controlling the overall situation, and they are also professional.

"Aunt Rong..." Ren Hao looked at her with some embarrassment: "Well, I will write this short paragraph in detail later, if you have time, can you help me write out all the plot dialogues, the very Okay, you can follow this, just write the dialogue, hehe, thank you, Aunt Rong."

Ren Hao also felt that it was inappropriate to lick his face and beg someone just after peeping. After all, Aunt Rong has her own job.

"You write this to make money, right?"

Ren Hao didn't intend to hide it from Fan Qirong, so he nodded his head lightly.

Fan Qirong looked at him slowly: "It's too early for you to make money. Auntie said something you don't like to hear. After all, you have too little experience, so the things you write are naturally less flavorful. Presumably, the animations you make It's the same, Aunt Rong can help you, but these weird plots, well, anyway, I don't see its future."

The so-called three-year-old generation gap, coupled with the influence of traditional Chinese culture, Fan Qirong naturally can't understand the self-cultivation of an animation that purely uses a notebook to kill people. Aunt Rong is merciful when she says it has no future.

Ren Hao turned serious: "Animation is just a fun thing to watch. This "DEATH-NOTE" has no educational significance, it is purely a kind of sensory entertainment. Aunt Rong, you are engaged in literature, so it is normal to dislike these things. .”

Fan Qirong shook her head, she was about to touch Ren Hao's head out of habit, but she took it back for some reason when she reached the air, "Auntie has no other intentions, how old are you, just write these murder stories , It’s really not good, um, and the visual medium of film and television is different from novels. It has a lot of restrictions, and the country will not approve things that are slightly out of line. You said you wrote these, if no one buys them, Isn't it wasted effort?"

Fan Qirong was really right. The animated version of "DEATH-NOTE" was "harmoniously" deleted by the Chinese government before the serialization was completed.

"The national conditions are different, so the restriction scale is naturally different. Aunt Rong, don't worry, this animation will definitely become popular. When the time comes, I will give you the money first."

Ren Hao acted like a good boy.

Seeing that Fan Qirong couldn't persuade him, she had no choice but to give up.

……

The next day, Aunt Rong completed the work that Ren Hao had given her.

Ren Hao knew that he could not rely too much on Aunt Rong, and while slowly filling in the storyboard script, he also kept learning Aunt Rong's language, to see how she managed to bring out several huge plots in a few words, so He also practiced his brushwork, taking pictures of cats and tigers, drawing inferences from one instance, and Ren Hao somewhat improved.

"Aunt Rong, I've filled out a few paragraphs. Let's see how it goes." Ren Hao handed the notebook to Fan Qirong, who was half leaning on the bedside: "After adding facial expressions, some dialogues seem inappropriate, um, Most of them I can manage to fix by myself, but I have to trouble you for the rest."

It's already eight o'clock in the morning, and Aunt Rong looks like she has worked all night.

"Okay, Auntie, take a look." Fan Qirong gently took the notebook and began to savor it carefully.Not long after, Aunt Rong's eyes fell on Ren Hao's face with a little surprise: "You really wrote this?"

"Yes." Ren Hao nodded of course.

Fan Qirong looked him up and down as if she had never seen him before: "I don't like the storyline of this script, but your writing is very good, very old-fashioned and very flavorful, Hao, your junior high school composition aunt also read it, The plot is naive, the text is pale, and there is no merit at all, but this short paragraph is quite different, just like something that has been tempered and precipitated, um, it really has such a taste, not bad, not bad."

Ren Hao is not a person who likes to show off, but listening to future great writers praising him, it would be a lie to say that he is not satisfied.

"You won the prize."

"But..." Fan Qirong frowned slowly: "No matter how you look at it, this doesn't look like something written by a middle school student?"

"Oh, that, I read a lot recently, and my style is also like a cat and a tiger."

After Ren Hao fooled it, Aunt Rong began to change the previous conversation according to his new request.

During this time, Ren Hao ran to her desk and quietly read Aunt Rong's novel, a traditional novel that will be popular in the future.

Ren Hao had read Aunt Rong's book more than once in his previous life, and this time he read it again, not for taste, but to find faults for her, so as to make the novel more perfect and shorten the time for Aunt Rong to finish the book.

This is the only way Ren Hao can help her.

……

"Hao, Auntie changed it."

"Thank you, Aunt Rong." Ren Hao walked to the bedside with the novel in his hand, "You will be able to finish the book in a month, and I will help you pick out the mistakes, after all, some problems are difficult to find from the author's own point of view. "Analyzing books is Ren Hao's specialty, which is the fundamental reason why he can tell whether Aunt Rong's language is good or bad, but he can't write the script himself.

If others listened to this self-deprecating words, they would laugh their heads off, after all, Ren Hao is only a freshman in high school.

"Oh? Pick me up?" Fan Qirong looked at him in surprise, "Okay, then... then I'll leave it to you." It can be seen that Fan Qirong didn't take his words seriously.

In fact, when it comes to literary skills, Ren Hao is not as good as Gu Yueyan, and when it comes to writing, Ren Hao is not as good as Fan Qirong, but if you want to pick a mistake after reading an article, I am afraid that the combined strength of the two of them is not as good as Ren Hao. one.

Ren Hao worked as a review editor for a long time when he first entered the publishing house, and he is a professional in this field.

Chapter 29 The Inexplicable Business

At noon that day, my uncle first called Ren Hao's family, and then knocked on the door with my aunt around 12:30.

"Sister, is Xiao Hao there?" Zhuo Qian hurriedly looked for Ren Hao as soon as he entered the door, as if something happened.

"Here, I'm playing computer in the back room." When Zhuo Qian went to the back room, Zhuo Yuqin was quite worried and pulled Xu Mei to sit on the small bed: "Has the matter of Qianzi been resolved?"

Xu Mei sighed heavily: "Not only is it not resolved, it may even be more troublesome, alas, this time I can only resign myself to fate."

At the same time, Zhuo Qian was also discussing this topic with Ren Hao: "Xiao Hao, Jiang Wei's parents said he was fine, is it true or not?"

Ren Hao smiled at him apologetically: "To be honest, it's fake. I just lied to you to come back quickly so that we can discuss this issue. Please don't be angry, brother-in-law, and tell me what's wrong?"

Zhuo Qian's face changed for a while, and after a while, he sighed softly: "Recently, the contracts of three companies have expired, and we have been cooperating well. According to common sense, the contracts should be renewed, but they all called just now. It seems that you don't want to continue, Xiaohao, what do you mean by tricking uncle back?"

Ren Hao is also quite strange, Xie Zhijing told her to leave the matter to her, but it has been two days, why hasn't it been resolved yet?

"Forget it, let's not talk about it for now. I asked them to have dinner, so let's go and find out."

"Uncle, take me with you."

"Your uncle is busy, why are you making trouble!"

Ren Xueyu glared at his son, and Zhuo Yuqin, who came in from the outer room, also frowned and winked at Ren Hao.They didn't understand why Ren Hao suddenly became ignorant today.

Regarding Ren Hao's initiative to invite Ying, Zhuo Qian could only shake his head, one size counts for one size, it's one thing to love him, but it's about business, so naturally it's not easy to bring him along.Zhuo Qian couldn't think of what a half-old child could do.

"Just take me to the market."

Under Ren Hao's repeated begging, Zhuo Qian hesitated for a long time, Fang reluctantly agreed, led Ren Hao up to Santana 2000, and went straight to the hotel he had agreed upon.

At that time, although the Santana was a mid-range car, it was not a car that could not stand on the table.

On the way, Ren Hao borrowed his uncle's mobile phone and dialed the phone number Xie Zhijing left earlier.

"Hello."

"Aunt Jing, it's me."