My wife is not a demon
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After finishing speaking, Chen Mu bowed his head again.
The woman's raised arm froze, and slowly, it wrapped around the man's neck like a snake...
Non-update, casual chat
Don't be nervous, every time I post a single chapter, some book friends are nervous, thinking that Dou Sprout needs eunuchs again, is it so scary? (cover face)
Let me talk about the latest plot. The status of the past two days (yesterday and today) is not particularly good. It is almost twelve o’clock after the update in the evening. Fortunately, there is an outline of the case. It only needs to add things, but it is also quite laborious.
Maybe these chapters are a bit scattered, and the emotional portrayal of the characters is a bit heavy, and the rhythm has slowed down again, but the foreshadowing is basically buried, just take it easy, and I have already written the murderer behind the scenes. will be revealed.
The second master, the maid, the young master, the ghost bride, Lin Mengyuan, the eldest lady of the Lin family, the massacre of the Hong family, Yinlian, and the murder of a woman in the Town God's Temple in the previous chapter are basically linked together.
After the final case is over, the mystery of the marriage contract between Bai Xianyu and Chen Mu will also be revealed.
Today, my head was foggy and my mood was a little irritable. In the afternoon, I simply read the comments and scolded some trolls a few times. My mood was inexplicably relieved. I felt like I was staying up late three or four years ago and scolding trolls. situation.
I also saw some comments from book friends scolding each other, some of them were deleted, and some chapters had too many comments.
Of course, I also saw suggestions and doubts from many book friends.
For example, I also went back and looked at some contradictions in the article. If there are problems, I will try to modify them as much as possible.
There are also some so-called poison spots.
For example, the character of the protagonist, the setting of the heroine, etc.
This is the benevolent see the benevolent and the wise see wisdom, but there are indeed some contradictions about the character of the protagonist.
At the beginning, I didn't intend to make him a scumbag character, but a very serious character, because in recent years, single heroine and no heroine are popular.
Basically, if the male protagonist in any online article shows ambiguity towards other women, it must be poisonous.Many authors are even afraid of being sprayed, and directly stated in the introduction: There is no heroine in this book or there is only one heroine in this book.
So that's how I set it up at first.
However, after setting up the outline and writing a few chapters, I finally found that I, an Lsp, can't play the innocent man anymore, and the author can't face the restless heart.
Simply changed the character of the hero.
Before the modification, I also read a lot of cases of scumbags, trying to eliminate some unreasonable behaviors, so some people will feel that the character of the male protagonist in the early stage is a bit contradictory.
The other is the male lead's feelings for the female lead. In the early stage, many people complained about licking dogs or something, which was too poisonous.
It depends on your personal mood and understanding.
I originally planned to explain it in detail in the testimonial on the day it was put on the shelf, but in the end I gave up, since it has already been written, it is useless to talk about it.
In addition, there is another purpose of modifying the character of the protagonist, which is for cheating.
When I wrote the article, I found that no matter the protagonist is handling a case, picking up girls, or pretending to be aggressive, some professional knowledge is required.
But how can this professional knowledge be reflected in a person.
Forensic?police?professor?
In the end, I simply took advantage of it and used the golden finger of 'ex-girlfriend' to explain why the protagonist knows so much.
Since there are so many ex-girlfriends, the protagonist must be a playboy.
Therefore, after the protagonist travels through time, it is difficult to change his nature for a while, and he is bound to tease some girls.
This is also the reason why Bean Sprouts emphasized many times in the article that Chen Mu wanted to restrain himself, but he couldn't help flirting with other women. After all, a dog can't change Chixiang. _
There is another poison point that I noticed before writing the article.
That is, the strength value of the protagonist in the early stage is very bad. According to normal logic, if he investigated the case like this, he would have died a hundred times earlier.
So I set up the second cheat - rebirth.
My force is scum, but I can't die.
Even for this 'rebirth' cheat, I will explain in a reasonable later stage why Chen Mu was reborn.
Although it can be reborn, but the strength is so scumbag.
In the later stage, the protagonist will definitely rise.
After all, he will provoke more big shots and attract many masters. In order to protect the people around him, he must become a master.
And then there's the third cheat - venom.
And this "venom" comes from the apocalypse big bang, I changed it according to the real events of the Ming Dynasty, and will reveal the secret later.
Let's talk about other poisonous points.
Meng Yanqing.
This has been discussed by many people. After all, she is the protagonist's subordinate and brother's mother. The protagonist even flirts with her, which is really too much.
Bean sprouts also considered this issue before writing, knowing that it will cause a lot of controversy.
But after much hesitation, I finally wrote it.
One reason is that in a later case, Zhang Awei has a big role in the scene, and there will be a major reversal of the character's identity.
Secondly, the author was reading a book of Liu Bei's article on a certain forum in the past few days.
I can't stop looking at a mature young woman inside.
Simply setting up such a character can be regarded as selfish, and the character is also copied from the original.
Xue Caiqing.
This is also a little poison.
Apart from her identity as Lala, she was a murderer after all, having killed the former Chen Mu.
It's too unfair to the former Chen Mu to be alive and kicking like this.
In the original outline, after the Ju Chunlou case is over, her role is over, and she will not appear again later.
But Bean Sprouts finally decided to continue the role because of her name.
It was the name of the heroine of the first book I ever made in Outer Station.
It's a commemoration.
At the same time, "Chen Mu's death" actually has a small reversal, I have already planted the foreshadowing, (ps: Xu Guifei gave birth to a child who is a fool, does not cry or make trouble, just like a puppet.)
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