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So they simply reassured the neighbor who called the police and informed the old man's daughter.

But among these police officers, a new recruit felt that something was wrong.

According to people familiar with the matter nearby, the old man's daughter would visit and take care of the old man every once in a while, but the other party didn't even know why the old man's body smelled bad.

In addition, a notebook was found at the scene, but it was basically blank except for the name of the old man's daughter.But other than that, there was a piece of paper on it that was mutilated.

These two doubts kept the newly recruited policeman struggling.But when he told his superiors about these things, he was told that the old man obviously hanged himself, so one thing more is worse than one thing less.

The new policeman was aggrieved, and decided to investigate privately. After a series of tracking and investigation, he finally learned the truth.

Because the old man's daughter couldn't bear the hard work of taking care of the old man, she quietly wrote "I hope the old man commits suicide" in her notebook. In addition, she even put the rope and other tools in a position where the old man can find them. Kitchen nook.

In this way, in order not to drag his daughter down, the old man directly chose to end his life and ended his life with a rope.

After obtaining the evidence and confession, the new police immediately reported these to their superiors and arrested the old man's daughter.

But just when the inspector was about to appeal and sentence the old man's daughter on the charge of "inducing suicide", the new policeman got a new news from the hospital.

That is, the day before the old man committed suicide, she had already learned from the hospital that she was suffering from cancer. In order not to burden her daughter, she decided to end her life...

And the rope she used to commit suicide was purchased by herself, not provided by her daughter.

But at this time the charge has been confirmed and cannot be changed.

The superiors warned the new policeman that if he dared to do such unnecessary things, he would be dismissed or dispatched.

When faced with his own interests, this new policeman who firmly believes in "justice" fell into hesitation...

……

Hiroto Akihara read the whole story, feeling an indescribable feeling in his heart.

The newly recruited policeman insisted on justice at the beginning, and even disobeyed his superiors, and through continuous efforts, he sent the murderer in his eyes to prison.

But the facts he investigated were all wrong.The real reason for the old man's suicide was likely to be her own decision, not the result of her daughter's induction.

But by this time, the prosecutor had already made a corresponding verdict based on the suspect's confession provided by the new policeman.If the sentence is changed, everyone, including the new policeman, will have to bear considerable responsibilities.

All in all, this work is more satire than reasoning.

In it, the police department's perfunctory, children's impatience in taking care of the elderly, and the protagonist's hesitation in dealing with others' justice and his own interests are all included.

……

Miho Toyama saw that Hiroto Akihara had finished reading the work, took a closer look, and then asked cautiously: "Mr. Akihara, do you think this work can make a debut?"

Hiroto Akihara hesitated for a while, and then gave a pertinent answer: "Debut is enough, but I think there are still some problems."

Toyama Miho became serious, and then asked: "Mr. Akihara, please correct me, don't worry about my feelings."

Hiroto Akihara nodded, and began to express his point of view.

"About the protagonist, he is too abrupt in terms of human nature, and there is a feeling of inconsistency. For example, he can uphold justice at the beginning, but he hesitates when it comes to his own interests, so a background should be added for him."

Toyama Miho nodded suspiciously, waiting for Akihara Yuto to continue.

"For example, the theme of this article is a mother, so you can add the background of a very close and seriously ill mother to the policeman. At the beginning, he thought of his mother, so he kept pursuing the murderer. But in the end, he I have to consider the trouble my mother may cause from my unemployment, so I hesitated, so everything is very reasonable."

Miho Toyama listened very carefully. After all, although her father was a professor in the Department of Literature, he only had deep research on literary theory.For specific literary creation, the level is actually limited.

Hiroto Akihara finished talking about the protagonist, and then talked about the trick design technique, pointing out that the woman's idea of ​​making her mother commit suicide through the diary is too abrupt, and a step-by-step step should be added.For example, the relationship between mother and daughter has always been good, the mother does not bear the suffering of her daughter, the mother's own background and so on.

In this way, the reader will be able to mentally approve of the induced murder trick.

Toyama Miho was completely convinced. She thought that after a lot of thinking, this work was said to be foolproof, but she didn't expect to be picked out so many faults.

It seems that compared with a well-known writer like Mr. Akihara, he is still too far behind.The other party's guidance saved me a lot of effort.

However, is there any way to let the other party guide yourself more?

Toyama Miho hesitated for a while, then immediately made a decision.She knelt down with her knees together, and under Akihara Hiroto's surprised eyes, she made a Dogeza pose.

"Teacher Qiuyuan, although it's too abrupt, I want to ask you... can you accept me as a disciple?"

[Chapter 190.189 "The Man Who Knows Everything"]

Hiroto Akihara didn't expect Miho Toyama to "Dogeza" and become a teacher, and he didn't know how to react for a while.

In Neon, the master-apprentice system is not a new thing: from Japanese materials to Japanese cross talk, from comics to Go, there are all kinds of famous teacher-student cases.

The literary world is no exception.

In the previous life, Akutagawa Ryunosuke, who wrote "Rashomon", was appreciated by Natsume Soseki and accepted as his disciple. The two of them supported half of the Japanese literary world at that time.

The works of Ryunosuke Akutagawa fascinated Osamu Dazai and had a great influence on the latter's literary style.

In addition, Yukio Mishima and the author Yasunari Kawabata are also teachers and friends. The two were shortlisted for the Nobel Prize, but only the latter won the award.

But the choice of life, both of them chose to commit suicide in the end.

Having said that, should I consider accepting the other party as a disciple?

Akihara Hiroto frowned, weighing the pros and cons.

In terms of talent, the other party must have no problem.

Not only did he pass the independent enrollment of Dongda University, but he also wrote such a work full of humanity and irony before he officially entered the university. Even if he submitted a manuscript to some journals, he would have no problem making his debut.

Thinking about how old I was in my previous life, I was still struggling to write the "5-year college entrance examination and 3-year simulation" of the Zhejiang Education Edition every day, right?

If the other party can continue to climb up in the literary world in the future, then as a teacher, he will probably gain a lot of reputation.

But wouldn't that be too "peach-picking"?

In other words, what can I offer the other party?

Akihara Hiroto thought for a while, and felt that he still had a lot of things to give to the other party.

In the field of reasoning literature, all I have read are works from another world. There are many tricks and writing that do not exist in this world. Some of the writing concepts and skills in it can be taught to the other party.

In addition, from the perspective of a senior reader, I can make various judgments and corrections on the other party's works, and provide the other party with some platforms for contribution and writing on the channel.

Hiroto Akihara made up his mind, and then glanced at Miho Toyama.

The other party knelt on the ground quietly, staring at the ground, without saying a word, as if waiting for Hiroto Akihara to make a decision.

Akihara Yuto didn't help her, after all, it's useless, but asked: "Miss Yuanshan... don't you need to discuss this matter with your father?"

After all, Shuichi Toyama is a professor of the Faculty of Letters at Kyoto University, and he has a lot of contacts. What if the other party wants to introduce a better teacher to his daughter?