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He continued to drag the mouse to move down, and found that many people also expressed the same opinion, and left messages and replies in a hurry.

"This story is so scary. I made an appointment with my friends to go to the zoo, but after reading it, I dare not go."

"That's right, when I go to sleep at night, the scene of a rotting corpse always appears in my mind, which scares me so much that I don't feel sleepy at all."

"Is it that scary? I'll buy a book tomorrow..."

Seeing the reactions of these readers, Hiroto Akihara was a little speechless. Is it that scary? After all, it's just a novel, not a horror movie.But he is also a little proud, after all, it is also a skill to scare readers.

He looked it over and found that there was no profound insight, so he closed this post and opened another one, only to find that these people were discussing himself.

"Ms. Akihara is a pervert, otherwise he would not be able to write such an article."

"I wonder if he put himself into the perspective of a murderer. He loved his girlfriend so much, but he still killed her."

"Ask upstairs, does he have a girlfriend? Where did the news come from?"

"There should be, but I don't know if he is still alive. After all, it is difficult for the police to find out if a reasoning writer like this kills people?"

"It's unlikely. If the police want to investigate, it shouldn't be difficult."

Hiroto Akihara was complaining powerlessly, feeling that he was labeled as a murderer after writing a novel, and since he came to this world, he had never even had a girlfriend, so where did the target of the murder come from?

After thinking about it, he registered an account named "Miyamura Yisumi" for himself, and replied at the end of the post:

"According to inside information, Mr. Qiuyuan doesn't have a girlfriend, so there's no need to guess upstairs. And even if the mystery novelist committed a crime, it's only a matter of time before the police want to investigate."

After he finished replying, he closed the forum homepage, leaned back on the chair, and began to ponder other questions seriously.

Although many readers responded on the forum that they thought the story was scary, these readers would continue to buy, barring any surprises.Just like fans of some horror movies, although they are often scared, they are often happy while being scared.

After all, judging from the feedback received from readers before, his works are very popular, which proves this.

So, do you want to add some horror elements to the story content for the current fan base?

He sat on the chair and thought for a while, then stood up and walked around twice. After thinking about it for a long time, he finally gave up on this plan.

The most important thing in the article is the main line of the story, clearly explaining the time, place, characters and the plot of the story. If some horror elements are rashly added in order to please the readers, it may destroy the connotation of the story.

At that time, it is very likely that both sides will be displeased. It will neither please the readers who like horror elements, but also dissatisfy the readers who want to read the story in its entirety.

He gave up this idea and planned to go home and continue to work-his adaptation work has encountered a lot of difficulties now, and he needs to think more carefully about how to do it...

Maybe, ask Asano Aiko for a favor?

But would it be bad to ask for such a thing?

[46.Chapter 46 I want to surrender]

Early the next morning, Asano Aiko drove to Akihara Yuto's residence, and took the manuscripts of the last two issues from him.

Although she was mentally prepared, she couldn't help being surprised by Akihara Yuto's talent after seeing the contents of the manuscript.

These two issues of manuscripts tell two stories, the titles of which are "Looking for Blood" and "White House in the Icy Forest".

The protagonist of "Looking for Blood" is an old man who lost his sense of pain. He woke up one morning when he heard a knock on the door, and when he opened the door, he found that it was his youngest son.

The younger son walked into the room and found the old man covered in blood. He walked behind the old man and was surprised to find a knife stuck in it.Panicked, the youngest son immediately called other family members and family doctors, and called an emergency number.

While waiting for the ambulance, the wife and the eldest son started arguing over the property when they saw that the old man was unlikely to be rescued.The family doctor suddenly told the old man that the backup blood source he had prepared could save the old man's life, but unexpectedly disappeared.

In order to survive, the old man used his inheritance as a bargaining chip and ordered his wife, eldest son, and younger son to look for blood bags, but they failed to find them for a long time.

At this time, the old man found a clue, realized that the blood bag might be in his room, and ordered his younger son to get it.

After the younger son brought the blood bag, the family doctor told the old man that the blood bag was empty.

The old man fell into despair, but other family members discussed insurance and even argued about property as if nothing had happened.The old man's consciousness gradually blurred, and all the memories involuntarily began to play back, and clues emerged.

As he slept, the killer spilled bags of blood on him through a window next to his bed.Then go into the room to wake him up and tell him that he is covered in blood.When he looked out the door in panic, the murderer stabbed the kitchen knife in his back again.Because the old man doesn't have the ability to feel pain, he doesn't know it.

Therefore, the person who discovered the old man's injury at the first time was the real murderer.

Although the old man knew the murderer, he did not expose him, but laughed instead.Amidst the surprise and incomprehension of his family, he closed his eyes forever.

The second story is called "The White House in the Icy Forest" and it tells the story of a boy.

The boy lived in the stable of his aunt's family since he was a child. Not only did he have to undertake tiring work, but he was often abused by his aunt's family. Only the aunt's daughter cared about him.

When the boy grows up to be a man, he is driven out of the stable by his aunt and starts wandering in the forest.He wants to build his own house in the forest, but lacks the corresponding materials.

In order to obtain materials, men began to kill pedestrians, and the torsos of pedestrians were made into foundations, walls, and even roofs of houses.In the end, he finally built his own house - a house where you can see countless pairs of eyes when you open your eyes.

One day, a girl came to the house, and she asked the man to return her brother's body to her.In order to prove her sincerity, she deliberately stood where her brother's body had been, serving as a part of the wall.

As time passed, the girl lost her own life in the cold and hunger.

The man was a little touched, and he decided to agree to the girl's request during her lifetime.He demolished the house, put the bodies of the girl and her brother in a wooden box, and sent them to the home she said.

It turned out that the girl's mother was the only aunt and daughter who cared about her before...

Both stories are satirically themed, with a slightly different style from the four previous installments.However, the horror connotation in the story is still the same.

Aiko Asano was a little amazed after reading it. After she and Akihara Yuto have been connected for so long, she knew that the other party's personality was very easy-going, and she had nothing to do with the legendary psychopath.

But she still wondered why the article written by Hiroto Akihara can make people feel a kind of creepy feeling from the heart?

Is this the talent of genius?

Or is Akihara a potential criminal?

After she finished the manuscript, she turned her head to look at Akihara Yuto, and found that he was already sitting at the desk, frowning as if he was thinking about something.

She guessed that the other party encountered some difficulties in writing, so she gently put away the manuscript and left the room quietly.

……

Akihara Yuto didn't know that Asano Aiko had left, and he encountered difficulties at the moment.

There are too many things to consider when adapting a foreign work into a local work of Neon, which makes his progress very slow.

He pondered for a while, thinking that he should go to the library a few more times to see how other people write mystery novels.

After all, this is a parallel world, and there are many excellent works to learn from.

He called Asano Aiko and asked for another two weeks' leave, which she readily approved.

After obtaining the permission, Hiroto Akihara started his daily two-point and one-line life in the library and home again, eagerly acquiring the knowledge he wanted from the pile of books.

During his "recharging" period, the reputation of "New Novel" has further developed.